Extraordinary Evolution in the End of the World

I just saw Chapter 22 of the second section. Personally, I felt that except for the beginning, which was a little fast, the rest was pretty good. The male and female protagonists also liked it. I'm following this book, come on author(ง •̀_•́)ง

The protagonist has the potential to be a spare tire. Don't ask why, just ask that's how you wrote it.

I have been watching 50+ chapters, and the protagonist keeps licking me. I am thinking too much about Qiaoer not having enough to eat, thinking about Qiaoer, etc. I don't have any opinions of my own at all, so I can be named the spare tire king. I don't have any ego, I don't even speak loudly. Sad, author!

The protagonist and heroine have no apocalyptic atmosphere at all. They rely entirely on the villain to drive the apocalyptic rhythm. The protagonist is a high school student in heat. In addition to once or twice thinking about various kinds of people's hearts in the end of the world, the protagonist only thinks about whether Qiaoer has enough to eat and what happened to Qiaoer. The plot of the end of the world depends entirely on the protagonist's passion. It was so boring to watch, and I didn't even feel theapocalyptic feeling at all.

I really like the heroine's character and the slapstick feel.

The writing is still good, but the plot is too bland and has no ups and downs.

Write down the abilities that you think are interesting and want to see, but I don't want them to be too buggy abilities. Generally, they won't be used to affect the balance. The template is as follows Name: Identity: Ability name: Detailed description: Character traits: What are the limitations or weaknesses of abilities: (optional) What will happen:

According to the character of the protagonist, he is a supporting character, the kind who will not survive three episodes, the kind who licks the dog and actively sacrifices himself to death. Isn't the protagonist going to rescue his sister? How to change into pick-up mode? He went to the camp with no precautions, no need to rescue him, no worry about finding his sister? ? ?

With so few comments, I feel like not many people read it.

Yao Qiaoer is a bit busy and a bit poisonous

How long will it take to meet his sister and parents?