Fujiang's Infinite Journey

Come on, author! It can be said that your book, even though I am a bookworm for ten years, the writing skills are still a bit lacking. The characterization is not deep enough. Especially the protagonist. But I still highly recommend it. It's just that the index is too small and not satisfying. I would like to make a suggestion, Fujiang's ability must be reflected. Infinite world words. I can give you some reference directions. Nowadays, Infinite Streaming mainly writes about two-dimensional movies. So can we travel through other novels? I felt really good writing those scenes. No one has ever written about it.

Why is it always like this? Every time I see a powerful theme~ But in the end it will change... It is obviously based on the body~ If you don't develop your own strengths... Buy a gun... Then why use Tomie theme? The writing in the back is not as good as I thought~ I think it's interesting that I haven't read the book "Fujiang by Passerby"

First of all, let me say that this book is not good-looking in my opinion 1: Without Tomie's characteristics, Tomie should be a collection of evil 2: This book should not focus on Tomie, and the title should not be called Tomie's Infinite Adventure. It is more like the adventure of a person who has acquired Tomie's abilities, because reading the title of the book gave me a kind of expectation. The greater the expectation, the greater my disappointment. 3: The books written mainly about Tomie should be written as fanfics, and Tomie's ability must be weakened. Tomie's characteristics are not highlighted at all. This book is a fantasy novel disguised as a fanbook, although I know that those who really write about Tomie will be blocked. The subject matter of Tomie is very difficult to write about, and I played the role of Tomie. Tomie should write a story, or say that Tomie is chasing me, etc., Because Tomie will give people a sense of mystery from beginning to end. If it is written as I am Tomie, it will be less mysterious and more likely to make people feel boring The author may have submitted to the wrong area, or he originally wanted to write about a fan, but this book is a fantasy novel, and readers in this area may have more expectations after seeing the title. If the author really wants to write about Tomie, let me tell you my opinion. Tomie is very difficult to write because he is composed of small stories, with no connection and no plot In short, it is not good to watch, and I can't read it even if I skip chapters. Maybe it's because I have high expectations.

This book is still very good. One thing to say, how many people can write well about Fu Jiang? It means copying the original, second and third creations and trying to incorporate them into your own works, with at most some slight adjustments. Very few people can write a system that fits their own works. The author added his own system to the original image, which is very logical. Moreover, the Ke system, the main god, etc. Are also integrated very well in the back. As for suggestions, I don't have anything to say. As long as the writing at the end is clearer, less messy, and leaves fewer pitfalls, it can be written well, at least it won't be a eunuch. (If you can fill in the pit, just pretend I didn't say it) Ps: This is purely a personal opinion and is for reference only.

The author's writing is a bit messy, but if you ignore the shortcomings and read on, it's still a good book. I kind of admire the author's imagination.

The rhythm is a bit slow, and the content is a bit confusing and jumpy.

Come on, I haven't seen Tomie's novel in a long time.

This is not about Fu Jiang at all. I was deceived. All the characteristics of Fu Jiang are not shown. I came to see Fu Jiang. This book is not about Fu Jiang. The title is deceiving.

Guan Yu looked down at Takeda and said, "Have everyone brought them?" Takeda raised his head and said, "They are all here." After saying that, he waved his hand and the following people came out from behind him: Oda Nobunaga (166cm) Uesugi Kenshin (156cm) Toyotomi Hideyoshi (140cm) Date Masamune (159cm) Tokugawa Ieyasu (156cm) Yamagō Masokage (130cm) Tokugawa Tsunayoshi (124cm) Saito Yoshiryu (175cm) Ikeda Terumasa (130cm) Ishida Mitsunari (156cm) Takeda then said: "Where are your people" Guan Yu turned around and said: "Come out!" Only the following people appeared: Zhang Fei (190cm) Zhao Yun (188cm) Lü Bu (210cm) Zhang Liao (186cm) Zhou Yu (181cm) Xiahou Dun (190cm) Cao Ren (180cm) Sun Quan (180cm) Sun Ce (183cm) Sima Yi (182cm) Guan Yu: "Single fight or group fight?" Takeda: "Let's fight in a group." …………Lu Bu: "Who the hell hugged my knee?!" "Baga! Wow, Tokugawa Tsunayoshi!" As soon as Lu Bu lowered his head, he saw someone climbing up holding him on his knees.

Disgusting, it turned out to be a transformation text 😰😰 I feel like vomiting

After writing about Fu Jiang, I ended up getting a low-key ring. I was really convinced by the author.

Am I the only one who thinks the writing is messy? I really felt that the writing was very messy, there was no rhythm at all, and someone else would write it the next moment. On the contrary, the protagonist's sense of existence was horribly low.

Can this author write well? He always makes some jokes that he thinks are right. Not only does it not fit the theme, but it is also quite dramatic. I came to see the protagonist use Fujiang's abilities to struggle to survive in a dangerous environment, not to see all the playful smiles and malicious jokes!

The low-key ring persuades you to quit, what age are you still playing low-key?

It doesn't work anymore. The more I look at it, the more confused I become. A low-key ring? I want to see Fu Jiang show off his charm in all directions, and what's even more outrageous is the domineering mainland. It makes my skin crawl.

Come on, as long as you write boldly, you will be countless times better than anyone who can't write eunuch. Besides, the cover is very beautiful~

The starting point seems to be to seal a lot of books at the same time and then review and unblock them one by one But anyway, the reading experience is extremely poor. I hope the author does not want eunuchs. If you move, it is best to move them all Because this book is really beautiful 😭

Fake corpse😠

I'm a little speechless. It's boring to wear a low-key ring after turning into Fu Jiang.

I will put this book in the folder I marked as Eunuch Concentration Camp. I will always remember you.

Apart from biochemistry, it was okay, but the rest of it was completely unbearable. The main character was mentally retarded and turned into a virgin. It was really disgusting.

It's too poisonous. First of all, the writing is not very good at the beginning, and then a low-key ring appears out of nowhere, and the fujiang is still hairy. The main world he returns to is actually the world of Fighting Breaking the Sphere. I am really speechless. Can an infinite writer be able to follow the path of cultivating immortals? Sharp

It took me a long time to write this book. As a first book, it is already very good. In fact, many times, you really don't care too much about other people's opinions. It's easy to question and lose yourself. For the first book, it's great if it can be completed normally. The result doesn't matter, but it's a pity that it lacks an ending.

The protagonist did not use points to take the path of specializing in Tomie.

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