I'm Really Not Invincible

For those who say it's not good, please read it. The author writes a romance novel, not a fighting and killing novel. The protagonist is developed in various ways, and the heroine's IQ is downgraded in various ways. . It fits the setting of a romance novel very well. In the world of romance novels, this is pretty good.

This book is too poisonous and is not recommended for old bookworms. The aura of reducing intelligence is very obvious.

The subject matter is good, but the setting is really poisonous! You said that your cultivation is gone and your body has become ordinary! Then where did you get immortality? After reading dozens of chapters, I just can't stand it anymore!

Read 6 chapters! I would like to give you a piece of advice: Don't read "Zhang Shuo"! ! ! Originally, with my skill, I could easily suppress some minor poisons! But after reading "Zhang Shuo", I instantly became addicted! Tsk tsk! Need some rest! Good luck to all Taoists! ! ! 🙏🙏🙏

There are so many antiques and furniture and there is no house after living for so many years. The author's setting for the beautiful landlady is so reasonable! He still can't pay the rent, and the protagonist has no legitimate job and relies on catching fish to make ends meet. Why does a person who has lived for thousands of years not have a house? Why can't such powerful people do something normal to maintain their lives? Why does the author like the landlady so much? I died...

How should I put it? I haven't finished reading it, but as for the previous ones, there are still a lot of bugs in the book. For example, since the protagonist grew up watching Ye Xiaoyu, he has lived there for at least ten years. The landlord is 24 years old. 24 Minus 10, does he collect rent at the age of 14? Of course, it is not excluded that the rent was collected by the parents who were the landlords before. However, according to the description in the article, it seems that the protagonist has just moved there for only two or three years, and there are many other bugs, which I will not go into.

A beautiful landlady, childhood sweethearts, and a happy enemy. I can't help it, maybe I'm really not suitable for reading urban literature. There are too many beauties. .

How can I put it? The author is not good at characterization. The protagonist does have to live an ordinary salty life, but it is not enough if it is too salty without passion. The main reason is that the plot progresses slowly and the spiritual energy recovery speed is too slow. So, but can you not make the immortals look like weak chickens? You must know that a skinny camel is bigger than a horse, and those who can survive are not weak chickens🐔. Even if they are injured, they are not at the mercy of others. They all have their own trump cards, and they can be hunted by a race that they don't know where they are from? Then there is the love life of the protagonist, which only describes the female protagonist. The description of the male protagonist only gives me one feeling: he has no feelings for women, no love at all, and they break up as soon as they break up. I still don't know if it is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. If it is a single female protagonist, the male protagonist shows no emotion at all when dating Jiang Jingnan, especially after meeting the parents. Do you know how much it hurts your self-esteem if you keep your girlfriend dry for so long? The Immortal Emperor is also a human being. Being married does not mean that you have a love experience. If people get emotional and say that you break up, you might as well not have a heroine and live up to the image of a scumbag. If you have a girlfriend, you should keep a certain distance from the female friends around you. If there are multiple heroines, you should describe the love process. After all, the feelings of each heroine occupy the plot. It is impossible to describe a heroine too much, and breakups are not described in this way.

I read 71 chapters in one go and it was very satisfying! Daily life is as ordinary as water, but there are also decisive killings and doing whatever you want! Very good, come on!

Has anyone noticed that this cover is a stolen picture of the Dream Master?

It's really disgusting. In the latest chapter, the trouble I caused is right and proper, so let others exercise. The level is not on the same level. What's the point of asking others to die for exercise? Exercise to death?

Come on, author, this book is good and great. Your book is the second one I have fully subscribed to, and after reading some pirated copies, I immediately came back to read the original version. I feel that this good book should not be tarnished. Brother author, come on, take good care of you.

A serendipitous discovery. This book is pretty good.

Heck, I've read chapter 230 now. It's quite interesting, but the handling of the relationship between girls is a bit unbearable. . .

The plot is really good, but there are few interesting points and too much daily life. It would be good if there were more interesting points. The book girl crazy licking the male protagonist is better than being a dog licker. This is still more comfortable.

The title of the book is a bit following the trend, but now that there are so many of them, I'm used to it. The rhythm is not well grasped and the focus of the description is unclear. The emergence of spiritual energy recovery ability is a descriptive point, and the leisurely and contented life of the immortal species is also a descriptive point. The author is too greedy and wants to capture both description points, but ends up losing more than he gains. As a result, the plot jumped sharply, creating a sense of tearing. In terms of character design, the male protagonist doesn't have much problem at the moment, but four beauties have appeared in the first ten chapters, including the rich sisters, the beautiful landlady, and the sister next door. The probability is in the eye of the beholder and the wise. However, Ye Xiaoyu's character looks very strange. It says he is eighteen years old in writing, but according to the author's description of his expression and language, he feels like a child of only eight or nine years old. There are only ten chapters in terms of worldview, and not much has been revealed yet, but there are vague signs of collapse. Since there is too little information, we will not comment. In addition, I have also read the book by Xia Huaniang, and I always have a sense of déjà vu. Finally, I wish the author to write better and better (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author, I just want to say; the sea is all water

After reading this, I have one thought: This article is great~

I felt relieved when I saw this comment section. After all, being pinned to the top is not a good position.

The book is good, Shen Nong has tried it, and the medicinal effect is worth three coins and twenty years of wild ginseng. ————Yi Yunyu is here to try it👅

After reading too many Wudi articles, I only have the ability to read them. I have to resist reading them for a month every time. If I read more at a time, the result is still not much.

I like this book very much. It is one of the five books that I like the most so far. I hope it will get better and better as I write more. After all, the plot has not yet unfolded. Just don't write it to pieces.

I feel very good after reading more than 20 chapters. The more people comment on it, the more popular the book becomes. Come on, author 😁

If the two female characters can be well portrayed, this book will be much better. Not many people are willing to subscribe to harem books.

Alas, if it wasn't a daily stream, I would have watched it

Can you update it quickly? I won five million?

A 13-year-old bookworm passed by... Yes, it's more interesting than pretending to be cool and getting slapped in the face every day. Plainness is the truth. Pretending to be slapped in the face too much won't look good. Keep up the good work and take good care of you. Even plain love must have 5-star praise

It's really good to read, I can't stand it from the first chapter to now. Very consistent with the taste.

It's getting more and more flavorful, not bad! ! !

The writing is very good, I hope you can keep up the good work. The first floor of the building has been completed and will be completed in October.