My Mother Is a Fairy

I also flipped through this book when I had nothing to do. To be honest, it doesn't have the twists and turns of many novels. There's nothing particularly attractive about it, but I liked it right away. I like life-oriented things, which look warm. The male protagonist and his roommate have a really good relationship. I would like everyone to join in on such a secret thing as cultivating immortality. Let's embark on the path of cultivating immortality together. Not alone, not lonely. It is rare to risk everything for your friends in reality, so you can only experience it in reality. The story of Uncle Wang and his wife is also very touching. Uncle Wang, who has always been aloof, looks a bit cute when facing his wife. At first I thought it was a bit interesting, but now I think it's pretty good. I wish you the best. Come on big

This is my first time reading a male video book. I think it's pretty good, witty and interesting!

[Long review] True feelings I also read this book when I had nothing to do. To be honest, it doesn't have the twists and turns of many novels. There's nothing particularly attractive about it, but I liked it right away. I like life-oriented things, which look warm. The male protagonist and his roommate have a really good relationship. I would like everyone to join in on such a secret thing as cultivating immortality. Let's embark on the path of cultivating immortality together. Not alone, not lonely. It is rare to risk everything for your friends in reality, so you can only experience it in books. The story of Uncle Wang and his wife is also very touching. Uncle Wang, who has always been aloof, looks a bit cute when facing his wife. I only thought it was interesting at first, but now I think it's still good. I hope this book will work better. Come on big

Come on, author! Heizi, get away.

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Resume 2 updates per day 😄

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

You also need to learn some basic rules when writing negative reviews, right? Such unscrupulous negative reviews can easily be seen as a problem, and will have the opposite effect 😅

I haven't read the book (the number of words is too short), so I just followed the book list and came here to eat. Brother, the author, have you stolen someone else's girlfriend? He is here to ruin your job. The comment area is full of trumpet accounts, and they basically all say the same thing if they want to blackmail you. In fact, I feel like you can use this as a gimmick to create a wave of advertising 😏, but the most important thing is that the book is good. Also, you must have offended someone in real life, otherwise who would take advantage of you as a first-level cutie? Come on brother, even though I haven't read the book, I'm sending you a recommendation vote!

To be honest, I rarely read books by newcomers. I was really in a book shortage. I accidentally clicked in and read it in one go. It is indeed a breath of fresh air in the online literature world and a bit of light in the book shortage! ! ! This book contains a lot of interesting elements, and the author's writing style is pretty average. The rhythm of the plot and the layout of the text show that the author is a veteran. I just hope it will be updated soon! ! !

Which comments are obviously smear can be seen from the registration date. Clear. I hope the author will not be influenced by these black men

The author has room for improvement in character creation The author set the personalities of the four people in 403 at the beginning of the book, but did not highlight their different personalities in the subsequent psychological description of the actions. Just like the scene when Xi Jie was arrested, everyone should have different reactions and different psychology, but it is not shown in the article (or the author's detailed description is not sufficient enough, and the details that can reflect their character could have been described more carefully and appropriately) Furthermore, the description of details is better than the quantity. The same number of words of detailed description, different methods and different situations, the expression effect is also very different. In fact, there is no need to mention these for a good article, but the author's writing style and narrative method do not weaken the description and details like other good articles. It is obvious that the author's writing has the flavor of traditional literature, so naturally, suggestions should be made according to traditional standards There is also the issue of rhythm, which is difficult to say. Each author has a rhythm that suits him. However, the author's rhythm is still relatively bland, but how to improve it can only be experienced by yourself. The rhythm must be consistent with the writing power to achieve the best effect. Since writing power is a very personal thing, the author has to experience the rhythm that is suitable for the author (but I can give you a suggestion: if the writing is dull, the rhythm can be faster; if the writing is excellent, it can be more suitable for daily life, and the rhythm can be slowed down) However, looking at the author's writing style and rhythm, it seems like a newbie. It is already very good to have such a level. No one is good at rhythm writing, character creation, etc. From the beginning, they are all practiced one by one. The author is already a step ahead of others at the starting point of writing, and the subsequent plots and even the next book will surely reach a higher level {"NickName":"Little Pig's Hoof Paper","UserId":326228864}

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"Xiao Fan! Mom and Dad are leaving, so Mom left a thought and three wishes for you. However, the power of wishes is limited, and wishes such as destroying the earth are impossible to come true. Don't use them indiscriminately!" "Mom! I promise you and dad will come back." "This wish cannot be realized" "Mom! I wish to become a god." "This wish cannot be realized" "Mom! If I wish, I can make countless more wishes." "This wish cannot be realized" "Mom! I wish to have special functions such as invisibility, teleportation, and control of objects with my mind, or a powerful magic weapon, or even peerless martial arts!" "Similar wishes cannot come true" "Mom! I wish for 100 million, is that okay?" "This wish can come true. Please confirm whether you wish to make it or not." "What about... One billion?" "This wish can come true. Please confirm whether you wish to make it or not." New vest, starting from the starting point, ten years of experience, stable updates, quality assurance, feel free to enter! I have a story, do you have wine? Piggy Paper takes you into a different world of urban immortality!

Wow⊙ω⊙Who did the author offend? There are so many trumpet trolls talking nonsense 😅 Speaking of which, the trolls don't have high V numbers and no one believes what the ordinary members say! 😁😁 The boss of the navy army, look here: I have a high V account, and I also want to earn some pocket money. For 50 cents per comment, I will troll whoever you say 😁 First of all, a free one: Who is that? Oh, what about you! You're the author of this book, don't read blindly, it's you! Updates are not active. There is something wrong with my head!

Hahaha, this is a troll. Author, what on earth did you do to offend someone?😄

Although the protagonist guesses that he is not their son, there is nothing sinister about it. Why are all the negative reviews 🤔

Why are you scolding the author? It's not easy for every author, especially the newcomers, and they don't have any money.

Author, who did you offend? ! Come up with an idea, either directly confront him and fight back, or change your account if you really can't stand it anymore, otherwise everyone in this circle will be scolded in a minute or two, and I can't stand it even if the author can bear it.

I've been reading the book review section for a long time, and I feel like the author has offended someone? Although the books can't be said to be very good-looking, they are generally available, but the comments 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 really sound like they were written by others. What's more, can you who write negative reviews have some professional ethics? Just those few words 😅😅😅 back and forth to give you a bad review

I will obey you even if I don't obey anyone. What have you done that is so unwelcome to others? I read the book reviews and it was terrible; come on, writing can't be mastered overnight.

Since yesterday, the author has been receiving malicious attacks from trolls one after another. I remember last night I saw that the comment thread had been cleared, and I was wondering what was going on. Until today, it has turned into trolls. I think everyone has their own different views and opinions on whether a work is good or bad. Some people think it is a masterpiece, while some people think it is ordinary, which is normal. But if you want to evaluate a work, you have to point out the specific location. If you think this work is not good, you can point out in your review that the language is not fluent, or the subject matter is not to my taste, or the wording may be a bit harsh. However, for the author, he will have a general understanding of what readers are not satisfied with, and then after careful consideration based on his own ideas, he will decide whether to make changes or whether the subsequent writing style will change. I think the theme of the book "Immortals" is particularly to my liking. Urban cultivation of immortals is both a selling point and full of novelty. The pace of the plot is also slow and urgent, and the writing is also very good. However, I personally think that the connection between the plots is indeed not close enough and complete, and it does seem a bit messy in some places. Of course, this is also a personal opinion. I will still keep chasing it. After all, Brother Fan is so stupid. I don't know if he can survive to the end. . . Therefore, I still want to comfort the author here. The sudden negative comments from so many malicious trolls will make anyone feel uncomfortable. Those who are thoughtful have indeed taken the trouble to hire so many trolls to destroy the psychological achievements of an author. It is very tiring and tiring. I would like to wish all the trolls and initiators a good year \^O^/ Last but not least, the author should not be frustrated by this. The best way is to ensure daily updates. If you stop because of this, you have fulfilled your purpose.

Is it Shiyan Juju?

I suddenly felt that these brushes are quite good... I feel like there are a lot more posts all of a sudden. Is this helpful?

I looked at the number of clicks, 560,000. I was shocked. Why are there so many trolls? Everyone can tell they are trolls. No matter how they criticize, please give me a boost. People are just envious, jealous, and hateful.

The author writes very well, the trolls are all jealous of you, you have to believe in this, hahaha, keep working hard

Speaking of which, if you brush the data, haha, if you brush the clicks, you might as well brush the recommendation votes together. At least it won't be visible. Smart people know that, do you really think everyone is a fool?

Cheers, author. The writing is very good. I am a living fan. I am still reading. The writing is very good

I read the book after reading the reviews, and I thought the book was okay. It's just that this book review🤭🤭

Author 666, what kind of master have you offended to be bullied like this? I'm worried. People who like your work won't be scared away. We support you. Remember to add more updates.