Rebirth Game Dream Builder

Come on, author, it's a very good book. Personally, I think the writing and plot are as good as the completed popular article "The Almighty Game Designer" of the same type. At the same time, because the world setting is different, I personally think this book is more refreshing and novel. But I personally think there are still some shortcomings: First, the plot is too delayed, at least for now. I probably started following the plot when I started working on "Counter Terrorism", but at the same time I was also following the similar new book "Restarting the Game Era" by the author of "Almighty Game Designer" at the same time (January 30 to February 2) (during the 10th of March), the current plot progress is that two more games have been made, and the third one has been started, and the book "Counter Terrorism" has not been released yet. It is probably not easy to update twice a day, which is understandable (after all, a lot of good books that I personally like are updated once a day), but the progress is too slow, and I don't feel it when I read it. The plot can be a little more compact. Second, there seems to be no second. After reading other comments, it seems that they have all been mentioned. The remaining suggestions may affect the outline. It is not good to mention the same ones or not, and it will confuse the author's thinking, so I won't mention them. The writing is still very good. I will give it to the first order when it is put on the shelves. However, I am short of money. Apart from the first order, I can only reward 500 points to symbolize it. I will try my best to help ***. Come on, author (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

I don't know when the CS section will be finished. As far as I'm concerned, it looks awkward. Judging from the CS interaction, there's nothing eye-catching about it. I feel like it's just pretentious for the sake of showing off. I just can't figure it out, why do you have to write like this to promote your own game products? I can understand why you push game authors to the front desk online, but offline you have to let game authors go to Internet cafes to play games with players. It seems very friendly! ? Private visit via incognito? We have won the title of No. 1 In the world of labor and management. If you are not convinced, everyone comes to challenge, oh, and then there is another appointment queuing challenge.

Very good novel. Good luck to the author!

Emmmm, I suddenly saw this book on the shelf, but I just read it over here yesterday, and I feel so embarrassed. . . (If I had known I would have written it a day later) First of all, congratulations on being put on the shelves (Cheers []~(￣▽￣)~*) After reading the acceptance speech, the author still worked very hard, and is actually quite good among new authors. He can not only accept other people's opinions, but also have his own persistence. It's pretty good, pen core (⑉°з°)-♡. Then I would like to apologize. The tone of yesterday's speech was not very friendly and was completely arrogant. What I mean is that I hope the author can use less bloody plots and blunt pretense in the description of daily life. I still support writing about things in daily life that have nothing to do with games. After all, writing only about games will indeed make you tired. Because at the same time I went to QQ Reading to support, I also saw that the book review atmosphere there is indeed much better. At least there are no long-winded talkers like me (self-deprecating speech (눈_눈)). There are basically no trolls who talk about SB, and there are more people who support it (however, some people with a strong sense of superiority in Qidian look down on QQ Reading, and the people on Chuangshi, who said that the books dominating the list there are all the books first released by Qidian). Now that it's on the shelves, the first order and all subsequent orders still have to be given away. (So when will we start a book club group) (Good night)

What is the military situation in this world? Is there any concept of individual soldier exoskeletons and exoskeletons? If not, a game that promotes arms competition because of a game is very fun 🤭

Well, I only read thirty or forty chapters, so I have some personal thoughts. The background of this novel is set in a world without games, which can be said to be a great advantage. Then there is a problem. I have never played the previous games written by the author, and I cannot comment on them. But I think the name of the first game is very weird. Yes, I am not the kind who particularly likes to play games. I think many people who wrote about it have never played it.                            Why does such a game have to use this awkward name? Since it is a new world, it is very simple to make a game. Why can't the pig's feet be magically modified? Every game has its own core gameplay. This game should be foreign, right? The author can completely make a work that is more in line with the present based on his past life experience. Also, I just read the comments and many people mentioned World of Warcraft and Dota. These games are indeed very famous, so if these games were replaced with flower-growing cultural elements, would no one play them?​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​OUTOUT ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​OUTOUT        ？ Why do all the authors think that flower elements cannot enter the Western market?                        In the era of game desert (similar to our great dynasty), if there are two games with Western fantasy and Xianxia themes at the same time, it goes without saying that we will choose which one. If there is no game like World of Warcraft in the world, why won't the magically modified version of the fairy world with flower planting elements succeed? Personal suggestion (those who are die-hard fans of certain games should not comment, thank you): There are also some novels about copying games, so all the author has to do is write about the content of the game. How much do players like to play it, or how much money do they earn? Although I don't know much about the game industry, I think innovation in the game industry is the most important. There is obviously so much space, but I have restricted myself to death. To give a simple chestnut, flower elements are like rice, and foreign elements are like potatoes, both of which can nourish people. When you arrive in another world, there is a large open space, and you just plant all the potatoes. Have you ever thought about taking the essence of foreign potatoes and turning them into flower potatoes?                                                                     It's not difficult to say it in a novel, you can let people who are particularly interested in games know which game your new game is from! Then let people who don't know this game know that this game has flower planting features. And I believe that even though many people now criticize our own games for being terrible, we will still play any big productions. Let me talk about my feelings about the chapters I just read. I have never played the first game written by the author, and I even don't understand it at all. I think the name "The Binding of Isaac" is weird, and I don't like it either. I'm not afraid of your jokes. I think "Isaac" is a personal name. Based on this understanding, I think names like "The Combination of Zhang San" are better than the original one. Another example is the knights and priests in the game. You can completely become a general or a Taoist priest in the new world. Castles can become palaces, manors can become gardens, and armor can become chain mail.              ，，！ (Personally, I think: the cultural elements of a good game are never the core, but promoting your own culture is definitely the top priority)

The soul of this book is ZMC. If the competition is not written well, it will become a mediocre copywriting book. After writing one game and then another, it will become like a running account. My personal suggestion is to produce some high-quality games and add some classic e-sports games to deeply explore the potential of ZMC. You can add some content such as the E-sports Hall of Fame and the Road to Fighting Korea to enrich the content of the entire ZMC. The main focus of the entire book is to develop e-sports competitions. This is more long-term than writing about games. Classic games are relatively limited, but the development of an event can be infinite. In the end, you can write it to be more popular than the Olympics and World Cup. Personal suggestion, if you like this book very much, you can't help but participate

I would also like to mention some of the opinions you have given to the author. First of all, the first chapter gave me a serious sense of déjà vu. I feel that I can completely change the setting. It does not have to be a designer competition for the first picture. It can also be a big game company screening the upcoming games, and then the two screeners will compete with each other to start the protagonist's pretense. It does not need to be a designer competition like Almighty. Secondly, I don't know if the author has read The Father of the Reborn Animation of Life Cover. To put it bluntly, this book is just a copy, but there is a very interesting setting in it. That is, the author felt that it was impossible for the protagonist to have so much energy to make all the interesting animations for the protagonist, so the author set up a rival company, and the author handed over some of the animations that the protagonist was not required to produce to that company. So both sides compete while making progress together. To be honest, in fact, readers are tired of reading the story about being invincible by relying on the memory of the earth. After all, you can't have a parallel world where everyone is a noob, right? Not to mention overpowering the protagonist, at least you have to be competitive against the protagonist. It's impossible for the industry leader to be trampled on by the protagonist, right? Otherwise, what's the difference between the so-called industry leader and the third-rate studio on earth? In addition, it is recommended that the author should not copy it. No game is perfect. Most games have more or less shortcomings. Assassin's Creed has many branch lines, but basically it doesn't matter if they are removed. This point has only improved since the beginning, and the branch lines can be connected with the main line. Minecraft is good, but my friends and I don't like this pixel style. There are many masterpieces of European and American games, but many female characters in games are not easy to lick. These are all areas that can be modified.

I can't stand it, I don't know what will happen next, the front is really a bit... You shouldn't write about class reunions, forcibly establishing a villain, and causing hatred and hostility from the woman. This is an old-fashioned urban plot that has become poisonous. The male protagonist was an ordinary person in his previous life, and he was not set to be a super nb. So if he travels to another world, even if there is a system, he will still develop smoothly, instead of becoming invincible after passing through it. Where does the male protagonist get his confidence? It suddenly became swollen, and he also pointed out and preached about other people's things (extremely self-centered, without self-awareness). To do this kind of thing, you have to make at least a few popular earth games. Also, since it is a single woman living alone, the emotional development is slow. From the beginning, the heroine has a "reciprocal" "friend" relationship with the hero. She is too caring and cares about it, and she even says that she is just a friend. What's the hero's shining point? There is no bright spot, just write that you and the heroine are ordinary friends. While developing the game, you can also develop the emotional plot. It doesn't have to be together from the beginning. You can also develop it until the end before deciding to be together. Anyway, it is a single female protagonist and the plot is not an emotional line. The most important thing is that the male protagonist still acts like he is a cold and aloof male god, but the female protagonist just doesn't mind and is convinced. There is also a second-generation rich man who successfully made a game independently. He invited guests to dinner, showed off, invited the girl he liked, and gave some advice to others (simplifying the game, expanding the audience, and increasing the number of players. It's normal. Otherwise, how about making a masterpiece?). All of these are normal things. The protagonist forcibly "shakes his head slightly" to create conflicts, and the protagonist is vividly written as a villain. I only saw the class reunion and didn't even finish watching it. This plot is just poisonous and a failure. This kind of thing shouldn't be included. This kind of thing is poisonous in urban novels.

There are not many novels about games in Qidian, and even fewer that exclude eunuchs. In addition, novels about non-modern society have to be included. I have also read a few novels about going to other worlds to make games and consoles or open Internet cafes. Although this book is not particularly good, it is not bad. At this stage of online writing, people are slowly reading too much, and even the best routines are rotten. No matter what kind of novel it is, pretending to be a slap in the face is boring. I think the novels about games are more about setting in other worlds and showing the wisdom of gamers in the real world. Video games have been created from scratch, and over the past few decades, it has been the hard work of all game practitioners. If you share your good works with more people, your happiness will not only not decrease, but will become more. And there is a sense of pride in this process. Good games are a culture and have even become an art, the ninth art. But no one who is a true game practitioner does not want games to flourish. The protagonist in the novel, while sharing happiness, is also spreading culture and showing our cultural treasures. Isn't this feeling happy? Although you are alone in a foreign land, there is a world behind you. Although I am not a game practitioner, just an ordinary game player and an ordinary novel reader, I like games, I am proud of them, and I am happy for them. Gamers have national boundaries, but games themselves really have no borders. So there is really no need to be too harsh. If an author is willing to write and the writing is good, then it is already good. It would be even more beautiful if the book could be completed smoothly233. (Personal reflections, from the bottom of my heart. I regret that I didn't figure out what I like earlier)

Can you stop writing CS? It feels too watery!

For large-scale stand-alone games, you can consider the Monster Hunter series, the Dark Souls series, and the Devil May Cry series. With other games, you can keep writing about them for a long time. After all, games have become more charming after the baptism of time, and players will have feelings for them. There are also the Total War series, the Civilization series, and the Assassin's Creed series that are all worth writing about. If the author is an industry insider, it depends on what game you write about. If there is something interesting and I haven't played it, I can buy a copy and try it. Finally, please come on

The latest chapters are very poisonous, forcibly creating contradictions, which is very inexplicable. The players are not like players, but really like trolls. . .

Come on, author. The writing is organized, but there are also some shadows of other books.

CS chapters are basically skipping around. It's so boring. I hope I can speed up the pace, because most of the game writers have read similar plots. Come on, author!

It's starting to get a little bit toxic. Why does the whole world owe you everything? It's the protagonist's problem from the beginning. And if someone is stronger than you, you can cash in on him and not send someone to block him

This is a picture of Rebirth. I originally wanted to find a picture of Wrath of the Lamb, but since the release of Rebirth, most of the pictures on the Internet are from Rebirth or subsequent DLC.

Awesome, this update speed, if it is faster, I think I can publish this book.

As long as you don't write about pesticides, you can eat chicken lol. Everything is easy to say. . .

In fact, you can also consider the Civilization series to accumulate the player base first. After all, playing black and white games with friends is still fun and popular.

The plot of this book probably goes from reproducing classic games, to launching e-sports in a parallel world, to consoles, to innovating games of your own. During this period, there will be plots of the protagonist or other people playing the game. The main reason is that if you want to write a game clearly, bringing the characters in the story into the game is the most immersive. Then if you feel that the plot is not full enough or interesting, you can leave a message and explain. As long as it makes sense, I will adjust my writing direction. Just don't make it boring with just one sentence, then I won't know how to improve it. Then this book will be updated with two chapters every day at noon, and it will break out from time to time. It's a new book. If you think it's good, book friends, please add it to your collection and recommend it. Newbies don't have much exposure, so it's not easy to write a book. I hope everyone can click on the investment book below. It's not a waste of money. The more investors you have, the more exposure you will get. In short, thank you for your support. I hope this book can bring happiness to everyone, thank you.

Congratulations on the launch, keep supporting.

Just waiting for you to write (Eat chicken)

The book is good, the recommendation votes have been cast, cheers for the author

It's a very good novel. Come on, don't be a eunuch. 🙂🙂

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Is it possible to get involved in any kind of pretense, slap in the face, or gambling?

Came here from UC to visit the grave...

Not bad, not bad, very exciting, let me keep reading.

Why can a novel that was not updated five months ago still appear in the editor's recommendations?