Peerless Calligrapher

Congratulations on signing the contract. You've made a lot of money from your investment.

First-rate subject matter, second-rate writing, third-rate plot, and inferior eunuchs

The idea is good, but the logic behind your writing is inconsistent, and the writing is inconsistent, as if one second is one thing and the next second is another.

People are missing. You don't ask where they are and you are still beating them. Do you think it's appropriate?