Dream Track Shadow

Dream Traces and Shadows (First 40 Chapters) The following content only represents some of my own opinions. Since my writing ability is not very high, and at the request of the author, I will recommend some more distinctive novels instead. Below I will mainly analyze it into characters, plot, background, imagination, and system. 1 The characters are written by the author. I feel that they are group portraits. The author should have put a lot of effort into shaping the many characters. The tenderness and affection between Ji Shaoyu and Awu also have persistence in the face of reality. Wang Li's resistance, Miao Guo Alan's evil character from the perspective of the protagonist in the early stage, and in Chapter 36, she becomes the saint who saves the torturers. Zhong Limo was involved in the sorrow of resurrection, and was led by Yuan Luo to flee. These basically get rid of the character facial expression. Make sure that all kinds of people in the novel are concentrated in one story under the will of the author. But I think the problem is that, the author, you set the scene too quickly and don't have enough details. I see some contradictions and lack of tolerance in the characters. For example, Wang Li replaced the protagonist Ji Shaoyu and killed when taking the map. This is a bit unlike a cultivator who has lived for a long time. The top management of the Mengxian Alliance and Chen Fengtai led the team to arrest Ji Shaoyu. They did a lot of things without adding anything, which felt very deliberate. Yuan Luo led people to escape, whether it was acting or being moved, I think there are still some details missing. Here I recommend you to learn from the works of "Xiu Liao" and "Big Eyeball". Although some of the characters in it do not appear much, a few key sentences make this character profound. Use details to show how these people achieve what they want after being restricted by reality. 2. Background and system. The story begins with the resurrected protagonist Ji Shaoyu being discovered by Awu and being traced by the alliance and high-level officials. It then intersperses with the events of the dream master and the protagonist in the dream world. I think the integrity of the author's story here is very good, but I am very vague about the story. I also re-read the first 40 chapters three times before I understood it. I feel that the author lacks the description of the reality of the author's book by the dreamer. Many novels will continue to unfold after explaining all the basic events and key points, relying on these to construct an author's "reality". Of course, this is not to spoil the story but because the author does not understand this "reality" and lacks a sense of immersion. I suggest that the author use some of the most basic settings of Dream Master to describe the reality. After all, when I read it, I only concluded that things are very fragmented ("▔㉨▔)", and the most characteristic thing about this reality is not very well understood by Dreamers. And this characteristic is one of the foundations of this book. Maybe it is my illusion, some of the works with good results now are also a combination of multiple materials, such as "There is a Demonic Qi", "The Lord of Mysteries" or those that extend deeper from the original setting, "The Infinite Deceiver" or other settings' impact on reality "I was "The System is Hosted", "The Fun of a Small World", "The Cursed Dragon" and "The Matrix Game", I have been following these books to create a different world that attracts me. 3. The subject of imagination or cool manipulation is quite good. The interaction between dreams and the world of immortality is not very exciting. However, the attraction is not so good (self-perception). The book mentions that except for the protagonist's martial arts, which are fragments of ancient times, they are combined with science. What's the difference? Apart from family requirements, is there any reason why we can't talk about it? In addition to fighting, what new developments will there be in the ancient and modern cultivation methods? In addition to fighting, what conveniences does the dream master have in life? The new thinking in the world of immortality combined with the thinking of the modern dream master, the protagonist's cultivation. What will break through the blind spots of ordinary people's thinking during the journey? Here we recommend Doraemon's "Dimensional Vest System", Feng Chaohuang's Nine-Nine World and "The End of the World". I love Cha Lemon's "Picking Up an Empress", which is full of saucy plots. 4. Let's go back to the previous article. , The only thing I feel bad about is that the setting is too fast, and the details are a bit lacking. (Maybe it's my own problem) The switching of the three lines is very novel, but I feel that there is still one missing center that attracts me at the beginning. (I came here for the setting of Dream,) As mentioned above, as the Dream Master Ji Shaoyu, I feel quite frustrated, there is no clear setting, why? I recommend Apple's "My Years as a Superhero in Marvel" 🐔 Part of the plot introduction of "Fairy Please Respect Yourselves" is very attractive to me

Story background: reality, modern city (dream, fairy and fantasy). Story style: rigorous reasoning, main flow. Brief review: The beginning of the story describes that the protagonist is a dreamer, and what is a dreamer? (In fact, it is an adjective similar to the Lord God, but the method of creating the world is dreams, rather than direct construction.) And the beginning of our story is that in the dream world of the protagonist, an unknown number appears, that is, a character that he cannot control and is unknown! And her purpose is to kill the protagonist! Of course, as the God of the entire world, the protagonist slowly investigates the truth, attracting more and more characters, and logic begins to explode... So, what is the foreshadowing of the real wife? Who is she hiding in the darkness? ╮(￣▽￣"")╭My brother said, no spoilers! To summarize: the writing style is rather heavy. After all, judging from the overall theme, there are two worlds, and a lot of dreams are added. I was a little confused... There were too many things, and I couldn't get used to it all at once. But this style of book should be a good medicine for heavy reasoning parties. Last complaint, oh. I can only say that I personally prefer to read stories with a more relaxed style... This one is a bit big-headed... Note! This book review is because I only tried to read the previous article, so the evaluation is relatively one-sided and is for reference only! It will be integrated and published in the article scanning circle and new book investment circle. Call the author.

It's a red envelope, but it's surprisingly good. Come on

Congratulations on the release~Sahuahua~ I forgot when I started chasing this book... At the beginning, I just thought the theme of this dream was interesting... The author has a very good imagination! After seeing the story behind it... Especially when I progressed to the original dreamland and lost my ability and became a mortal... I felt that all living beings are existences with their own thoughts, souls, and stories... Seeing this realization... I suddenly realized that this author is different... This book is different... This story is different! The author is not like the many people here who are begging for this book to bring them enough food... The writing is not impetuous and has a solid foundation. The most amazing thing is that he understands these knowledge very thoroughly. The worldview he constructs is very interesting and does not follow the crowd... It is an interesting and good book that makes people want to use their brains to think! After reading the testimonials today, I found that I am still... Simple... emmm, the author is really a cool academic, a rich kid, and a winner in life in a certain sense... What a great person... I'm so lucky that I was confused and followed this book... I can tell in his usual words that the author is not very "gregarious" but is comfortable and unrestrained... I also really like this book! Like! Looking forward to the next story!

After reading the first forty chapters, I wonder if the author is playing a big game. The so-called "dream" of the protagonist is actually the real world of cultivating immortals, and the superpowers of dream masters in the real world come from the protagonist's "dream", because the protagonist's "dream" is too real. But after forty chapters, I don't know if you feel it, but the author has developed nearly three main lines, one is about the resurrection of his wife Awu, the other is about Tao Qianmin's dream, and the one about Ji Shaoyu fighting monsters and upgrading. The three lines are almost three kinds of training styles, one is to practice by dreams, and the other is to practice by dreams, and the other is to level up. One is between dream cultivation and immortality, and the other is pure immortality. The most important thing is that there is almost no connection between the three lines, and there are many characters appearing in each line, resulting in not knowing which one to focus on, and I don't know how the author laid it out. I just want to remind you. In addition, the author's writing style is really good and his knowledge is very deep. Come on.

I want to change my name, well, I didn't know there was a genre called Infinite Flow before... This Infinite Sleep World gives people a low-level fantasy feeling. Now I am collecting names, and I think of "Sleep Road", why is my name so ridiculous 😢😢, face-palming

When you were old, watering the flowers on the balcony, wearing green flower clothes I was drinking tea in the living room You suddenly looked up and asked me why I have loved you all these years You came over, ready to listen to my old love words I said I loved your beautiful eyes and handsome smile, but I stopped loving you after one year of regret I said I loved your graceful and plump figure, but unfortunately I stopped loving you after ten years I said I loved your charming style and personality, but it was a pity that I stopped loving you after marrying you I stopped loving you I think of my youth, it was not monotonous, I Youth That is our youth I think of my life, it is not monotonous, my life That is our life Those suffering days are also our sufferings Those sweet days are not spent by me alone Dear, recall your past, those stories from ignorance to secularity Recall your student career, recall your youth years In those years, my body and logic were mine, but my story was yours Do we have our own stories? How can I say I love you if there are two people in our story? I love myself, at most I love my own life I love you, I love our lives

It's quite novel. At least the introduction is not poisonous and allowed me to read it.

I'm here again. This time I read fifty chapters in one go. It's really nice. The writing style is good. In some places, it feels a bit like seeing a mortal. But the writing is really good and the writing style is pretty good. Basically, there are no typos or confusion in thinking and logic. The paragraphs are clearly separated! The most important thing is that the updates are not interrupted. Authors like you are my favorite. I really want to pack it up and bring it back. Finally, I have invested in this book. This is the second book I have invested in. Although I have not recommended it to you, there are still rewards and other things. Don't interrupt the updates, otherwise I will follow the network cable and kick you to death 😂😂😂

Watched it again, worth watching

Congratulations on your return, I've been waiting so anxiously for it, and I'm finally back.

Haha, congratulations to the author. I have successfully lured my roommates into the trap. This is the first time they have said that I have a good eye for choosing books.

It's a really good novel. It's been a while since I've seen a theme that makes me feel a little different. Most of the time I can guess the general direction from the beginning to the middle. This book is still very imaginative, but the characters are very delicate and logical. It's also thorough, and overall it's a rare good article, 👍👍👍 I hope the author writes well. This is the first time I'm going to reward someone. I'm going to reward you. You must maintain your standards. Come on! ✊✊

The opening chapter is grand, the logical thinking is reasonable, and the world view of the narrative article is convincing and reasonable. The writing style is smooth and the reading experience is strong. Such a good work from a new author. I believe you will have a broader stage. (Whispered: Your beginning blew me away. It's great.) Wave to cheers💪

Good article, good article, 100,000 words, only to find out, have you applied for a visa? Just wait for the profits😁

The beginning of this book is quite amazing. The author is amazing.

The author just wrote what he wanted, and it's pretty good now. Don't pay attention to some nagging voices.

I recently discovered this novel, and I would like to commend it because it is very interesting. This book has a grand background and many puzzles. Although there are only a few chapters in the second volume, it is getting better. Although Zhuang Bi, the master of the dream, is a little naive and his wife A Wu is a little reckless, the flaws are not concealed. Compared with other books of the same period, it is already very good. Summary: This is a rare and good book on a niche subject. PS: I hope the author will update more and become a god soon!

Looking for books these days is really a whirlwind of things. It's rare to find a good book that suits your taste. Good looking✌️

It's a very interesting story, I'll keep reading 🤓🤓

I also want to know what it's like to be a helmsman 😁 It's really exciting⊙∀⊙! Come on, I'm optimistic about you👍👍👍