To Be Honest, Cultivating Immortality Is so Fun

Never give up, come on, come on, come on↖(^ω^)↗

The cover is too scary and discouraging. I would be scared to death when I saw it at night. I forgot about the content and didn't dare to put it on the bookshelf.

The plot is quite smooth and overall okay. I hope the protagonist doesn't want to start a harem. Also, some of the descriptions are a bit too deliberate and stiff. The characters' lines sometimes feel like they don't fit the character's image and are a bit out of character. I think it will get better as I write it later. Come on, author.