The Fairest Lady East of the River

This article is so fresh and refined. Although it started out as a street plot about a husband being seduced by his older sister, from the moment the heroine punched me, I knew I would be looking forward to the update every day. The author is actually a newcomer. Newcomers are all monsters. (´Д`)

The writing is good, I like it, I have added it to my bookshelf, please support the author~❤️❤️❤️

It has a personal touch, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's pretty good, but it feels a bit fast. Uh, I can't describe it, but it feels a bit strange.

Because I haven't commented since the college entrance examination, I will come later after applying for my application. I was quite depressed after my college entrance examination results, so I know how difficult it is to regain my mood, but I hope the author can cheer me up. The author is considered to be a writer who is relatively close to the readers. He will basically reply to this chapter, and he can't help but spoil it. The writing and plot are also very good in Qidian, but success still depends on luck, and unlike some writers who point out errors in the article and do not correct them. Many of the secondary CPs are also very attractive. In fact, my favorite ones are the CPs of Senior Brother and Hongye. One is a bit natural and silly, the other is shrewd and fierce, but they are just too sadistic. I sincerely hope that the boss will not be forgotten after opening a new pit, even if the characters from this book make a guest appearance in the new book. The last sentence, open a new pit soon!

There are 246 chapters in total. In more than 40 chapters, the male and female protagonists are still controlled by others. It suffocates me to death.

In fact, the overall outline of the whole book can be seen to be very good, but I don't understand why the whole book ends with the hurried explanation of the ending. Judging from the content of the last chapter, the amount of information can be considered very large. It is just an overview of the plot. According to my feeling, if the author's previous story development speed is followed, the content of this chapter can be divided into twenty chapters. If you add some water in the middle, develop a branch line or something, such as: 1. Yao Yu persuades Ning Yanyan to read more poetry and accompany him to the poetry meeting, this branch line; 2. Yao Yu Recall the branch line of why I fell in love with Ruan Si's memories; 3. How did the emperor, Yan Yingzhou, and Su Yaji discuss the branch line of capturing Prince Duan; 4. The butterfly on Prince Duan The branch line of Butterfly Birthmark and Butterfly Jade Pendant; 5. The branch line of Wei Changsheng and Hongye Niangzi; 6. The branch line of Yin Ping'er and Madman; 7. The branch line of Jin Ling'er and Douzi; Even the branch line of Yan Qingdu and Zhu Dongyan; I don't know if the author will make a side story. However, the story is still very interesting. I was actually looking forward to Ruan Si and Yan Yingzhou explaining their affairs with Yao Yu in their previous life. Ha ha ha ha.

The results are great! A book that can be conferred upon the gods 🤭

Yesterday I bought flower cakes online, and today I thought that the bald man is from Yunnan.

The writing is very good, but maybe the heroine should not have the idea of ​​​​marrying as a wife, everything is a single person's behavior, and Yao Yu's coming and going, there is a need for the heroine to be inexplicably obedient. If she has given up her feelings and completely given up, she will not be in such disconnected contact. I agree with Yao Yu's own statement that the heroine has changed to a higher-level hookup method.