Poros

What was written before was indeed good until the robot changed into women's clothing and the protagonist went to learn martial arts and went straight downhill! I can't stand it after reading more than fifty chapters.

It's 3:36 in the morning, and I saw this book on a pirated novel software a few hours ago. Find the original address specifically to post a comment. I finished reading it in one sitting, including the One Punch Man chapter and the final chapter where I returned to One Punch Man. How can I put it, I feel very complicated. The Boros portrayed by the author is great, very real and gentle. Originally, I only wanted to read the invincible articles when I searched for Boros, but after reading the whole article about One Punch, I should. . . There will never be another Boros who can touch me like this. I didn't read a few chapters after One Punch. After reading the comments here, I felt that this should be a wise decision for me. I think Only One Punch Man should be regarded as a perfect ending to the book Boros. Of course it would be better if Angela and Annie didn't die. Having said this, I have to say that the author really touched my heart. In recent years, I have only read Feilu's mindless and refreshing articles. I don't know how long it has been since there was a character portrayal that touched my heart. Annie the Mosquito, gentle Angela, and Barbara at the beginning. Even though Barbara didn't have much writing, I still remembered him as a superb mechanical repairman, the kind who didn't say anything when bullied. The Mosquito Girl is a villain who was killed instantly in the original novel. In the story written by the author, I felt the pitifulness of that girl. She went from a happy family to being without a father and a mother and was deceived. She even became an experimental product and was bullied by the Evolution House. Fortunately, she met Poros. Angela, a person who has no fighting power in the universe and exists like an elf princess (I can't remember what kind of star she is), initially admired Boros' strong strength and fighting spirit. Later, in my opinion, she should have a crush on Boros (the obvious kind). However, Boros woke up too late and realized that the family he was supposed to protect was no longer there. Teacher Saitama, Genos, and the people in the original work of Hungry Wolf are all very similar to what I understand them to be. Although Genos has changed his gender, I actually understand that in order to become stronger, Genos-kun may actually change his gender. Hungry Wolf has someone who understands him, so he should not become a weirdo again. Teacher Saitama, that silly bald head, dead fish eyes, hahaha, it's funny to think about it. Being hammered into that by the fake Boros this time, it can be regarded as asking him to fight with all his strength, and he should be satisfied. Poros, the soul that has traveled through time, knew that Saitama was there, so he kept working hard. In the original book, Poros pursued fighting and longed for an opponent, but unfortunately he was beaten to death by Saitama. "Sure enough, this was not a fair fight at all. "Before the death of the original work, Poros was just an innocent boy like a martial artist (excluding of course his behavior of killing people and setting fires during the years when he was the overlord of the universe) The author's Boros, while retaining the martial arts idiot, still managed to make him a hero. Boros who traveled through time no longer killed people and set fires, but became a hero like Mr. Saitama, driven by interest. Sure enough, this is the real hero. At the end, Boros and Bai, I don't think of them as separate. I think the two of them, together, are the real "Poros". I understand it as "Poros" to take revenge and then pay homage to Angela and Anne. They meet old acquaintances and then live in seclusion (because I only saw one punch related) (ps: As expected, those who are willing to let the flesh-and-blood supporting characters die are masterpieces in my eyes, the author's Ann Ni and Angela, in my eyes, are equal to the Eri clothes of the dragon clan. I feel really bad. 😭) I have said too much, and I don't know what to say. It really touches me. Really, there will never be another Boros that can penetrate my heart. It is already 4:26 when I write this, and I am too lazy to modify some of the above. Author, thank you for letting me see this Boros. Sure enough, in my eyes, Boros should be such a person of flesh and blood. . . . . The overlord of the universe. (Time 4:27)

The ranking of the Hero Association is related to reputation. No matter how strong Boros is, he has a monster appearance. How can he be squeezed out of the Explosive Ranking? Also, you forced yourself to take the first position, but ended up being the last one in the C-class with a bald head? When he was accepting his apprentice, he always emphasized that the bald man's strength was similar to his own, but now he was forced to connect with the original work. It would be so simple to accept a disciple with a stick bone, and he also examined his character when he accepted his bald head. He was already recruiting evil people🐺 Something happened, Boros, a weirdo, forcibly accepted disciples because of his strong appearance? Too ridiculous

The rest are just random time travels, and the original characters don't have any boundaries. Even if she looks like a mosquito girl, there will be trouble on the street, right?

Mosquito Girl worships Poros as her teacher... These two are not the same species, and neither use the same system. What do they teach? Roaring cannon?

Author, you should finish it. What you write now is not what you want to write at all. If you keep writing, you will only suffer.

It's still watchable in the beginning, but the more you write in the back, the more poisonous it becomes. Everyone knows that you want to fight Saitama, but after you run to the earth, you start to get wet. The plot is similar to the original work. What is this if it's not water? Then later on, in order to time travel, you made a scene where all your friends and apprentices died. What was this to do??? To show that the protagonist was very powerful? Was it to kill relatives to prove the truth??? Or to kill something to prove the truth???

Boros: No one is counting on me. I know better than anyone else that god-level weirdos are of no use at all. No one knows better than me. I can't beat you, but I can only do this. This is not a question of winning or not, but that I must stand in front of you. If the overlords of the universe run away, then who will fight!

Two is the limit, no more, too many women will not look good, harems and other things must be strictly prohibited. If this little junior sister is attached, won't it be endless from now on, and it will become the same old pretense and slap in the face?

Personally, I think you should go to a world that is strong but not very high, to recover from injuries, and review what you have learned. After all, you need to consolidate when you have just made a breakthrough. In addition, it is better to choose something more popular. Even writing about King Slime is better than writing about a classic but older one.

I would like to make a small suggestion. Although this is Boros written by the author, what I hope to see is Boros with a punch and a feeling of blood boiling. I believe many readers are rushing for this. By the end, Boros's character is a bit broken. The author needs to consider it carefully. Come on, support the author!

Boros: If even the overlord of the universe falls, who will defeat the bald devil?

It was good at the beginning, but later it turned out to be a poisonous point to have Bang Gu as my teacher. From now on... I can't watch it at all! ! !

Damn it, what do you mean no one is watching? There are very few One Punch fans, and almost no one writes about Boros. When I watched the anime, Boros was too handsome.

Why does it feel like I started to forcibly stick the girl on top of the protagonist?

The early emotions and character portrayal are profound, the Mosquito Girl's tragic life experience, Boros' tenderness towards her has become the last hope in his life. Without Boros's appearance, she will almost become an abandoned daughter in this world. Her feelings for him have reached the point where she is willing to give her life. She even gave her life to protect Anelle, a person who just wanted to find Boros. She was thinking about Boros at the last moment. Annelle's admiration for Pineapples, she even knows how many years and days after he left, is more sensitive than those who swear to love for a lifetime, and is sensitive to feelings. The author has portrayed her a lot? No, it's not much, but it can express in the fewest words the love Mosquito Girl had for Boros. In order to protect Boros, she went to the earth and told him information, so that she died without fully expressing her feelings for Boros at the last moment of her life. They have paid so much for him and have been together for so long. They are not even as good as Poros, who has only known Sha Sha for a day or two. He is so cold to Anelle and the others. Is it because they are not human beings and are not more beautiful than Sha Sha? Can he treat them like this? It's no wonder that this relationship was cut off because of someone else's suggestion. The readers' feelings for the first part and their disgust for the second part doomed this ending, and it was really tiring to write like this. I basically skipped the second part, but ended up leaving them without resurrecting them at the end. It was really ridiculous. Instead of just letting Black Boros kill the protagonist, it was true that "we are different." The above are all personal thoughts.

Well, the writing is okay, but it's too bland! ! !

Before grabbing the original wife, I think you, the author, should look at the protagonist you wrote. If it is a pirate, you can use strange fruits to fool him. Starting with Naruto, Boros is an alien and has reproductive isolation, although I don't mind it very much. I think the next world should be about a popular anime (My Hero Academia) or a relatively well-known anime (Let's go fight the Holy Grail War). Nowadays, two-dimensional fan fiction is basically these. You can also choose Naruto (if you write about Naruto, there are probably not 200 chapters to finish, and there will be even more pirates). Personally, I think it should be about completed anime.

I just like you like this. The speed update is on the shelves. I can't wait for my starting coins and monthly passes.

System article! The obliteration flow looks so awkward! By the way, is there any author who writes a system-erasing genre that really kills the protagonist in a bad way? 😏

Will he return to the world of One Punch Man?

Genos becoming a woman, mhm. I can't imagine it. 🥵🥵🥵🥵

The front part looks good, but the back part doesn't look good when you travel through it, especially when you're schizophrenic, it makes you want to vomit.

Occupy the Floor, although I felt uncomfortable reading it in some places, I liked this book

Come on, big brother who drives the spaceship! ! ! 😏😏😏😏

I've seen everything so far, at most 37% of what I can see

The writing is very good, but the sense of immersion is too low. You can write more details on some important emotional scenes (to increase the sense of immersion). This is my suggestion. Thank you.

It seems like I haven't finished writing this yet! 😭😭😭

Just give me poison after Chapter 20, right?

Don't know what you are writing?