Acting King

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I disagree with the comments of the previous two book friends! The author describes the thoughts and practices of most gay men. Communicating with borrowers such as relatives and friends on how to repay the money is a fantasy given the protagonist's background. It's best to just leave. After all, there are family members there to support you, and it's possible to pay back the money slowly.

If you take too much in one stroke, women will appear proportional and set poisonous points.

It feels okay, but the pace needs to be sped up a bit. I am currently in the first dungeon in the novice village. If I don't speed up my popularity, I will lose all my popularity. Come on, I'll give you your votes.

The progress is too slow, and the movies and TV series are all unfamiliar and there is no sense of immersion.

Break zero for you. Author, I only read the first chapter. I personally felt that the character of the protagonist was not good enough, so I didn't read the rest. If you owe someone money, even hundreds of thousands, it proves that the other person has treated you very well. It doesn't make sense for you to run away without taking responsibility. If you lose money in business, bear the debt, get everyone's understanding, and then go out to work to pay back the money. This is the correct way to open things up. I wonder if you will explain it later. Regardless of whether you do or not, the number of words is small now, so it is best to revise it now and make it clear in the first chapter. Otherwise, it will be very offensive, especially since the Chinese New Year is coming soon. How many people can't get their money back? Isn't it heart-warming what you wrote like this?

There are no real stars, and there is really no sense of substitution, so I gave up decisively

The book is okay, there are few updates, and the recommendation has been submitted

After reading about 70 chapters, the novel may not be perfect, but it does have its highlights. The portrayal of the protagonist is very realistic and not obtrusive. The background setting is that of a good-looking young man. He was praised by his relatives since he was a child, which made him a bit proud. He didn't encounter any setbacks. When he entered the society and couldn't survive, he started his own business. As a result, he failed in less than a year. In fact, I just encountered this setback. If there are changes, there must be changes, but it is still rough. When I saw the protagonist cashing in his acting points, there were comments saying that the plot was poisonous. I think it is very true. The protagonist has been going smoothly but this year he suffered a big setback. The blow was still a bit big. At this time, he is still mentally uneasy. He just wants to grab what he can grasp and does not think about the future. It is like holding something practical. Only when he really sees some hope and calms down can he calm down. Because I have seen similar situations in reality, I feel that the actions of the protagonist here are really real, although it does look a bit uncomfortable.

The old bookworm's advice to the protagonist Don't be too deliberate in increasing the protagonist's presence in the extras. Haven't you noticed it yourself? If you write like this, it will make readers think that it is malicious With so many extras, the protagonist will definitely feel nervous for the first time, but he will also 100% imitate the movements and expressions of the extras next to him, so you deliberately describe it like this at the beginning, which is very No, experience it for yourself. Acting as an extra is a transitional period for gaining points. It doesn't mean that you write the protagonist in such a rubbish way. In the first picture, you deliberately describe the protagonist as being so unlucky and rubbish. I don't know what you want to express. You are not sure about the three golden chapters of the novel. All the people who comment on it have a mentality of hating iron for not being able to make steel. They want this novel to be as less bloody, less pretentious, less...

The book is good, the recommendation has been voted in, keep up the good work

After reading the paragraph at the end of Chapter 36, I already know the general situation of this book. It will either become a hit or be sold out. Again, original entertainment stories are the most difficult to write. They must be exciting and detailed enough, otherwise few people will like them. Firstly, there is a lack of sense of immersion and there are no realistic works and characters to compare with. Secondly, the overall plot is easy to deviate. Book lovers don't know whether to read the short story or the protagonist's development path. If your writing is original and exciting, the book will become a story session, with all the focus being on the short stories. If it's not good enough, there's no need to explain the ending clearly!

The complex is dragged on, and the dead pig is filled with water. Dashui B!😅

I have saved more than 10 chapters. Here are my thoughts after reading them. One word: water! Act as a king! What about interpretation? There are three or four chapters of "A Love Affair", and there are already more than 200 chapters. General Qin has just started filming. Do you want to write 100 chapters for a new movie? Goldfinger is a bad review. It's the same as nothing. To be honest, I am very disappointed, but I still subscribed. I hope the author will think carefully about the next plot. I also scanned the book circles myself. It is a consensus that the plot is a bit slow. It is an objective evaluation and is not slanderous.

I went and my ex-girlfriend came. . . Okay, I don't even want to deal with recommendations and roles.