National Mission

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The protagonist is really reborn. He took things and still lived in the same place. It would be weird if he didn't get caught.

After looking at it, I feel that there are still many problems. First, you said at the beginning that there is no problem in making a bug for pig's trotters. The problem is that when you fight students, you can lower the attributes. Since it is not the highest attribute when you fight monsters, it is 3 times. If you don't fix the attributes for pig's feet, it can also be said to reduce the consumption of blue bars. 3+1=4, And then Amount/Level 21 is 780/31 is 3900 Strength. At this time, most people usually only have single digits. Even the sweetheart of heaven will not exceed 20. Even if someone cheats and upgrades to level 1 and adds 5 attributes to level 100, it will not be as powerful as you at level 21.

First-rate subject matter, second-rate plot, and third-rate logic.

The strength is four digits faster, and the other speed is single digits, which looks awkward and uncoordinated.

There is a problem with the protagonist's ability. When the strength is strengthened, the original strength is one, and when strengthened five times, the strength becomes five. According to this calculation, after the strength is doubled, the strength is still one, and there is no change. Just change it to increase, strengthen it five times, and the strength becomes six. Strengthen it once, and the strength becomes two.

My account has finally reached 500 experience points and I can comment on my own books. The first post will definitely be mine. What I want to say is that friends who are reading this book, please comment more, vote more for recommendation, collect it, and then comment. This lets me know that someone is reading my book and making some suggestions or comments, whether it is praise or criticism, and lets me know where my book is not well written, so that I can consider changes. In addition, my writing is very poor and my vocabulary is not rich, but I try my best to write each chapter well. Well, that's all, thank you.

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When I saw Chapter 4, it was a normal start, but the mention of stealing the ancient mirror in Chapter 3 was a bug. It is impossible for people to just ask about important antiquities, especially when the person who took them away is not one of their own. The police must be called, the writing here is a bit embarrassing. Wouldn't it be better to just write and replace it with the fake one? Or is it that the author wants a high word count?

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I feel like the subject matter is great. I haven't read the plot yet. I don't know how the author's writing style is 😏(๑´•ω•) It's interesting.

The idea is okay and has the potential to become popular

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