Marvel's Dark Dead Broken Pages

I feel like the author is a bit too merciful. There is no need to say too much mercy to those who offend me. You have to know that this is another time and space, not the real China. After writing so much, not even a key figure has died, but all the dead are minor villains. I think I can kill a few of the mutants to give them prestige. If you don't resist, others will just treat you as a fool who can be bullied. Why does Luodan keep looking for the protagonist again and again? Because the protagonist has never made a killing move, even threats are strong, and there is never a fatal danger, so he is not afraid. To a certain extent, this is also a weakness of the protagonist.

I'm afraid you'll make progress too fast and beat a lot of people to death, and you won't be able to control it 🙂

Another book where the necromancer takes the heroic path, which is really funny. Not even the murderous Punisher would tolerate the protagonist playing with corpses. The Necromancer should be a villain. The earth does not have the historical environment of the dark world. In order to reduce the cost of death, the dark humans had no choice but to summon corpses.

I would like to make a suggestion, could you please not add "he" after your name or words like "woman" or "man"? It's so annoying.

In my words. You put the protagonist. It's too easy to write. Ah, the other supporting characters were always pressed to the ground and rubbed over and over again. Feel. You forcibly dehumanized others. Including me as a reader. If you put it on the shelves, I will give you an initial order. That is a few cents.

When the equipment system will be released and whether the Necromancer has equipment are two different concepts. For example, my 5-level pure summoning undead, the infinite power of Mishan, the proud iron demon, the beast in hand, the will-o'-the-wisp wolverine, and the off-hand war + spirit. A god-like outfit can push everything, and he can die instantly if he takes off his equipment and goes out. How does Druid's transformation work with the undead? If you want to transform, don't you have to turn into a wolf or a bear? If you don't have a passive skill, it's better to use a mage skill.

I feel that the author's Chinese language skills are not up to standard, or the exam composition definitely only has half the score, and the punctuation and even paragraphing are a bit messy.

It's so well written that I can't express it in words.

Let me go, how much do you hate Roddy and insist on killing him?

I don't understand the setting, and I feel like I'm trying to suppress the protagonist. Isn't it possible to practice? A lot of knowledge about ancient necromancers, but it can't even summon skeleton soldiers?

Three hundred and sixty degrees of ice and snow, please cover picture 🐷

Finally, there is a protagonist who does not lick the dog and wipes the butt of others. Kill the black braised eggs.

Author, your book is good enough, at least for most readers. The story is good, but the writing is poor. New writers are like this. I can't write it yet. Don't worry about other people's opinions. If you are really unhappy, just give it a try. When the writing is mature, I will write a new book.

I almost forgot about this book bird, feel free to take a day off ~ have a good holiday

I've just started and you're already finished?

What about the Skeleton Sea? Would the undead without the Skeleton Sea still be the necromancers? I don't think I've seen any Necromancer novels that take advantage of the Skeleton Sea.

Except China has an ID card, where can one get an ID card from outside China?

Great book! ! It's just that the name was a bit frustrating, so I almost missed it! ! !

You just jumped so many chapters 😰. It feels like something is missing in the middle. I looked back and saw 51 immediately behind 49. What the hell?

Having said that, if when he fights Thanos, his gloves suddenly turn into steel demons 😏😏😏😏

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt like I was there? The protagonist can practice, but it is not explained clearly why. . . I'm a bit confused (ー_ー)!! Can the author make some changes (；一_一)

However, Diablo II and the others are all ordinary people, and only Diablo III is awakened.

The material for the steel stone demon can be the steel puppet used to defeat Thor. With such a stone demon, are you still worried about being beaten to pieces?

Learn more about AIDS. Don't tell me your immune system is strong. What this thing is destroying is your immune system. Lick the enemy's blood after killing him? Is it because you want to be buried with him?

As mentioned in the title, please bring your favorite characters, transformation skills and reasons to speak! 😁😁