The Underground World of Intelligent Live Streaming

Short review: New book, new work, the male protagonist mistakenly enters the underground world, and the live broadcast software is incredibly intelligent. Keywords: Fantasy Live broadcast Commentator: Nie Chang Book title: "The Underworld of Intelligent Live Broadcasting" Author: Guy Bad Status: 32,000 words, serialized [Book] Introduction: When outdoor adventure anchor Yang Ming accidentally came to the underground world, his live broadcast could kill everything in an instant, and even attracted the attention of countless experts and scholars. Extinct species can be found here, and missing myths and stories can also be found here, which subverts everyone's understanding for a while. Basic Information Comments: This book is opening, and there is no concrete information yet. However, from the title and introduction, it can be concluded that the key words of this book are fantasy and live broadcast. From this serious introduction, it can be seen that the author's writing style is relatively simple and not very romantic... Text Comments: [Highlights] Friends who have read my book reviews should know that I always like to write about the highlights and shortcomings of novels in book reviews, so now let's take a look at the early highlights of this novel, which has only been updated to 16 chapters 1. As mentioned in the previous basic information review, the author of this novel has a very stable writing style. Nowadays, many authors of new books like to have the male protagonist and the female protagonist do all kinds of stupid things as soon as they are released. They win attention, but the poisonous points are also brought out, and many people are poisoned and abandon the book. But the author of this novel doesn't. Judging from the tens of thousands of words so far, the author's story progress is logical. There are not many characters appearing so far, but the male protagonist himself can be seen to have an IQ and a brain. The plot progress can be summed up in one word, stable! I feel that the author is very thoughtful and ambitious. He wants to write this book into a large work with millions of words, so even if he is slow to enter the country now, he can still write it at his own pace. No effort, no waste, and orderly progress. This determination alone is very good. 2. It can be seen that the author put some thought into creating the highlights of the novel. Every novel must have its own highlights. The highlight of this book should be on this super-intelligent live broadcast system (I don't know if this can be regarded as a system yet). The author should also have a little understanding of the live broadcast industry. There are several paragraphs in the early stage that describe the complex relationship between the live broadcast platform and the anchor in detail (but I don't know much about this myself, so I don't know if what I wrote is correct⊙⊙). The design of this smart live broadcast platform is also quite interesting, but for now many ideas have not been released due to word count issues. I hope to see this smart live broadcast platform provide more highlights for everyone in the future. [Faults] For a new book, whether the author is a master or a newbie, there will be more or less problems. However, there are no big problems with this book. After all, it is stable, but there are still some minor flaws. 1. In fact, stability can also be understood as slow warming in another way. This is actually a very troublesome problem for a new book. A good beginning of a book is very important, especially in a place like Seven Points where there are so many new books. If a new book fails to catch the attention of book lovers at the beginning, many people may not be able to stand it and abandon it directly. No matter how exciting the subsequent writing is, they may miss out on a lot of reading. This book reaches Chapter 16, but the golden finger came out but it did not bring any substantial help. It can be regarded as slow progress. And to be honest, it's already Chapter 16. It's time to hand over the benefits of the golden finger. While the number of words is still small, everyone still has patience. I hope the author can let the male protagonist exchange for some "magical" survival materials through this live broadcast platform as soon as possible, which will make the show more exciting. Furthermore, the author's writing is a little wordy, using a lot of space, but does not give a matching amount of information. As I have always emphasized above, whether it is adding detailed descriptions or adding cool points, I hope the author can use concise and concise sentences as much as possible. Try to reduce the reader's feeling of boredom as much as possible. I also hope that the author can maintain his stable writing style in the future, try to incorporate more exciting points and highlights into the book, and reduce the chance of book friends having the idea of ​​​​"boring the book". 2. The author doesn't have any big problems writing books now, but it seems that he is not very good at describing the details of the environment and the appearance of objects/characters? Actually, you may think that these are not very important. For some long works with millions of words, many people will ignore these small details. However, if you look carefully at the really popular novels at the starting point, you will find that they actually put some effort into the details. This is not a must, but it is definitely a bonus. The detailed but concise description of the character's psychology is more conducive to shaping the character's personality without giving the reader a sense of irritability; The description of the environmental details can give people a feeling that the author is confident about the novel and resonate with the reader's sense of the picture; The description of the appearance of characters and things is also very important. After all, we are now a society that values ​​appearance. Believe me, readers are sometimes curious about whether the male protagonist is handsome or not? What exactly does his live broadcast system look like? Perhaps using a few simple and vivid descriptions mixed with the plot can better demonstrate the author's writing style. 3. As mentioned before, the highlight of this book has been carefully designed by the author. However, compared with some other new books at this stage, it is still not attractive enough and not distinctive enough. This may be because its characteristics have not yet been displayed due to the number of words. Compared with other cheats, the competitiveness of this book is still a bit weak. I hope the author can pay more attention, or strengthen the characteristics of cheats in the subsequent plot, or use a unique writing style to supplement it, or work hard on the plot, or excel in character description... In short, the author needs to show what is different from other novels and better than other novels. Otherwise, why should readers read your novel instead of others? Right?⊙▽⊙ To summarize: So far, this book does not have too many poisonous points, but it does not have too many bright spots. It is actually not a good phenomenon if it continues like this... Then there are some logic and typos, and some minor problems will not be discussed here. The author can read this chapter I left in your book. Personally, I am an encouraging commentator. I hope that the author can also take a look at his previously published novels when he has time, check for any gaps, and make persistent efforts! It is not easy to write a book from the beginning. I wish you stick to it and have a bright future!

This book is good. The IQs of the supporting characters are all online. There are no malicious people who stir up trouble. They are just good readers 🙂

I took a wave of poison The author has a poor grasp of writing Old bookworms, don't fall into this trap

It's a pity that what I wrote later was wasted. I was attracted by the title of this book, but it's a pity that I didn't write down the outstanding points in the title. What is important is the sense of surprise and adventure of wandering into a different world. What is the point of walking aimlessly and eating earthworms? Eating once is considered a transition, but you also describe in detail how many times you eat? More than a dozen chapters do not get into the main theme of "underground adventure", which makes the sense of expectation exhausted. What's more, the author is not a good writer who can write about ordinary wilderness and be immersed in it. Please use your strengths and avoid weaknesses and write elements that are different from other live broadcast survival stories! I won't go into details. It's all trivial matters like walking for more than ten days just eating earthworms and not being able to see people without taking care of their hair and beards. The protagonist's behavior is also inexplicable. What is he doing when he suddenly jumps into the water to swim? Eating earthworms is a pointless exercise because I don't have enough physical strength to begin with. There is also one exciting point mentioned in the introduction that is completely missing. The protagonist has entered an unprecedented different world. How much impact will it have on people in the real world? As a result, those viewers were just like ordinary live broadcast viewers. They were completely inexplicable and ridiculing. It was neither true nor the foil to the onlookers, and it also slowed down the rhythm of the writing. Using the shock of the onlookers to set off the extraordinaryness of the protagonist and giving readers a sense of superiority is an important point of enjoyment. You can say that the protagonist is not pretending to be cool, but just provides a browser from a perspective, but the protagonist himself is satisfied and the reader is satisfied are two different things. The protagonist can be mediocre and let the world setting make up for it. The reason why the audience is shocked by the other world and the behavior of the protagonist is the same. Those audiences who are shocked and "come out and see God" can make the readers feel that they are God. This is the essence of fun. This cool point was wasted by the author, which is a pity. Director Liu seemed to be joking, unhappy and unrealistic. If you think about it carefully, an uncontrolled live broadcast room with black technology can live broadcast smoothly for more than ten days in the daytime with signals that cannot be contacted by the outside world. How weird is this? How much attention should it attract? There is no need to wait for the ancient creatures to appear, it should have caused a chain reaction long ago. Isn't it important and fun to mobilize the leading figures in academia and even the state machinery for every move of the protagonist to surround the protagonist alone? This is obviously a real thing that happens. It is reasonable and enjoyable when written, but the author has not discovered it at all. It is understandable that some articles sacrifice fun for the sake of real logic, but the author ignores a logical and enjoyable point. It is a pity. Of course, what I'm talking about are all routines. If the author can be original and find a new approach, abandon these "conventional" highlights, and only focus on writing his own highlights. One highlight will shine brightly, and there is no need for other highlights to distract from it. Of course, that's fine, then it depends on whether the author is a real god. Anyway, I'm not convinced that the author has such a level.

By the way, don't you want to discuss the plot, story, mistakes, typos, and sense of existence with me? This is what I asked to talk to you on my own initiative. Although the number of words is short, without communication I feel like my typing is rusty! Regardless of whether the book is completed or not, this post will always be kept. If I want to say anything, I will reply to it one by one when I am not busy. I will never forget the answers and thanks! Finally, everyone should be enthusiastic about the book review section. There are so many things to say, but I am the only one 🙃🙃🙃

Writing a book is not easy, I hope the author can persevere until it is finished.

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In addition to describing animal types, the author can add plants, such as luminous Venus flytraps, carnivorous flowers that emit a special fragrance to attract insects, cannas as big as umbrellas, which can suck nectar from the roots, from normal plants to giant underground worlds.

In fact, the request is very simple, that is, send me your favorite name, and I will use it in the book. At present, the names of the characters are a little less, after all, no one can be seen! Another thing is the naming of prehistoric behemoths. Species that don't exist can also be created. After all, they are ancient behemoths from the Big Bang of Life. Anything is possible. There are no records but they haven't been excavated yet! There are also some jokes, jokes and the like to enliven the plot and make it easier for everyone to watch! As for technological fantasy, this is also needed. After all, smart technologies such as live streaming eyes have appeared, so intelligence is also needed. The rest are hot topics and discussions. Writing comes from life. If you think your story is good, send it to me and I will arrange a plot for you. Let's share the wonderful moments of life together. That would be the best! Looking forward to it, I hope everyone will be active! ! !

Data is taking off, what do you want?

I would like to ask the author, the protagonist in the previous chapters has been there for a few days and others have known about it, why the country has not done anything at all.

Happy New Year! I wish the author all the best in the new year, and I wish all book friends to make great achievements in the new year. I wish this book will have higher sales and better reviews in the new year 😁😁😁

No heroine, King of Evil Ghosts, come and support me, author, come on

Will there be higher life forms that are more powerful than humans?

A very good book, highly recommended! Also, Happy New Year, I hope this book will get better and better in the new year! Big cheers for the author!

It's good to watch, much better than a lot of live broadcasts that are all crazy and cool as soon as the live broadcast begins.

Is the author sure that Director Liu is really a survival expert? None of the netizens written by the author take human life seriously.

Yes, yes, if the author writes about primitive tribes. Let me provide you with an inspiration for the author, that is land jumping. Let's find out, the other version of this thing is called the more powerful "death jump". If it is written well, it can vividly describe the barbarism of primitive tribes.

The subject matter is very good! If there are no supervisors and the level can be maintained, the score of this book should be good.

Reptile lovers quietly crawled out

The most important thing is that the redemption function of the live broadcast eye is almost never used in the middle and late stages!

There should be more descriptions of mystery and unknown things. Rather than your chat interaction, this is a novel rather than a real live broadcast, and you mainly explore the unknown and assist in survival. If the main thing is survival, why write about the underground world? The real world can be written about and is more realistic.

I can only vote five times a month. When will your book be on the shelves? I will vote monthly.

Wouldn't the four major countries be similar to EVE, a theocracy, a federation, a United States, and a republic?

The idea was originally quite good, but the system's intelligence was too poisonous, and the writing was unbearable. . . The words used made me feel embarrassed.

This is really a bad question. You have laid out all kinds of profound and compact atmospheres before, but at the end there is a close-up of an underground person! This is all over! And I really want to complain: "What the hell is this ending!"

This is the first and best live-streaming novel I have read. Good luck to the author!

I hope the author can finish writing happily

It's a bit regretful that Doudou and Ming Ge are separated like this, but this may be a better choice for him

It feels unfinished... The further you go, the more it feels like an outline.