Sword and Juggernaut

How should I put it? After reading three chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. First, Susie contradicted the teacher, and then she was a waste. Secondly, what was wrong with his father beating him? Is it what a student should do when he fell asleep in class? In the world of high-level martial arts, who is willing to look at a waste with no ability? Su west said he was a waste from the beginning, and the teacher called him a waste. Isn't it reasonable? It is comparing the ability of the blond woman with Susie. The protagonist does not know anything. He is called a waste by the teacher, but he is a waste himself, but he is beaten by his father and refuses to admit that he is a waste. Forgive me for not reading this novel. Leave.

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It looked good at first, but later on, it turns out that the protagonist is a gangster or a gamer. Only by playing games can the protagonist improve his strength. Now such a bad guy dares to do such a thing. If it weren't for the protagonist's aura, he would have been killed long ago. It is better for the protagonist to just play the game and get the magic costume to kill everyone.

Basically all the characters are sick. Are they all like this when they go out? Unless there is a problem with your circle

. . . If the data you brush does not have a good enough plot to match, it will still be embarrassing. This novel is not as good as the one written four or five years ago.

This book review? ? ? It doesn't feel that awesome. Are you all licking dogs?

After reading the first chapter, I found that the protagonist has a lot of shortcomings, and I was stupid enough to criticize him.

The entire book data is uploaded. Reading the comments in the comment area, I feel like I have traveled 10 years ago.

I finished reading it in one go and then went to read the book reviews. Author, you care too much about what others say, just write your own.

I also read their book reviews, but I don't think the problem is that serious, but I think I really can't accept the dog-licking aspect. If Dinah is okay, just say that she likes her, and it will be considered normal. But when I saw that policewoman, I really couldn't accept it. Fortunately, men don't fight with women. It's all about good looks. I can't find any other name besides licking a dog. I just kicked him a few times. You think you're made of iron.

After reading the first chapter, I lost interest It was still a popular thing 10 years ago, and it would be over after I wrote a few hundred thousand words at most.

The game the protagonist enters is of a traditional type, and many people are tired of it. For this kind of theme that can bring abilities into reality, I think it would be better to use the style of Thriller Park.

It's just two chapters. The heroine's name has been changed several times. Is it really that there are so many names or is it a typo? It's hard for Nan Nan to tell.

Oh, 404, 233. Sure enough, the cancerous book will not live long.

Author, this is a novel, not a comic. The royal formula of comics is rubbish in novels

I don't have much to say, just one word - like! Great work, looking forward to updates.

Settings and world views are all fine. But why are the plot and narrative writing so pale and childish? Is this an outline written using a software generator? I'm speechless. . .

This article is so sad. It feels almost the same as reality. Reality.

The gap between the wedge and the main text is too big, they are two completely different works. Hey~

This book feels like it was when online writing first started more than ten years ago.

Come on, young man, practice your swordsmanship to the extreme, and you can become a professional 25-year-old like me who can increase the explosive damage of teammates by 25!

He said that when reading this book, he always looks forward to the ending. I hope the author can reveal a little bit about it. Thank you~

I don't want to comment on your writing, but can you put quotation marks in the dialogue between the characters? There are a lot of typos, so be careful.

With nearly 3 million hits, you don't even have a monthly pass, and they say you are not a brush.

I will chase Da Da to the death, keep up with Da Da, and wherever Da Da goes, I will chase him, little brother.

After reading the part, I thought it was a rebirth, so I felt so uncomfortable that I continued to read it. However, when I got to the main text, there was no connection at all, and it was just a useless beginning. I felt like I was slapped in the head, and I was speechless. O__O"...

What a great book. The writing is exquisite and the concept is novel. It makes people read it again and again, and I can't stop reading it! Please cum for me! Thank you! ! !

Good article, the author has a strong writing style and a strong sense of immersion

Enthusiasm is slowly worn away, so if you see things like unsatisfactory results in the novel, you, the author, have to persevere. Everything is difficult at the beginning, hard in the middle, and even harder at the end. Persistence is the last word.

Three votes have been cast Come on, author