The Basketball Boy from Shonan

I'm a troll. Well thought out. I decided to spray. What book is this about? Slam Dunk is quite beautifully written and has rich content. The following are the specific points: 1. Spend more pen and ink in the competition. You are not afraid of the word count, but you are afraid of not being able to express the feeling. For example, it is difficult to express the awesomeness of the Mountain King in a short battle against the Mountain King. Before I could regain my senses, it suddenly turned thirty or forty. It is not necessary to spend a lot of words describing each ball. It would be great to highlight a few of them. Think about the original animation. When playing Xiangyang, Sakuragi dunked in the air for ten minutes, and no one disliked it! 2. For online articles, there is no need to explain in parentheses. For example, Rukawa Kaede is recognized by the whole team (except Sakuragi). It affects the gaming experience, bah, it affects the reading experience. If you must add it, consider adding "ps:" after it. 3. I don't know if it's just me or if most people can feel it. The previously interspersed plots such as Mitsui Heroes saving beauties and Valkyrie slashing delinquent youths have been reduced, making the novel more inclined to a simple competition, a bit from a fan novel to a sports novel. I don't know if this change is good or bad, after all, I can't see the background data. 4. Just read the above content and don't let the nonsense of a troll like me affect your writing. The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work. over!

The beginning was pretty good, but after it was released, the emotional drama was just like Shi, so I just abandoned the book and left.

A passionate basketball fanfic that insists on having two female protagonists is disgusting and should be abandoned. It's really disgusting.

I am the first one on the reward list, and no one who comes after me can surpass me 😁

Battle between Xiangbei and the Mountain King~ I want to lose to Xiangbei, but I am afraid that Xiangbei will lose. Xiangbei never loses, but always wins, which is quite regretful of the "Star Change" of the year. If Xiangbei is defeated, I feel that many readers will abandon the book. After all, I have always been so prosperous and suddenly fell into the dust. Personally, it was a huge blow. Looking back, who else in Xiangbei, who has won all the national competitions, can't win? This will lead to the loss of many holes that can be dug in subsequent writing. In the end, it either turns into a fan romance novel, or it turns into a sports novel about conquering the world, or it ends. Keep waiting, keep worrying, keep hoping. Such nice fans are indeed too rare and I'm really reluctant to leave them. On second thought, "Perhaps, youth is full of passion but imperfect." I have written so much, but I don't know what I am writing!

It's a really good fan, but you're such a harem. . . I'm drunk too

I wish you all a Happy New Year one day in advance. ✌️

Come to Qidian and write fan fiction, not the system, not time travel, do you think you can get along...

Did the author want the three people from Xiangbei to transfer to Lingnan? This is a good idea. I really want to see the Xiangbei trio and the Xiandao and Fukuda combinations

I looked like a basketball boy from Hubei