All Worlds Begin with the Giant Python

I have read more than 200 chapters, and I have been hesitating over the past few days whether I should delete this book because it is too lonely. This book of yours is too lonely, dull, uninhabited, and seriously off-topic. In fact, I should tell you before that deleting the squirrel is one of your biggest failures. It loses the warm and interactive fun that book friends wanted in the first place. Squirrels are very cute. This is my self-feeling. I am a man, but I also think it is cute. Among them, the reputation setting of the system is a bigger failure, tens of billions? Hahaha, don't you think it should restrict development? I advise you to read the Classic of Mountains and Seas when writing about alien beasts. I always feel that you have no specific understanding of the images and appearances of alien beasts. In addition, the emergence of mutated ancient creatures is a surprising failure. As for aliens and Kaiju beasts, I tell you, use your imagination appropriately. That's fine, don't be too outrageous. From the time you started to leave the Blue Star to think about things, you have already pushed this book into the abyss. You think about unrealistic things when your own strength is not enough. Why, you can leave the earth and ascend to the world immediately? ! It's like trying to run before you learn to walk. When your strength is not infinitely close to that of the world, it is best not to write this kind of thing. Maybe you will say: Can't we have dreams? ! Hahaha, I think your book is not a question of dreaming or not, but that you have no logic at all. First of all, after endless waves on the earth, systematically develop new skills, such as traveling through time and space. Let some archaeologists from Blue Star discover these things recorded by the ancients and publicize your deeds that existed long ago. This is a cool point. This is the first world to travel to. The second one is Jurassic World Park. Traveling into Jurassic World and devouring a large number of dinosaur evolutions caused the park managers to be attacked after being discovered. And this At that time, you can let the protagonist do a super sweep, kill them to fear, and shock everyone in the world. Then, bring a small dinosaur back to Blue Star, and keep it as your own pet. Finally, let the small dinosaur be discovered by Blue Star experts to pave the way for the final interactive fun. Third, the Marvel world, the Marvel world is even easier. When Thanos becomes his younger brother, he helps Thanos destroy humanity. Finally, when life and death are at stake, he kills Thanos and seizes the Infinity Stones for his own use. He is worshiped by all humans in the Marvel world and gains a lot of reputation. This is even more exciting and can be written at least 200,000 words. Finally, after this chapter is over, everything will be better. Will it be better? ! Then won't it be easy after this? ! After that, you can watch movies and then read famous novels at home to increase the amount of world. Or, for example, travel to the Westward Journey and snatch away the Golden Cudgel, or kill Tathagata and snatch away his Golden Body of Luck and Buddha Seated Lotus. Isn't that the end? ? This is really imaginative. Are your aliens or monsters a huge innovation? ! Next, it would be better to just write about a few big worlds, such as The Origin of the White Snake and rob Bai Suzhen. However, I personally recommend grabbing Xiao Qing, because Xiao Qing is more beautiful, hehe~ For the evolution direction, I recommend the Nightmare Cave mentioned before. In addition, let him grow two claws. Remember, he can only grow two front claws, otherwise he will be a dragon if he grows four claws. That's it for the suggestions. The writing style of your book is passable, but it's cool and innovative. The suggestions I give you are enough to create a masterpiece. If you can open a new book and continue to use this suggestion, it will be a masterpiece with 2 million words.

This book belongs to a genre that I have been looking for for a long time but have not found. Too many similar articles are written like fast food, and the plots become more and more mysterious. This book is much better. However, it is a light novel... It is a bit cruel, and the casualties are quite large... And the time span is huge, so it will be a bit tiring to read, so the author should slow down a bit... I feel like I will get out of control very quickly when writing like this.

The writing is very good, the subject matter and ideas are different, but it is very interesting to read. The only shortcoming is that there are a little few chapters (maybe I read it too quickly and finished it in half a day). Come on, author, I hope it will get better and better!

The author feels that the plot is broken. What about the dungeon mission? It was a friend snake in the front, but it turned out to be a friend snake again on the earth! Why is the Soaring Snake I got earlier missing? It feels like a mess! Please give the author a snack!

I really like this book. It looks good. It enriches the little brain capacity I have. 😂😂 It makes me realize human nature. It makes me want to be a fool🐍 (I am making this up randomly...)

I came here based on the title and introduction. The introduction said "Relaxing Daily Flow", so at first I thought this book was similar to the protagonist turning into a snake and slowly growing up, but there is no greater conflict with humans. The protagonist explores the world from the perspective of a snake. It was good when I first started writing it, but I felt completely broken at the beginning when I bit the young master to death. As I read on, I found that the content and introduction of your book are completely different. If you have a relaxed and daily flow, if you start killing people and conflicting with certain forces at the beginning, then it will not feel like a relaxed and daily life, because the next process will either have to be an upgraded revenge flow, or avoid the enemy's vendetta, and then unfold the plot. ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ ) Anyway, I always feel that I was deceived by the introduction, and I can't stand it after watching the first world.

It's pretty good-looking and very stable in the end

The author's word novel amazed me after reading it. A very imaginative novel, although there were a lot of typos 😒 I stayed up late to finish reading it. Good luck, author＾0＾~

This chapter is broken (･_･)ﾉ⌒●~*

Is it possible not to write the system?

The latest one starts to feel like the book "Non-Human Gene Complex" 😅😅😅

I am currently reading Chapter 51. I read earlier that when Fang Yun came out of the mountain, I suddenly came up with something like this. At first, it felt okay when I was writing it, but then it felt more and more uncomfortable. If you feel there is something wrong, please point it out. In addition, this is only half of it and talented brothers are welcome to complete it. At the same time {"NickName":"Canghai Yueming 4","UserId":202961686} 🐍 Lyrics: Not Bucai I was very confused when I woke up The sky drop system is very hesitant Transformed into a snake and commissioned to evolve I still need someone to show off I walked through the woods alone Traveling all day long Fortunately, I have Xiaoma with me Snake and rat have a den and become a family A few months have passed in the blink of an eye Swallowing field mice Eating frogs Standing on the cliff Eagle Brother stared at me and gave me chills It's still the same every day Looking for pheasants Chasing Hare I just know in my heart The time to say goodbye to Xiao Ma has come Although I can't bear to leave my hometown But I still know that it must be done I left my hometown today Xiao Ma is watching behind me I know I must become stronger Be the king of beasts Famousness keeps growing People before and after are different When can I return home Back to the hometown I longed for in my dream

I'll go. . . This cover. . . I have a bad feeling. . .

If you don't eat people, what kind of snake would you be? The moment you turn into a snake, people have nothing to do with you.

If you don't transform into a dragon, you can create two snakes.

I just said that this book looks familiar. I have seen it before. This snake is a real snake. It is 30 meters long and only 1 meter in diameter. Is this a wireworm?

It's 30 meters long and less than 1 meter in diameter, so you say you can swallow an elephant. Do you think swallowing an elephant is based on its length? First of all, you have to have a mouth to swallow it, right? Thin and long, are they insects? What's even more funny is that there is a whale swallowing behind it. It's not even 1 meter in diameter, so you're just going to swallow a whale? Do you know how many elephants can stand on the back of a whale? The length is 30 meters and the diameter must be 4 meters. Is 5 meters normal?

Xiao Ma is the biggest shining point in the early part of this book, and I even feel that she is more likable than the protagonist.

Hahahahaha

I am annoyed by this squirrel now. He obviously has no ability but still relies on the protagonist. He even wastes a Servant Contract, which is an SS-level reward. He could obviously find an opportunity to contract a powerful thug or internal affairs talent, but he just wastes it on a broken squirrel. And the protagonist already has the blood of a strange beast and a snake, and just the coercion can scare this squirrel to death. Although the protagonist used a contract worth SS on it to make it qualified to avoid being frightened to death by coercion, it is just a drag, a hindrance, an obvious and extreme weakness. What if someone catches a squirrel and threatens the protagonist? And how can this squirrel He De be able to share the protagonist's vast destiny? Its life was the result of a moment of soft-heartedness by the protagonist, and its contribution was nothing more than a bird's egg and some body language that was unknown whether it was true or false. It was a waste that could not help at all. In addition, if the protagonist really likes or values ​​this squirrel, he should not take it away. It would be safer to let him live on earth. Since the protagonist left, I haven't remembered this squirrel at all. I know that the protagonist actually doesn't value him at all, or has forgotten it. It was only in the end that I saw this broken squirrel inexplicably and wanted to see it. But seeing it is enough, and it's not enough! You have fallen into a clichéd plot like this! I started to wonder if this squirrel was secretly stuffed by the system's enemy. Otherwise, its squirrel nest was so different, and the protagonist didn't want to eat it. Hehe, according to the protagonist's rhythm of going crazy with hunger or craving for life energy, this squirrel was bound to be eaten ruthlessly. It fell, but the goose didn't. Instead, the protagonist got rid of the goshawk for it, and then gave it a precious opportunity. Let's see, by then this squirrel will be either the heroine or an important supporting actress, and she will reach the pinnacle of the world with the protagonist (if it's not supervising) Virtue is not worthy of its place! If virtue is not matched, there will be disaster. If one has poor virtue and high status, there will be disaster! I bet 50 cents that this broken squirrel will definitely be caught by the enemy from behind, and then threaten the protagonist, and the protagonist's choice will be extremely bloody. I bet 50 cents that if this broken squirrel turns on his spiritual intelligence, he will definitely be "kind and pure" like the white lotus green tea bitch, generous all day long, "Hey, this is so cute, let's not kill him, okay" "Hey, this is so pitiful, let's help him" "Hey, these xx are poor people, you can't do this, let them go" So I really feel that this squirrel is disgusting. It's better to write it to death as soon as possible, or make it into squirrel mandarin fish and eat it.

Where is my little squirrel? Author, please return my little squirrel to me 😡😡😡😡😡

I'm very disappointed. It feels like it's all become a running list now. Let's not talk about other things, just talk about the evolution template. What's the change after you evolve from an ordinary snake to a Ba Snake, a Snake, a Snake, a Snake, and a Teng Snake? Do they only have different body shapes? Is getting longer and thicker the change after evolution? This is the first time I have seen evolution, and you can restrain yourself from changing your appearance when you evolve into a snake. Then why didn't you restrain yourself when you evolved before? Then there are skills. This is the first time I have seen a snake that does not have abilities such as flying in the clouds and mists. What it does are basically scientific skills such as laser cannons. If there are some before, After all, snakes can be strangled with poison and so on. The back part doesn't look like a snake. If you write it like this, don't use soaring snakes, ba snakes, etc. Can you just say that the original ordinary snakes broke through the original genetic restrictions and became from the first level? It turns into the second level and then the third level, and then grows into a starry sky beast. What do you write like Teng/Ba/Peng snake? I think it would not be inconsistent to replace the snake with any kind of animal in the following content. Does it still count as a snake novel?

The protagonist is a snake, so let's stand from the snake's perspective. Snakes are cold-blooded animals and eat all the same kind. You say they don't eat humans? Why are you writing about snakes if they don't eat people?

The character of Xiao Ma is so well portrayed. I feel like this book would be complete without Xiao Ma. Does anyone have the same idea?

Before I even started reading the book, I was shocked by the comment section. Are these the piranha of the motherland that came out of the diary of a madman? If you become an animal, do you have to eat people? I'm afraid it's because I'm thinking about cannibalism because I have some mental disorder. In reality, we don't see many reports of animals eating humans, right? If only this was what the people in the comment section said. . . . . Praise nature, it's not easy for humans to survive until now! (੭ ᐕ)੭

This protagonist doesn't eat people, he just likes to kill people without thinking. Also, it allows the author to cheat on him, and he is never afraid of getting into trouble (public killings at large-scale events, where is the brain? If a few people die in China, it is a serious accident, and the protagonist kills everyone he dares to see, and chases and kills others when they escape. It can only be said that it is a novel, with the author protecting him, and he is not afraid of death. With the protagonist's approach, as soon as the government finds out, it will kill you with large weapons)

Hey, I'm here again, not to troll, and I haven't trolled before. After all, I haven't read the book (the reviews of this book are terrible). When I tell you my opinions, a bunch of **** started biting me. What do snakes eat in nature? Unless humans take the initiative to provoke humans, snakes will not actively provoke humans, and even if friction occurs, snakes will not eat because their body shape is wrong (don't mention to me that snakes can dislocate their lower jaws to eat, there are limits). Of course, snakes are different and can swallow. Furthermore, some ** in the comments said, "What kind of snake would you become if you didn't eat people?" "I came here just to watch you kill humans. If you don't kill me, I won't watch." (Old man, subway, mobile phone) Good guy, Ning is Kohei Horikoshi! This anti-humanity thing is just here. I will publish a book at some point to open everyone's eyes and see if the river crab mythical beast can find you, whether the tea in the gun police station is good, or if it is too much, whether the gun is good to eat. Sleep, sleep, never see you again🙂

No wonder your grades are bad. You always write in a human way when writing about a snake. Have you ever seen a snake grin? ? Have you ever seen a snake running? ? ? Have you ever seen a mouse fighting a snake because its child was eaten? No common sense at all

This book once again shows the lower limit of my IQ, which was tens of centimeters a year ago and more than ten meters a year later. As a result, everyone can guess that it is a snake based on the mark on its head? My IQ feels strengthened.

Chapter 106, which is not certain in Baidu, seems to me to be the finale. The protagonist takes Xiao Ma and leaves the big pine tree. In the rewritten chapter, Xiao Ma spends his whole life waiting for the protagonist but never waits.