Life Like Leo the Cat

After seeing the introduction, I sang decisively: A tornado destroyed the parking lot and a new storm has appeared 🤫

Give the author some great advice! The story of this book is very good, and I like it quite a lot, but the author's story is too... Unclear at the beginning, which may give people a feeling of "what the hell?" "What's the situation of the protagonist now?" "What experiment is this?" "What is the purpose of the experiment" "What is the standard for scrapping the experimental subject?" "What is the context of the plot?"! Maybe the author wants to lay down some more foreshadowing, explain it later, and create surprises for us readers. But doing this at the beginning of the book may not be user-friendly and may make new readers confused! If readers can't see it clearly, the book's performance may not be very good! And the author will most likely not be motivated, and some not-so-good phenomena will occur! I would like to give the author some advice, that is, the context of the story should have a simple and clear overt line, and the foreshadowing should be buried in the dark line! At the beginning, try to analyze the foreshadowing buried in the front as soon as possible, don't delay it for too long! (Solved within one to two pages), and in the middle and later stages of the book, some long-term hidden clues can be buried! I recommend the author to greatly revise the experiment log at the beginning of the story, so that we can understand what kind of experiment this is! Are aliens capturing people on Earth for experiments? Or are some super organizations on Earth doing experiments? Give an introduction as soon as possible, reduce the amount of foreshadowing, or deal with it quickly! Then, the author needs to add more scene descriptions, time descriptions, and character appearance descriptions (secretly tell the author a little secret: these descriptions can improve the number of words!). Why are these descriptions needed? In fact, these descriptions are for readers' reference when reading the book! Especially in such reading-flow novels, describing a scene/time/character traits in detail can create an "anchor" for our readers, allowing us readers to have a better understanding of the story and a better reading experience! The above are some suggestions I gave to the author after reading this book. I hope the author can write better and better, and I hope Qidian can have another novel about the gods! Welcome friendly communication! 😁

Post one post every day and try to use the reader account as a moderator as soon as possible 🥺 Thinking about having to do this again for every book in the future, it really hurts my balls...

It's great, Super Cat Leo feels like déjà vu.

Hmm... It seems very interesting~\(≧▽≦)/~

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Make your own way and let others tell you! Those who should be adopted must listen with an open mind.

😎Effort, humility, acceptance, struggle✊

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