The Global Arrival of Elves

The originator of Elf City, created a trend, but died of exhaustion halfway🐮

，，， Then tell me what I think about this book. In my opinion, this book depicts not only the fantasy world of an elf, but also the struggle and choice of a small person under the tremendous social changes. Lin Zhou is indeed a small person, he will seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, so when Poor Gou Xun came to him, he agreed. Although to us readers, this guy is a villain template, Lin Zhou's choice is exactly the most real side. However, what makes Lin Zhou different from other little people is that he loves elves and has always done so, so he lives well in this world. Of course, to a certain extent, it is because he follows the trend of this world. Analyzed from this perspective, this character is of great practical significance. I believe that many readers are not big shots. As we struggle in this society, we will have many choices and face many powerless things. But whether we can persist in our original dreams and act on them determines our future. China is now also in a period of change. Can we, like Lin Zhou, dance in the world with our dreams? Secondly, let's talk about the worldview structure of this book. This is what I love most about this book. The combination of the earth and the elf world is very reasonable and successful. Generally speaking, you will not have a stiff feeling. In terms of details, according to the latest positioning of mythical beasts, it is also very good. Moreover, the structure constructed in this way is very grand. Similar worldviews that I admire more are the two books of Machine Breaking Galaxy and Super Dimension Warlock (considered from the perspective of worldview alone, they are indeed very good). However, this will definitely lengthen the plot line, so I sincerely hope that the author will finish the book well and give it a perfect ending, and don't rush to push the plot. A very important aspect of the novel is to create the characters. I hope the author can well create the characters in this changing era. Once again, let me talk about some areas where I think this book needs improvement. The first is the problem of the maze. Perhaps due to the special growth history of the protagonist, this important part of the maze has been weakened and turned into a concept of producing secret jade. However, in fact, elf props and relics from previous eras can appear here, but the author needs to make some reasonable modifications. The second is the emotional issue. Although I like Yingzi very much, this relationship does come out of the blue. They really don't have much intersection. The author should design an event to draw out this emotional line, but there is no way now, but I still hope that the author will think carefully about the later emotional description. Finally, there is the issue of the elf's strength. Lin Zhou seems to be tired of various incidents, so there are very few descriptions of the elf's training now, and the effect of the magical fruit also needs to be strengthened. You cannot say that its future effect will not be so strong just because you eat too much. You can also explore some new applications of the magical fruit in the ruins, such as preparing potions. It depends on the author's imagination. The above is my opinion on this book. It is purely a personal novice's point of view. It's up to you to comment or not. It's up to you. Finally, I wish this book will get better and better, and the author will become more inspired as he writes.

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As in the title 😒😒

Let me complain after reading Chapter 40. The author overemphasizes the status of the trainer. I can't bear it. But you can't blow up the skill training device like that. Everyone has evolved into Raichu and is not a hundred thousand volts. He actually bought a learning device to learn it with the help of his family. No trainer will teach Raichu a hundred thousand volts. Although I know that the author wants to show the feeling of leapfrogging monsters, but normal growth is also necessary.

If this book doesn't collapse, it can be considered a masterpiece among fans or elf people. First of all, the subject matter is very novel. It is a world different from animation. The only similarity is the elves. Secondly, it is very relaxing to watch. Whether it is the old lady in the abandoned house or the best friend in the same dormitory, they all look relaxed. Finally, I feel that the author will fail in writing. The author has laid a lot of groundwork in the past, and may be cruel after becoming a trainer, but I think what attracts readers in this book is not the scenes of life such as the warm male electric dragon, the blue crocodile playing games, the old lady in the abandoned house, etc.? It feels like the author is neglecting the essentials. I think the most important thing when reading elf novels is to be relaxed and happy, have fun and develop, then pretend to be 13 and get slapped in the face, and finally use the ability of the fire fox to make predictions and other cool points. Don't want it to be too dark and cruel. Finally, those families with less power are the ones that are most likely to collapse and easily make readers feel like their IQ is being rubbed against the ground!

Five million stones can buy 50,000 skill stones, and you can buy a hundred. How difficult is it to graduate? Advanced skills can be bought ten times, and you can buy ten Twenty times, you can buy five. Does the protagonist know that the skills with interchangeable characteristics are very useful to him? He doesn't even know the characteristics of the fox. Whether there will be a second elf in the future will be a long time coming. The protagonist is sure that the characteristics of the fox will be useful if he changes it? Or what are the restrictions on use? There is no description in the text. Does the protagonist in the article know the purchasing power of 5 million in his time-traveled world, so he abandons 5 million. Is he thinking that he can make money casually with the ability to predict the future? No, he made 50,000 and quit because he was afraid that he would be found to have predicted the future. ? ? ? Did he know that the fox was gifted with super powers? Can he make money in other ways? I don't know whether the protagonist is strong or not, and I don't know about other ways to make money, so I didn't say anything. The protagonist only had 4,800 in his card before, but it increased tenfold online to 58,000. The two skills he bought are gone. One person, raising an elf, starts at 58,000. This is still a world where everyone has elves, 100 people and 5.8 Million people. This is still the beginning, and it is still a common skill. It is not too much for a rich person to raise an elf with a skill equivalent to ten million taels and characteristic swap, right? Just treat it as a maximum of three per person, and don't care about anything else. A rich man comes with 30 million. Those five million...... A prime minister said, no, it would be a big loss. 😄

I have read 50 chapters so far. There are not many PM fans who write it, and even fewer who write it well. This book can be said to be one of the few PM fans that is well written. In fact, it is similar to the popular God's Pet novel last year, but in the eyes of people who like PM, this one should be more immersive. However, there are also some poisonous points, such as the initial gambling plot where the pig's trotters give out good things. The group is not thinking about publicity, but wants to take action on the pig's trotters; the data setting is not rigorous, and only 30 trainers in the country can pass it in a year (mainly such a pass rate, there are trainers who can't even get enough food and clothing, and take risks and become wanted criminals); what I just said before, they will slap themselves in the face right away. I hope the author can be more careful when designing the plot. Many readers are often poisoned step by step by these little poisonous points. But despite this, ignoring these minor flaws, this is still a good novel. As a student dog, I don't have the ability to give rewards, but I can still support it through full subscription. I hope to see your progress in subsequent chapters, come on! ! !

I have read many Pokémon fanfics and played through many Pokémon games using emulators. If it weren't for the fact that the Pokémon chat group written by the author of Data Master was too challenging for my taste, I would not have looked for other fanfics 😥[fn =17]. The words "I only like elves" made my heart tremble 😵😵 I think it's okay at the moment. If it's good, I can probably continue to pursue it (as long as I don't supervise 😁)

It's very good. I have read many Pokémon books in the new book investment, and this one is the most comfortable to read. Internet articles must have various routines, and fresh and refined books cannot be read. Recommendation vote given.

Halfway through reading it, I felt there were some points that I couldn't quite accept. First of all, Mimikyu Q's fairy type is not displayed at all. Then there is too little content about the elves themselves. The descriptions about the elves are basically only about training, and lack the charm of being an elf. Although intensity is very important, I think the establishment of the bond between the elf itself and the trainer needs to be described. There is too little content in this part. It feels that the elf's role in it is basically just fighting.

A lot of nonsense. It took me almost a chapter to introduce the cultivation layer, so the number of words was mixed, right?

At present, I feel that this is the most realistic pm article. The setting is very real. It is not as awkward as the traditional pm fan settings. It is just too short 🤫 I hope the number of words in each chapter can be more.

Emmm, I came here to apologize for seeing the pirated version, and also to give a tip to the author.

No more updates today? It's almost one o'clock

What, isn't this book about eunuchs? 🐷🐷🐷

Come on, author, I hope you can add one more chapter and two chapters, which makes me feel uncomfortable 😭

The book looks good, the subject matter is interesting, but the introduction is too much, and there are too many popular paragraphs. I usually have this, but I try to be restrained and only release the setting after the plot has advanced to a certain extent. You have the setting in every article, and it will hurt the brain of people who read it.

I saw Chapter 219 and wondered if the author wanted to recruit the white-haired girl. According to the way the author writes it, either it will be a long-term love, or the protagonist will help the white-haired girl to deal with the family affairs and accept the white-haired girl later (personal guess) I think it is better to accept the white-haired girl. I personally think it is a bit poisonous, but it is still possible to become ordinary friends, but the author should think carefully about how to write the part where the white-haired girl abandons the fox. If it is not written well, it may become a poisonous point. If the white-haired girl had to abandon the fox for various reasons, it would be too popular.

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There are many main supporting characters as trainers, but the dragons feel a bit lacking, and the plot is good but a bit lacking. The main line is obvious. All the magical results mentioned will definitely be successful in three years. Maybe my reading is too harsh or I am not suitable for ****. But I hope to continue writing, one of the few books. Ps: I beg you to be taken away by playing competitive games.

The book is a good book, but there are few updates. It would be great if it could be updated four times a day.

I feel pretty good at the front, but after reading the comments, I'm worried about the future, but I'll give it a reward first 😁

Seedlings need care. If readers feel satisfied after reading this, they can join the new book investors and vote for the extra recommendation votes~

This one is the most similar, I think. After all, she is so arrogant.

Longtaolou Name: try to match the urban Chinese name (both Chinese, English, Japanese and Korean) Characteristics: free play Main elf: 1 Secondary elf (background board, not finely written): 0-2

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I opened the bookshelf and saw that it was updated a year ago. I felt a little confused, as if it was updated yesterday.

The guy with a southern accent and a northern accent next door admitted that this is his trumpet, the master of the new book

You all say why are the people in quarantine so vicious? We have to think on the bright side, maybe we have not been saved long ago 🙂