The Records of the Heavenly Art of Jiangshan

It can be seen that the author was deeply influenced by Jin Yong. The more than 200,000 words are full of the shadow of "Yitian". Two magical weapons are used to kill the moon and rely on the sky to slay the dragon. After obtaining it, he can command the heroes of the world. All kinds of people and sects are fighting openly and secretly for it. Lin Nan is Zhang Cuishan. The author gave him a lot of pen and ink, but the difference is that there is no Yin Susu next to him. Lin Zheng is Zhang Wuji. The two appeared at almost the same time, and it's like "Yi Tian". I thought Zhang Cuishan was the protagonist for the first few chapters, but later I found out it was Zhang Wuji. The same is true for this book. I thought Lin Nan was the protagonist after reading the first few chapters, but only after 200,000 words did I realize it was Lin Zheng. There are many similarities in the scenes. For example, Zhang Wuji and Lin Zheng in this book both lost their parents when they were young, and they were both injured at a young age. Lin Zheng was hit by a poisonous palm, and Zhang Wuji was hit by the Xuanming God's Palm. Lin Zheng met a little girl on the boat when he was crossing the river. After Zhang Wuji was hit by the Xuanming God's Palm, he was taken to seek medical treatment by Zhang Sanfeng, and he met the girl Zhou Zhiruo on the boat. Lin Zheng practiced the "Yi Jin Jing" and cured the poisonous palm, Zhang Wuji practiced the "Nine Yang Divine Art" and cured the Xuanming Divine Palm. Zhang Wuji and Lin Zheng were both taken to Shaolin for treatment. In this chapter, it is written that a group of heroes went to Wudang Mountain to congratulate the Qingsong Taoist longevity banquet. People can't help but think of Wudang Zhang Sanfeng's birthday in "Yitian". A group of "martial arts sects" forced Zhang Cuishan to death and asked Xie Xun about the whereabouts of the dragon-slaying knife. I wonder how it will develop next. Will there be a discussion about two artifacts at the Qingsong Taoist longevity banquet? However, the clues in "Yitian" are very clear, and we can see the power of Jin Yong's writing. There are too many mixed things in this book. The excessive history does not develop the plot, but breaks it into pieces. As of now, there is no heroine. The language can also be more refined. The dialogue reflects the character's personality and is not filled with chapters. The progress is too slow, and I discovered the author's catchphrase: "Okay."😁

If this book reaches about one million words, and if it can still maintain its current high energy and excitement, it will definitely become a hit, and even one book will not necessarily make it a god.

Well written. Well written. Come on💪

I just read two chapters, they are very visual and the language is easy to read, very good! Please keep writing~

A must read every day, there is not much good content nowadays. It's rare to write with such care and I will support it to the end.

The writing is very good. If you write it according to your own ideas and write your own characteristics, I believe it will get better and better.

The work is too tiring and the reality is too skinny. This book has become my spiritual food. I must stick to it and keep waiting for your updates.

It takes time to become a god. It is such a good book and it can be seen that it was written with care. Come on!

Damn, you are secretly putting it on the shelves! Small reward subscription support!

Being able to describe all kinds of rich emotions so delicately and truly is truly extraordinary.