I Have a Small Goal to Rob Him of the World First

The writing is okay, but the plot is not clear right now. If I continue to work hard to write the plot well, it will be more than enough.

The story is vivid and the plot is rigorous. Come on.. I would like to recommend the new book "Meaning the Immortal Way"

I hope you will feel free to teach me and leave your valuable suggestions and opinions. Yingmao will definitely listen patiently and respond to you. Please leave your thoughts. Of course, any interesting settings or plots must be left behind. 🙏

Hello readers, I am Yongmao. I launched the guest house. Friends who hope that they can appear in the novel, please leave your name downstairs or the name, vest, and nickname you wish to have as a guest star. Of course, it would be better if there are specific requirements. For example, long-term guest appearances, short-term supporting roles; the protagonist's friends, the villain who battles wits and courage with the protagonist, or a neutral third party can all be added. 😄Yongmao welcomes everyone to join this world. 🙏

Come on, for my 20 points...

The text is concise, vivid and lively

The new book has unlimited streaming, red envelope reward streaming, and live streaming. Already signed. I hope everyone can come and see it then. 🙏🙏🙏

What a great beginning, I like it, please update soon.

Just looking at the plot at the beginning has already overwhelmed the author's imagination. The plot is so exciting that it would be a pity not to become a screenwriter.

He is not very slow-tempered and knows how to be cautious when doing things. The protagonist really has potential, ahem, I hope I can find a partner, otherwise I will look lonely.

Looking at the beginning, it's not bad ~ keep up the good work, don't be a bitch 😚😚😚

It's really beautiful, give it a big thumbs up and keep up the good work.

It's so beautiful, really. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it. I can't stop.

Good article, very attractive, good taste

Must sign every day!!!!!!🌹🌹

Enthusiasm is slowly worn away, so if you see things like unsatisfactory results in the novel, you, the author, have to persevere. Everything is difficult at the beginning, hard in the middle, and even harder at the end. Persistence is the last word.

I just read a few chapters and the author paid great attention

One vote, come on, the author. To be honest, I rarely read the fantasy genre, but I also feel that the author writes carefully. I hope friends who like this book can support the author more. The new book is a seedling, and it needs more care. It is not easy to create with heart, and it deserves respect... I am just a humble opinion, and I hope everyone can bear with me! Don't complain, reality is heavy, and it's uncomfortable even if you don't want to go online, thank you!

The writing is very good! The most important thing is that it's fun to watch.

Today I found another rare good book 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Well done! Grab him a world first! Collection, recommendation and support!

I just saw the author's recommendation. I haven't read it yet, but the comments are not blacklisted. Now the word count is 110,000. I will save it now. I hope the author will work hard to update and the results will be great

The new book "Live Broadcast Strange News" has begun

I was surprised to find that the number of investors in "Small Goals" is still rising. Please stop investing in "Small Goals"! I would like to first introduce to you the review system of Qidian. 30,000, 100,000, And 200,000 words are the limits. If a book has 200,000 words and has not been signed, it is basically a death sentence. Except for a few slow-burning works, later data can turn the tide. For a normal book, if 200,000 words have not been signed, the editor has given up on it. The background data of "Small Goals" did not have an improving trend, but instead fell into a downward trend. After the content reached 200,000 words, I was rejected twice in succession. There was no doubt that it was dead. But I don't want to give up! This is Yomao's first book! It is the foundation on which the mediocre cat carries its dreams. How could I let it die? I thought of a way to turn the tide! Since I cannot and cannot change the editors' minds, the background data also shows that this book has no foundation for success. Then all I can do is to start from scratch and rewrite this book while keeping the soul of the book unchanged! It takes courage and awareness for a strong man to cut off his wrist! Now I am ready for these, but is this enough? Who can guarantee that the "Small Goals" started from scratch will be better than the current "Small Goals", or will the level of improvement be enough to satisfy the editor and readers? I don't have the confidence, and I won't foolishly think that as long as I have faith, I can write a more successful story. This is too subjective and idealistic! Therefore, "Small Goals" requires not only the awareness to start from scratch and the courage to make major changes, but also the great improvement of me! I believe that if you give a clichéd story to a master, he can still write it vividly, attract readers, and create a book that can be read! I want to improve my ability and use better fire to control the real story. Whether it is the structuring of characters, the narration of the plot, or the control of rhythm, for a newcomer, there are many things that need to be improved. I can't make progress just by dreaming. I need to write more stories and create more works to really improve. I originally wanted these abilities to continue to improve with the development of the story of "Small Goals". But if you think about it seriously, this is a very stupid behavior. You said that if you can't keep people in your story at the beginning, then no matter how much progress you make later, people won't be able to see it! If you can't even sign a book, how can you expect people to appreciate it? So I wrote a new outline, created a new character world setting, opened a new book, and tried to submit it to the editor. Fortunately, I passed! So I will publish my new book in the middle of this month. But does that mean I'm giving up on Small Goals? Is "Small Goals" destined to die? Totally wrong! I just found a way to improve myself and hone my skills with new stories! Really improve yourself, thereby improving the quality of "Small Goals"!

Ha ha! Small goals, big universe!

The first thing to do is vote for small goals! Come on!

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