I Start the Era of Cultivating Immortals

The subject matter was okay at first, but five years later, the style of painting suddenly changed. The writing was in a fog, and I had no feeling at all. The creative subject matter was in vain. Say goodbye.

When I read the first few chapters, the painting style was pretty good, quite normal, and it did look a bit like a palace. . . Why did the painting style change at the beginning of the part where everyone is informed of the magic? There was a sense of shamelessness, and several generals began to lose their respect in front of the emperor, making them look like the two brothers? I can't stand it anymore after seeing this, so I gave up.

It's a bit deserted, come and spray me! ! ! I don't even have anyone to troll me, it's so sad (´°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥｀)

I asked for an era name online, the protagonist's era name. I thought of one myself (Xian Yuan) but I didn't feel very good about it. Xianyuan: the first year of Xiantang. A bit vulgar. . .

This book is quite good. Although the writing style is a bit immature, the plot is smooth and the writing style is gentle. The imagination is also quite big. Although it is not a new genre, it is quite innovative. The jokes are so fun. The one about the Great Merciful and Compassionate Keyboard Buddha made me laugh to death. 233 The main character is not abused, the characterization is okay, and the supporting characters are not ** There are no fixed routines from the past. The writing style is immature but it is improving all the time. If I continue to write it, it will be a fairy tale.

The subject matter is okay, the setting is good, and the writing is not so good. I don't think it's too poisonous, but it is really unbearable and makes people have no expectations for the rest of the story. Moreover, many paragraphs or explanations are repeated, such as the issue of taxing pig's feet, which is repeated many times, and few readers have a long reading time span. I read sixty or seventy chapters in one afternoon. When there are repeated explanations, I feel very irritated. The emphatic writing technique is not recommended. Just mention it once or twice.

Originally, I had a lot of seedlings to protect, and I gave each one a vote, but the expressions of mua and sand sculpture that appeared after voting... ... Okay, okay, I'll give it all to you My little heart 🔨

There are very few people, so , , ,, , , , ,,, , I secretly eat shit

The subject matter is good, but unfortunately the author's rank is too low. Many parts gave me a sense of familiarity with the novel many years ago. Generally speaking, the subject matter is acceptable, and the content is old. It is suitable for novices who have just read books.

There is a question: Li Shimin has cultivated immortality, so what is the use of pig's feet? Good chicken bones

The subject matter is good, but it seems that the best part started to fall apart five years later. There is no main plot, just finish the salted fish rhythm

I can only say that there are so many bugs that it gives me a headache.

The subject matter is good, and the golden finger is also very good. Come on, I have been reading books for 12 years, and your book is okay. Don't be too poisonous in the later stage, make the logic smooth, don't collapse the outline, and write well. If you have more than 1,000 subscriptions, it will definitely be okay. Come on. A cool article should look like a cool article.

This setting is really not good. Foundation building is still a free-roam, and I have written so much, but I have not yet turned the Tang Dynasty into a cultivation civilization. Is there a main line in this book? It feels like there is a hammer here and there.

Hey, how should I put it, Xuanwumen, Li Er, and Li Shimin undoubtedly failed. After all, he could only launch a mutiny, which shows his **** failure,

It feels like the pace is getting colder, and I haven't updated it for two days. I said I was finishing up the plot and writing the outline, and I stopped for three days. I just came back and wrote for two days, and then I stopped updating without a trace for two chapters. Plus today is only two days, and I invested in it. Don't be so cool, author. I think you can rule the earth first, open up all the people to practice and rule the earth, plant a large number of trees and grass, increase the level of spiritual power, and then develop technology to face the stars and seas, and rule the entire universe. Then there should be a master of the world, right? You can invade other planes later.

After reading this book, I seemed to have amnesia. I always felt that something was missing from the book... For example, I don't know when the protagonist had so many spiritual stones, including the best spiritual stones... And when did he have the title of businessman? How to get space? How did you open a trading house? I don't know any of this... Am I losing my memory...

This is entering the palace! 😡

Let's review the writing of history first.