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This book is bound to be popular. The fewer routines in the current book, the higher the potential for growth

I've finished reading it and I think it's really good. Have you ever thought about starting a group?

I read a few, and I think it's a good book. Good luck to the author.

By the way, do the actions the protagonist sells really work? I think washing your face frequently with warm water may be the real solution to the problem of beans, guess.

When I saw Chapter 19, I felt that it was meaningless to write like this. I couldn't stand it any longer. You might be able to make money in the early stage with all kinds of deceit, but in the later stage, how to deal with the problem of character and credibility? And as for the bettor, you are the author and you will definitely write upwards of 3 million in the end. You will only give Brother Pigfoot 20% of the shares. In the early stage, you only came up with the formula. Well, you are the kind of person who will be ruined in the future. Everything is produced by brothers. Are you afraid that he will take advantage of it and make a bet agreement? ? ? I feel like brothers can't accept this kind of thing.

What's going on? There's such a big difference between your second and third chapters.

Why is the introduction different from the main text? Isn't the protagonist named Zhang Yuanlin? Why is the name Zhang Jiaye in the profile? The protagonist's parents are still alive in the text, right? In addition, the salary of the protagonist's parents is too high. In 1972, a primary school teacher's salary was more than 7,000? ! It's actually just enough for home use

The subject matter is novel and the writing ability is strong. I rarely read urban literature. I feel that the progress of the story is a little slow. Maybe it is my personal illusion.

It is recommended to write in Mandarin, as writing in Cantonese looks weird.