The Antiques in This Shop Are Haunted

Read the first chapter. I found that the author has a big problem. He doesn't distinguish between "the" and "the place". I don't think the editor can't see this kind of low-level error? Although novels are different from prose in that their form is more casual, the use of language cannot be careless! Small suggestions, hope to adopt them.

Dear, you have already opened two books. Some people (such as me) have not finished one book. It's time for me to learn from you. I'm crying...

The first example of a foreign hotel commissioned was the incident of Lan Keer... Who drowned in the water tank and the door upstairs was locked...

It's beautiful. My wife likes Dayu.

All right! You and my daughter have all the tickets given to you.

Congratulations to the sisters! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The future is bright! ! ! The next book explodes! ! !

Meow meow meow (^･ｪ･^)

Thinking that my few female channel votes cannot be wasted, I cast them casually.

Happy New Year, my dear! Perfect attendance in 2020 and never get stuck!

Nice book, please update it