Super Seminary: Marvel Thor

Thor, you actually want a hammer to strike iron? I wonder if the God of Thunder in Hammer is the God of Thunder!

I thought about it all night, and I figured it out clearly. Poor writing skills and a new author are not excuses 😟. I am currently watching Hero Company and Black Armor. I will combine this novel with all the Super Seminary series to make it the best 😡. As I said before, success is called wonderful, failure is called experience. Come on, I won't regret completing this ending in my last remaining junior high school period 😆 The writing is not easy to practice, so the outline needs to be rewritten, and the presence of new people is not the reason. I still know how to use water, and water can help me practice my writing. Come on😆

In the Hero Company, Carter is called Qiangwei and Catherine is called Qilin.

I am Thor... ... For the glory of the Northern God

First of all, there are Avengers in the super god world, including Tony Stark and Thor, but they were all wiped out by the devil's sniper.

After reading the first 20 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. 80% Of them are about the protagonist falling in love. Author, how much do you long for love?

How much mud do you have to have in your brain to write this novel?

Made-up heroine! Discourage! ! !

If Kesha hadn't been sent by Karl using a big clock to transmit the sacred factor to all parts of the universe, Kesha could have recovered instantly, and she was bombed voluntarily, otherwise the explosion would not have hurt her even a hair Ge Xiaolun, who could lift the Star Destroyer Sword, had no less than hundreds of thousands of tons of power at that time. Not to mention that the comics are a bit exaggerated, but in the anime the angel guard class must be around hundreds of thousands of tons. If you follow the guard, you can cut through the Grand Canyon. Without weapons made of cosmic silver and iron, you can't break the defense. If you want to really hurt the body, you can't break it. It requires god-killing martial arts In the movie Thor, let alone the power of 10,000 tons, whether it can lift a thousand tons is a question. Don't talk about the anti-neutron star. That one was transformed by the planet furnace and the dwarf king. Can it be compared with the real one? Thor in the movie has been weakened countless times and is simply weak.

The idea is good, but the writing is a bit unclear. I'll give you some encouragement and hope that I can have good works in the future~ By the way, I would like to suggest that directly writing the plot of "Legend of Heroes" will be more in line with the preferences of most readers. After all, there are still a small number of people who like joy... This book seems to be just a writing practice for you. I hope you can improve your writing skills and rewrite "Thunder God". This idea is quite good, come on 🤓

I read three chapters. . The protagonist is a pig who goes into heat when he sees a woman. . .

Think about what Qilin said in the original novel, this is Juxia City! The city where the Super Theological Seminary is located, the Juxia City where the military and the military are stationed, can all have rapes of civilian girls. I can't believe how people live in other places. The security in cities where the military and police are stationed is like this. You can imagine the situation in other places.

When the devil first arrived, Thor, the God of Thunder, was still there. What did the protagonist want to do?

This protagonist showed me what it means to be a perfect example of not telling the truth.

The author's ideas are very good, but it should be noted that most readers have watched anime and read many novels in the Super Seminary series, so what we want to see more is the variables, which can be said to be different! ☞Fill the regrets! And the growth of the novel's protagonist ☞'s state of mind! If you don't make changes, you won't be a good fan. You must dare to imagine and adapt. This is what a super fan says from the bottom of his heart. I hope the author can gain something from my words and keep writing books. ! Come on⊙∀⊙! ♥ The author must have a concept and outline when writing a book, so book friends please don't give random advice. What he needs is ☞suggestion! If you don't like the place, you can skip it.

I've read Chapter 3, it's probably written by a new author… I don't really recommend reading it.

Didn't it say there is a group? Where is it 😠😠

What a noob. . And this is still a harem story?

Is Thor actually the strongest in his mind? At first glance, you can tell that you haven't read the book carefully. Many of the later stages of the cultivation style are playing the cosmic style, either the Dantian, the sea of ​​consciousness, the sea of ​​​​qi, the cells, the five internal organs, the body is the universe, and there are countless strong men under them. Upgrade inheritance in order

I feel embarrassed when I read what you wrote.

The average lifespan in Marvel's Thor is only 5,000 years. Even if the second-generation Xin Zhao unlocks the gene lock, he still has a lifespan of 10,000 years. Look how weak Thor is. Yan is a third-generation super soldier. His lifespan has exceeded 7,000 years. If he hadn't died in battle and turned on the sub-biological engine to upgrade his divine body and rely on energy to survive and have an unlimited lifespan, what about Odin? The older you get. The stronger the force. But the body couldn't bear it. There is no limit to the lifespan. So said. He is at most three generations old. Not promoted to god. Thor is also the second generation at most.

First of all, the author's positioning is wrong. There is no Ryze in the Chinese comic Super Seminary. It's a mistake for you to put the background story of the game and the anime content together. Originally, there were many bugs that were difficult to fill. There is also the issue of positioning, what do you want to express? Is it the unyielding fighting spirit or the funny daily life among super gods? There must be a clear positioning. Or look tired.

Carl is a phantom, and all your goals are impossible to succeed.

The order of this plot is wrong. Kesha only came after the Battle of Tianhe broke out. This is all the other way around.

When I saw the title of the book, I decided to come in and read it. The Super God Academy itself seemed to have mentioned that there was an Avengers Alliance in North America, which was destroyed by the Taotie Group. In Super God, Marvel's character is the younger brother. I suggest the author continue to read the novels Super God is writing.

I have an idea. The divine body can be reorganized atomically. By snapping his fingers with the Infinity Gauntlet, Thanos can atomize the divine body. When the god's body can be reorganized in its original position. So said. Thanos' Infinity Gauntlet can't snap his fingers to destroy the divine body.

The plot is old-fashioned, you can watch it, the beginning is a bit unremarkable