Rebirth of the Ancient World: the Avenue of Heaven and Earth

You can write it. Come on, come on.

It's best not to write about distance when writing about prehistoric times. The prehistoric times you wrote don't feel as big as a galaxy. How big is a billion miles? There's more to the solar system, right? However, how many days does it take for an immortal to fly? It feels like a loss of face. No matter how bad a real immortal is, he can still fly faster than the speed of light known to humans. It is best to use time to represent it, such as how many yuanhui have been flown, how many river systems are in diameter at each step, etc.

Most of the prehistoric novels travel through time to accept Kong Xuan, and the four monkeys should not hang Yuanshi, punch Zhunti, kick away Hongjun, accept Nuwa or Houtu They are all old prehistoric routines with good customs

Another book that takes six ears as disciples! Almost half of the Honghuangliu in this starting point is for Liu Er Ye Tu. I really don't see any advantages in it.

I will accept it if Rahu dies. . . Then he took the form of Rahu. There is no point in Rahu not dying.

Now that I've seen it, I think it's a pretty good one among prehistoric novels! The theme is well chosen, a bit like the prehistoric creation with a high level of seniority! But the book "Ancient Creation" is really full of poisonous points! All kinds of families, including daughters and sisters! All kinds of poison! Then in the later period, the map was changed again. This kind of messy new characters and new realms. I hope this book will not be like this book! Come on! It's best to have no heroine. Nine out of ten books from the Ancient Dynasty are written by Nuwa Houtu. It's really annoying to read!

I have always wondered why the protagonist has to accept apprentices when he arrives in the prehistoric times. Does it make sense? Zhen Yuanzi is just a boy, who calls him LOW? Did the Duke of the East and the Queen Mother of the West accept an apprentice? Who dares to say that they are not great gods? Kunpeng is a demon master, but has he accepted a disciple? It can also be said that Lao Tzu's original teaching to Tongtian was to practice his own "Tao" (the original "Chan", the "Jie" of Tongtian, and the Western "Pudu" and "Enlightenment"). But other people don't need it. Do you expect your disciples to intervene in the big boss's fight? Are you kidding me? Let alone transcendence, are there any disciples who have reached the achievements of their teacher (primordial, heaven-reaching, etc.)? I always feel that there is a misunderstanding in prehistoric novels. It feels like they are writing about gangsters. Hongjun is the leader of all Hong Kong. The Sanqing occupies Shatin, Tai Po, Sham Shui Shep and other districts, and the West occupies Tuen Mun, Yuen Long and other districts. A bunch of people open incense halls, worship the leader, and make films for each other for the sake of profit and face. All the strength has been lost.

The writing was actually quite good, but it's a pity that I didn't stick with it.

The protagonist Qiankun originally had no grudge against Luo Hu, and there was no reason to participate in the Dao Demon War. But now that Heaven has intervened, the protagonist has the idea of ​​​​killing Luo Hu. It should be impossible to kill him, and Qian Kun and Luo Hu have enmity. This is the cause and effect of participating in the war in the future.

The writing is OK. I hope the author has experience and can write richly later.

This is the first investment book of the new year. I hope the author can read more and write better. At the same time, I hope the author can check for typos after finishing writing. After all, this is the beginning of a new book, and too many typos will affect reading. In addition, I want to make a complaint. I haven't read any ancient books for a long time. I almost forgot what the word Hongjun looks like. When I first saw the word Hongjun, I thought I wrote it wrong. But later I realized that I was drunk too. Finally, I wish the author this book will get better and better results.

I'm here to ask: "Where did the Qiankun Sword come from?"

I don't understand why everyone has to practice swordsmanship. A good Qiankun Ruler can be made into a Qiankun Sword, but the innate spiritual treasure can be modified at will?

I decided to collect it when I saw more than prehistoric times.