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The subject matter is really good, but the writing is not good.

After reading the first ten chapters, the author's creativity is very good and the writing is quite smooth, but the pace is a bit too fast, many settings are unclear, the plot is a bit inexplicable, and the characters are very thin. Come on, author, it's best to revise the previous part. Anyway, I was confused after reading it and was successfully persuaded to quit.

Do you have any imaginative systems? Please leave a message and let me know! It's best to divide them into categories and think about collections, and then you can freely play with the rest. For example: Career Category: Toxic Anchor System Collectibles: Hat (Ability: xxx). Host: Wang Shuaishuai (Old Wang's family fights eagles all year round and cannot escape the reincarnation of being pecked by eagles). ...

When I was seven years old, I entered elementary school. On the day I entered the school, I was bullied by a fifth-grade child. I couldn't beat him. I swore bitterly in my heart that thirty years to the east of the river would be thirty years to the west of the river.         ，，，，， At this time, I met strong men in the junior high school realm. In time, they were the weakest among the strong men in junior high school. Their power was definitely not something I could match. Moreover, at this level, I had enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips! So scary. So I made up my mind to enter junior high school. At the age of sixteen, I have achieved great success in junior high school. After years of study and hard work, I no longer look down on my classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, I discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the restrictions of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful people and obtain the Great Way. But with the current world trend and the thin vitality of heaven and earth, it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal. I have to seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, I suddenly discovered that all the people around me were college students. At this time, my girlfriend of four years actually belonged to a huge family. In their eyes, I was like an ant without financial resources. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. I was forced to leave my girlfriend temporarily. I only remember the three-year agreement that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made with me. I recalled the humiliation, the powerlessness, and the pain I experienced that day in elementary school. My heart is roaring, roaring. The veins on my waist are bulging, and when I return, the sky will be stained with demon blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, I chose the Internet. From then on, I entered a large company and received guidance from a great leader. Even the time spent making toilets is used to study. As I continued to grow stronger, I discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair, met strong people, received life experience from the guidance of a mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from college. They have become my strength to move forward. Three years later, everything was calm and peaceful at the woman's home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she had refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The sound of the mount made the mother-in-law's face change slightly. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the end it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is different. Father-in-law suddenly thought of something and his face turned pale and he started to tremble. This was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. My voice rings out. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously where the mansion was. The answer was, Taiyi Xianfu (urban area) in the magical city, so the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame and arranged for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man named Ma wearing glasses rode a penguin to visit. After some pleasantries, I was invited to enter the new map Zhengdao Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as I entered, I found that there were about dozens of people present, and their strength was unfathomable. One can hear that I am not interested in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn 100 million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned for a while. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago.

It will take less than a day to watch Zizzi, come on.

If you have any characters you would like to include in the book, please leave a message. This building can be regarded as complementary to the system building. Anything that fits the plot and reality can be adopted. (I will never copy book reviews) For example: Qin Cheng Playing the piano Second-grade cultivation Passing IQ Note: There are no other requirements, so I can play freely (risk warning: moral integrity may explode at any time)... Well, the system building has copied a lot of book reviews. I hope that the dragon tower will catch up and let me copy more..., Ha, it smells so good.

I don't have any ideas. The title is what I want to express. No matter how little she appears, I still like her even more than the main character.

The harem is so serious that it is almost considered a cryptic little H-story. In addition, the choice of words and sentences is not smooth and there are too many mistakes. Hey, I don't know what to say, so I ran away first. Best wishes.

I came here because I heard there is an author here who likes to wear women's clothes and like to retract information.

Hehehe, that's quite interesting. Come on, author!

I have read more than 30 chapters, but I don't understand why there are so many quitters. Is the main character's ability to spray water? There are many organizations, one thing and another, and suddenly a group of senior brothers is formed into a group to give out tasks, and I don't understand who is who. It's confusing to read, why don't novels nowadays have time for the development of the protagonist? The first thing is that super powers suddenly appear, and then you start to contact various bosses, and upgrade from monsters. Even if you start from the middle, you will at least have the ability to protect yourself.

After reading the first chapter, I think it's okay. Is the city so scary? How come the newbie's grades are so bad?

When I first read this book, I thought it was a good book and I have invested in it. Hold on, no eunuchs!

Interesting, come on, author!

I've been addicted to auto chess recently and haven't read any novels. Not to mention that the writing style of this book is comparable to those popular works by great masters. It is still readable at the starting point. The subject matter is also innovative. I have already voted for the monthly vote. Good luck to the author.

When I saw the name of this book, I thought of Yang Yongxin

The creativity of this novel is quite good. Compared with other books from Qidian, it can be regarded as a good book. However, the plot is too old. Like that fiancé, the three-year appointment is a bit unbearable, so I said sorry, but I can't stand it anymore and I ran away.

The writing is really good. I like it very much. I will give you a recommendation ticket and keep up the good work.

Update soon. It's so well written. Come on and support you.

Thank you for the book list recommendation, thank you for collecting it

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If you, the author, had a system, would you be willing to meet the protagonist?

It's so good, please keep updating and subscribe.

The introduction is interesting, give it a try

Just for the title of the book on the discipline system, it's worth reading.

It feels like the male protagonist has been abused all the time, so it would be nice to give him a well-matched opponent~

The commercial housing in Shenzhen is more than 100,000 square meters, and in the novel, villas can be purchased for several million.

Brother, what number did you sign?

Absolutely a good book, keep reading and keep reading!