Unbroken World of Mortals

The writing style of the novel is very good, and the novel has just begun. I believe it will gradually get better. The shortcoming is that the plot is relatively scattered. I hope the author has his own outline and does not go off track.

Before breaking through the world of mortals, the rivers and lakes are deep. Although this article is about Jianghu affairs, the author's writing is delicate. As the author himself said, this article is worth chewing carefully. When the young boy A-Lan first appeared, he could be said to be a heartless little liar. Even Hu Yanba looked down on him, which shows that this A-Lan is really unpleasable. But in Hu Yanba's words, A Lan's temperament is related to his life experience, which is excusable. This coincides with the appearance of Juggernaut. Perhaps Juggernaut's raising of A-Lan has something to do with A-Lan's life experience. The author actually created a lot of suspense and foreshadowing in this book. When I read it, I really had to read it slowly so as not to miss anything. A Lan himself can learn martial arts moves after seeing them. This is indeed a skill. It can be said that with this function, A Lan can dominate the martial arts in the future. But A-Lan is simple by nature. He recognized Murong Shu as his uncle when they first met. His surname is Murong, which shows that he has no scheming, and the same goes for his subsequent escape. I actually felt a little sweat for A-Lan when I watched it. According to this development, if someone is willing to take advantage of this and control A-Lan's thoughts, the muddy waters in the world will really boil. Without seeing through the world of mortals, the rivers and lakes will never be calm. Whether it is the generation of the sword master or the current generation of A Lan, the royal guards, the people of the rivers and lakes, all the storms are caused by the author's pen.

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