I Have a Message for Heaven

After reading Chapter 7, I can only say that it is not suitable for me. I couldn't stick to the first seven chapters, so I decided to skip this chapter. The preface does not match the postscript very seriously, and many things are not explained clearly. Lingbao, who has been around for who knows how many years, will he be moved by admitting his mistake because you said, "You won't give up your friends because of money?" To put it bluntly, what is the attraction of RMB to immortals? Are you moved by something you despise? Poison hair, dodge people.

Slipping away, poisonous, messy

In the plot of Huaguo Mountain, I personally suggest that if the author wants to describe some people in reality who have acquired power and have expanded their powers, it is better to write him to death instead of writing about breaking and then standing up. I think many readers are subconsciously tired of that woman, but there is a break and then stand up later. If we really compare it with reality, the person who led the team is definitely not a post-90s generation. What are you doing when you are less than 30?

It's your kid who brought the spiritual energy here That's right, Heaven asked me to bring you a message Oh, what did you say Tian Dao said that as long as you serve Heaven well, you will become an immortal just around the corner.

To be honest, I think you don't need to give special treatment to Chinese people, because China has a lot of things about cultivating immortals. Once spiritual energy is revived, China will become a developed country cultivating immortals, while Europe and the United States will become developing countries cultivating immortals.

I am very interested in this type of book and hope to continue writing it. Also, don't show some poisonous points (such as having a harem, being unable to walk around when seeing a woman, revealing your identity to others, exposing yourself). The protagonist can just make a fortune in a low voice, and leave the pretense to the vest.

What you wrote is the spokesperson of Heaven! Can you set your sights higher? What auctions are you going to attend? This old routine from a few years ago is really disgusting! And the bar part! Really disgusting! You are the spokesperson of heaven! What a person who wants to develop the path to immortality (cultivating immortality)! It's not a cat or a dog! After the lunar dojo was built, a consensus was reached between the lunar and high-level government officials! The high point of the pattern is the same as the whole world! Relying on the protagonist to run on his own is really too low-end like now! Having said all this, I still hope to publish a good book! Otherwise, you'll never see it again! I don't know if you will see it! I said what needed to be said! What you wrote is the spokesperson of Heaven! It feels like the main character in the book is besides the moon! He doesn't look like a spokesperson for heaven at all! It's really disappointing! I didn't see the big picture, big means, and big construction that I imagined! It's like an urban novel! Well!

I updated it after reading it. I specially wrote my thoughts after reading it The writing is okay, but the plot needs to be strengthened.

If I don't reward and collect the author, I won't pin it to the top. If I reward and collect the author, I won't pin it to the top. So isn't my reward and collection in vain?

I read it, and the author's subject matter is very good. But this auction is really poisonous. The strong character is gone in an instant, the way of heaven emphasizes the equality of all living beings. If you need money, just buy some jade or something. It's so disgusting and extraordinary that I bought it for sale. Still selling money? . What about the small plane of the moon that has been laid out for a long time? Just gone? Let us make up our mind? I also want to see the country's expression when they discover this plane. As a result, there will be an auction later. The Chaofan came out in front, but the Sword Immortal came out behind and couldn't compete at all. Author, I can only say that you are still too young. No outline?

I have only one plea! If you don't like the book, you can criticize it at will. I will usually reply and improve it! But I will not accept personal attacks such as verbal insults! Also, if you book friends scold me, don't mind if I yell back at you. Don't worry, I won't delete any comments, even if they are curse words!

Author, please don't give up! A good book is rare!

I can't say it's particularly exciting, but it's definitely much better than the first volume! I insist on writing it down, book friends might as well read it for a few more minutes! Anyway, there are only 10,000 to 20,000 words more, maybe you will like it again!

The mastermind behind Reiki Resurrection actually has a lot of flaws in this book. The setting is very uncomfortable╯╰Whether you learn Tao or not, it has nothing to do with the Tao of Heaven. Even after all human beings die, the Tao will still exist. This should be a concern for the Taoist founders. The plot setting, in fact, Taoist practice is not suitable for general public promotion. It has nothing to do with spiritual energy. Let's just say that a few of the three movies "San Guan Beidou Yu Shu" have watched it. Your kind of national practice belongs to the fantasy category. The plot advancement is really hard, dry, dull, not mellow at all, and too anxious. The only advantage is that the author writes very seriously.

It's well written, but updates are too slow.

Your book overall feels very confusing to me. I am baffled by the three scholars. I suggest you rewrite it. I had thought better of not writing anything about auction. It's really an urban cancer. The moon in front is really cool. From the back, it looks like two books, not written by one person.

Why? Why did I pick up this serialized book again? It's so uncomfortable to wait for updates every day!

After reading a few chapters, I didn't understand what was going on, so I quit.

It's a pity that it's a good subject. I recommend you to read [Myth: I Am a Legend] and [Making Myths]

I just want to say one thing to the author, don't give up. You have to work hard and never give up. This book is very good. I like it very much. We will update it slowly and we will accompany you. Don't be in a hurry. Take your time to conceive and show such a wonderful world.

I know very well that it is hard work for you to write articles, and I have always maintained my integrity and constant support in pursuing my articles. I ask for more updates.

Just update more. It's best to update dozens of chapters a day. Too few and it won't be enough to read.

It's really well written. Come on, I'll order all of them once they're on the shelves.

What can I say about the rhythm? I always feel that the main storyline is too slow.

Come on, author, this subject matter is very novel, I wish it a great success.

What's the situation, not two updates? 😡

When I saw the jade gourd at the beginning, I was inexplicably reminded of the stone gourd in the courtyard of the Taoist temple in my hometown. It was as tall as a person and had many ghost paintings carved on it. There was also a stone statue of Taiyi, the god of salvation and immortality. I don't know if it was some kind of wild fox Zen. There were still a few old Taoist priests in it in the seventies, but there was no fireworks anymore. The Taoist temple was renovated the year I was born. Later, when I needed major surgery on both legs, I went to seek help from Zhang Fu (the one from Tianzun). I don't know whether the hospital's technology was good or whether the Fu was actually somewhat miraculous. I was the only one among more than a dozen similar surgeries that was successful. I was only three years old at the time, and surgery is best done at around six to ten years old, as it is very risky. I wore that talisman until I was 14 years old. When I was visiting relatives that year, I accidentally slipped down the steep slope halfway up the mountain and was caught by a few bamboos. .