Perform Martial Arts All over the World

The author should be diligent, it's all about money.

Here's a little suggestion for the author: The author of "Yanwu Zhutian" has a very good writing style, and there is no obstacle in reading the text. I read 80,000 words in one go. Then I found that the author likes to use third-perspective text to summarize the story, which does not make the reader feel that he is telling a complete story from beginning to end. Secondly, the text gives the reader very little information. After reading it, I feel that it is a bit vague and does not strengthen the conflict and hatred. It is too much to fight blindly. My little suggestion is to write a stronger story and give readers more important information. For example, what is the reason for causing hatred, why should I hit him, and what is hateful about him. If these points can be achieved, I believe the author is not far away from becoming a god.

Eight mistakes, eight mistakes, where is the applause? ? ? 🤭🤭🤭 I haven't seen such a good book in a long time! ! ! ! Come on! ! Sao Nian. Give me a recommendation vote first. As long as you keep it, I will definitely book it all! ! I would like to make a small suggestion. When describing the characters, the movements are a bit fast, so the reading experience is a bit flawed, and it is a bit difficult to get into the drama! ! ! Some personal thoughts🙏🙏

How should I put it? It's very poisonous. A child of a family, and a child of a very prestigious family, was crippled by others. Just throw it aside like this, what do you want the other family members to think? Why are you working so hard? If you treat yourself like this when you are injured, no one will dare to work hard in the future. Even if we are injured, we have to throw it aside. Hehe. If this is really done, the death of the family is not far away. It shows that the family is short-sighted, has no ambition, and does not know how to unite the family's strength.

After a quick glance at this book, the biggest drawback is that there are too many descriptions of the characters' moods, which is so boring to read! If you can kill people, don't push too hard. With one move, you can decide life and death. It's fun for you and it's fun for me too. Isn't it great?

Another one who writes about other worlds under the guise of the heavens. It's almost sixty chapters and I haven't seen him travel through it yet.

I would like to ask, are there any substantial benefits to being on the list? Did I not see it, or did I not? Why not develop obscenely?

I hope the author will not use the word "traveler" from time to time. Since the protagonist has a name, just use his name, and there is no need to keep reminding him that he is a time traveler. This greatly affects the reading experience!

The writing is too contrived. You have to understand that the books on becoming a god are all written by novices.

The maid at the beginning was a bit cliched, and later on, I didn't understand the world view, so she just killed her family members casually? Can this kind of family be passed down? ? ?

Come on, author, it's not suitable for me. There's no way the article makes sense.

One chapter has two to three thousand words, and the content can be summarized in about ten words. The rest is all description. Although your writing style is really good, I think it is too much and too wordy. Could you improve it a lot?

Even if you don't have the gods, you still have to perform martial arts.

You go and rest, I don't. The pain is in your body, but the pain is in my heart ~ Once you've accepted it, you can go write romance novels, bye!

The book: Inner Rhapsody. It means that you can fully understand something when you think about it in your mind. Without translation, others can only understand about the seventh level, so many people think it is ridiculous! This book needs a confidant!

The author, Jun, would like to give you a suggestion. Since the protagonist has now come to a modern time, technology should be quite advanced, and at least there should be a mass-energy equation. You can let the protagonist learn physics in this world and understand the mass-energy equation, which will be beneficial to the protagonist's practice of skills. It would be unreasonable not to learn. If there are ways to become stronger and not use them, it would not be the protagonist's style.

Others are all over the world, but you still dominate the world on one planet!

A very scary book, a very scary world view

This system. . . Why not just make the protagonist invincible?

I was very confused when I read it. I don't know whether there was a problem with the author's description or a personal misunderstanding. I couldn't understand the level of cultivation at all, and what the artistic conception was.

Rubbish novel, normal people should not read it.

It's really poisonous and I can't stand it

The writing is so romantic that I feel tired from reading it.

I really hate this kind of person who has skills but cannot practice them, so what's the use of him?