Tokyo Dimension Traveler

I looked confused

It's getting worse and worse, your vote is gone.

The protagonist has neither become stronger nor weak. I know what you want to express, but can you stop being so grinding? Forget it, delete the book

Chapter 7 is a bit messy, I suggest you split the sentences and recombine them. Regarding gunshot injuries, you must first confirm whether the bullet is still in the body. Remove the warhead, stop bleeding and disinfect before suturing.

I read it in confusion. The author probably wrote it for himself.

It is rare to write about Song of Insects. After reading it all, I feel that the main plot is a bit unclear. More than 100 chapters have passed, the protagonist's abilities have not been developed at all, and the plot is too slow.

It was always updated one day ago, maybe every other day.

It does feel confusing. Many scenes pass by in a flash, and it would be better to just skip over the detailed descriptions regardless of their severity. Especially a bunch of <— >.

But it's not bad. I praised Jinzi all the time, but then I was planted with strawberries. I'm afraid you, the author, are also an NTR lover. Delete the book, goodbye.