The Strongest Brother Development Plan

What can I say about this book? I always have a weird feeling when I read it, that something is wrong. After thinking about it for a long time and reading a lot of book reviews, I finally understood what was wrong with this book. First of all, this is a time travel story, and the protagonist has a system cheat. But this system can tease, make suggestions, and issue tasks based on the protagonist's plot. This is a bit weird. In books, the protagonist drives the plot, but now the system drives the plot, which is embarrassing. Secondly, the protagonist used to be a master of control. How come he became an idiot after traveling through time? Sometimes I don't understand this, and sometimes I don't understand that. The war also relies solely on the superiority of the arms, that is, the crushing type, without any IQ as a commanding type. As a talent who can challenge the god level with the strength of a 5-level warrior, after time travel, any little gangster at the beginning can make the protagonist fall into a trap. If others show a little bit of skill, the protagonist will act like a fool, bumping around everywhere. There is no wisdom that a ruling wise general should have. Finally, the system of this book makes people shudder. A soldier has a third-rate military force, while a captain at the level of a captain is first-rate. If we go up here after this, won't all the soldiers at the royal guard level be masters of overcoming tribulations? This master is too worthless.

Pfft, I thought the title of the book was "Plan to Raise the Strongest Little Brother" 😅

The arrows used by 50 archers actually cost 120,000. I remember it seemed like 50 for each person. After charging so much money for 2,500 arrows, the protagonist has not done anything to the other party. Is it just because the other party is a beauty?

The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carrier, and sail battleship are not suitable for aircraft carriers. Steam engines or magical arcane power need to be developed. The technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is to downplay the gameplay and species combat power level system, and present a real fantasy world. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. There are also ferocious beasts, huge beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas as well as various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels. To construct a Chinese-style fantasy world, the world view must be deep and impactful. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races

Maybe to match the title of the book with the content, the soldiers under his command are called little brothers! This is not an ordinary lowlife. After reading three chapters, the plot and writing are okay. However, calling a soldier "little brother" immediately lowers my opinion. I feel that this kind of call is childish and cruel! If the author wants to make some money from this book, I suggest changing it!

The subject matter is a good one, but unfortunately, the writing style is limited, which makes me feel awkward while watching it.

Why are there only 5 investors?

How come no one has read such a beautiful novel?

Build a supporting building and arrange it for special characters in the magical camp. If you want a role, you can leave a message here. You can customize your character's profession, expertise, skills, martial arts, moves, equipment, etc. I will choose at my discretion. Those with outstanding settings will have the opportunity to become important characters in the book, accompanying the protagonist's growth and providing support! Everyone is welcome to come and play!

😰 Even tigers aren't that arrogant. Ignoring bows and arrows is too much.

I am very interested in this book by the author. The author's writing skills, plot setting, and obvious conflicts make it very readable. Highly recommended!

This novel sets up suspense in many places, laying the groundwork for what follows. It's beautifully written and I like it very much~

At first glance, the layout is not big. The little brother calls me like a bunch of gangsters.

The novel is quite good. It can contain new ideas in the ordinary. It is twists and turns and evocative. The writing is well controlled.

Why call me younger brother? Is it better to have a little bit of mixed energy? What we want to see is the lord, the majestic and solemn lord, not some second-rate bastard.

Reward 500 first, then reward after the New Year

Is the author Japanese? ? ? If not, it is recommended to change the name of the protagonist. You can change it as you like, for example, changing it to Gu Jianguo is better than your current name, and I don't feel disgusted at all. To be honest, the name Gu Qiqi is very uncomfortable, so not many people will read it. I haven't read this book yet, but I don't want to read it just by looking at the introduction and table of contents.

Chapter 3: Isn't that chamber of commerce right? In this case, the price will increase? The town was destroyed by bandits. The unlucky ones must be the rich. The poor guy has nothing to grab, but the merchant still dares to raise the price? ? ? What's going on?

This book is too much. What the hell are you asking for nothing from? I can't even understand it.

It seems that writing novels not only consumes brain cells but also consumes physical strength. For the sake of better works, you must take good care of yourself!

Hurry up and burn your little universe. Your novel is waiting for you, so read it!

Believe in the hero, come on, believe in your ability, and you will protect everything.

Looking forward to a different plot. I like great writing, keep it up!

The article is very clear, the plot is compact, and the touching parts will make you cry! The work of a great god

It's tiring to wait until it gets better, it's so troublesome, collect it first, and then kill it when you're done.