About the Demon King

To be honest, brother, after reading the first dozens of chapters, let's not talk about the writing, let's just talk about the plot. I feel that there are a lot of inconsistencies and illogical places that make people feel very uncomfortable. Well, let me give you a few chestnuts, 1. The black cat was forced to a dead end by the protagonist's little energy at the beginning, and then he actually had the idea to resist the meteorite (although there was a way to temporarily become stronger by exploding the tail) Factors, but when threatened by the male protagonist, he was already facing a life and death crisis, okay), that is a meteorite that is not very effective for the protagonist to reveal the true form of the Demon King. Although it has a certain relationship with consumption, it is still unreasonable. Is it true that even if you consume a lot as a Demon King, the remaining power is only the power that can be condensed at will on your fingertips? It is not that you have consumed a lot, but you have run out of gas and are about to die. 2. What was the reason why the black mage who initially planned to catch the black cat did so? He thought it was just a demon without intelligence that he wanted to capture as a pet or devour. This kind of demon without intelligence should not be considered a character. Does this make sense? Or maybe the devil is very strong, valuable, and rare no matter what level it is, but summoning the devil later doesn't make sense. I think this location is poorly arranged and feels like a forced plot. 3. Is that because black magicians are so calm? Not to mention that the male protagonist later wanted to destroy the world, let's talk about the meteorite with a diameter of thousands of meters in the beginning. Such a big fluctuation, destroying cities and countries, and even destroying the world, actually didn't care at all, and still said that they could wave their hands and restore the world. 4. Facing the male protagonist as an "ordinary person", even if the male protagonist's strength is good at the beginning, the span is a bit big. Raising his hand is the six-pointed magic circle that destroys the city. What do you think, it is: small fireball technique, useless, small water ball technique, useless, well, the enemy is too strong, the avenue of chaos is always there! That's all I have to say, the first 56 chapters, and 36 chapters, that's the problem with the performance here. I don't know if there is anything very uncomfortable in the first twenty chapters, but I don't think it's a big problem. Maybe the writing is not that good, and the description of the fighting scenes is not satisfactory. The back and forth is either hand-to-hand combat, or making waves, or throwing balls. This is not Dragon Ball. Finally, this is the first time I have written so much. Seeing that you are not on the shelves and have so little popularity, I will give you some suggestions. I have been reading online articles for 10 years. I can barely be considered an old bookworm. The evaluation should be relatively pertinent and reasonable. Come on, old man.

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It feels like the Virgin. The protagonist is too contradictory. Others want to kill you, but you let him go. He kills someone, you defeat him and then forget about it and let the tiger go back to his mountain?