Jie Jiao: the Legend of Vulcan

You must have plagiarized it. I have read a prehistoric novel about Yun Zhongzi. It is basically the same as this one, except that Yun Zhongzi was replaced by Luo Xuan. Wouldn't the author explain it?

We need to study the structure of the prehistoric system. It was very good in the beginning. But when I saw the apprentice, I vomited blood. According to the timeline, the Sanqing family has not been separated yet. Where did Jin'ao Island come from? With Jin'ao Island, where did the Holy Mother Turtle Spirit go? No more teasing later

Why does the author have a single chapter now? It doesn't look satisfying

Logically speaking, the score of this book is pretty good, but why am I having so much trouble reading it? 😓

I apologize to the author. Yun Zhongzi, who always thought I was plagiarizing, now finds that I am too simple and cannot keep up with the author's ideas. Come on, come on! ! ! ! The author is great.

It's not for no reason that this book is a hit because of typos and repeated writing in many chapters.

The author doesn't want ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ to be so superficial. It's too superficial to make calculations.

There should be less conspiracies and calculations, but the calculations are so superficial. It's really tiring to watch.

It is said that Luo Xuan is a fire when drilling wood to start a fire, because this fire has merits for humanity, and it has merits and will later take shape.

The writing is very good, but there is too little. Come on, write more, don't be a eunuch.

What are you writing about? There is so much nonsense in this article and the writing is terrible!

The writing is so rubbish. Zhunti has the ability to take people from the list of gods. Is Tiandao a freeloader? Tongtian has the ability to bring out disciples from the list of gods. It is obvious that Zhunti is the weakest here, right? Zhunti's writing is even better than me.

Looking at the no rating in the corner, I feel very sad 🥺🥺🥺, please give me a five-star review, please give me a five-star review, please give me a five-star review, please say important things three times. 🤝

I just want to know whether all the great powers here rushed to save their disciples 🤫 With such a grand world view, I have never seen space movement. Whether it is Da Luo or a saint, they are all busy with travel... When he was a god, Yuan came late and his disciples were brutally tortured. Can't you just wave a space crack and reach your destination directly?

The more I read what the author wrote, the more irritated I became. Is this intentional because you don't know how to write? You were taught Chinese by a physical education teacher. You also suppressed the golden wheel of merit and suppressed luck. People were almost wiped out. You suppressed, suppressed, you are a fool. The description of the battle process is pale and feeble. If you use magic weapons, you can't kill people at all levels. I trouble you to read Dian Honghuang's works again. If you write again, you can't distinguish the levels.

What is this thing written about? There are so many spiritual treasures and even people with cultivation levels that can't be killed. They can't even kill people with a level lower than yours. You still force me to mention it. Who gave you the courage? Is it Liang Jingru? And if Chanjiao doesn't treat you as disciples of saints, why should they be merciful? If they are in the first year of junior high school and you are in the fifteenth year, kill all the Chanjiao people except those who want to rebel. If the Ran Deng people rebel again, they will go crazy.

Nowadays, those who write prehistoric novels are particularly confused. There are calculations everywhere. Daluo Jinxian has jumped out of the long river of time and space, and his fate and cause and effect are no longer deepened. Not to mention a saint. The protagonist has not become a saint yet, even if he is a saint, I would still be drunk. Those of the same level can only be regarded as beings of the same level. The higher the level, the more difficult it is to cross. Not to mention calculating.

In fact, the stories of every Daluo Golden Immortal in the prehistoric times can be written into novels, and they do not necessarily need to be saints. Daluo is already very strong, okay? For details, please refer to the projection of the heavens. Every Daluo Golden Immortal can only be achieved by stepping on the bones of countless people. Daluo people are beyond the control of fate and time. Some people talk about teleportation. Others are much faster than your teleportation. People simply don't care. If I look at you for thousands of years or trillions of light years away, you'll be dead. What else do you need to chase after? It's too unqualified. There shouldn't be any fighting across levels. It just needs to show the strength of the protagonist. It's just imposed. This is the real Daluo Jinxian, okay?

This author's writing style is so bad, there are no good books in the world

It is an obviously abusive article. The protagonist is beaten like a dog by Buddhists every day but never dares to fight back. Even if he is killed by Buddhists, he does not dare to fight back and kneels down to lick it. Ordinary people say that they cannot understand. They are all trying to increase the number of words.

The realm is chaotic and the plot is chaotic, that's enough

I haven't even read a few chapters, but the protagonist keeps getting slapped in the face. The protagonist's character development direction is the same as Hongyun's.

I can't stand whether IQ is online or not.

It's very embarrassing to read, and you can tell at a glance that it's written by a novice! The writing is rough and unreasonable!

Tongtian is written like a fool. The main character is obviously talking about the Great Tribulation of the Gods, but he also shows the Immortal Killing Sword Formation and the Ten Thousand Immortals Formation. It's so embarrassing to watch.

Luo Xuan was the first cremation flower of the human race that was drilled out of wood and made fire by Xiao Ren, one of the three ancestors of the human race.

The writing is L0W. The names of places, mountains and items used today are used in the prehistoric times, and there is no sense of immersion at all. Even if you pick up something else, that's fine.

Hmm, this book feels too white. It's such a novice. It feels like junior high school students will think their IQ is too high after reading it.

I really agree with some people's comments that they have already finished the book and want them to learn this and that. You traveled to 2018 and told him.

The protagonist's name appears dozens of times in each chapter, just like in The Infinite Holy Emperor, the writing style is childish.