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The book is actually okay, but it just makes me feel like I'm reading it inexplicably. I don't understand the setting, and I can't see the world at all. This makes me feel like I'm reading in a fog, which is very uncomfortable! ! It's not as comfortable as the beginning of the previous book! ! Although I feel that the characters written by the author are all patients with severe chuunibyou! But even with the inexplicable feeling, I was still very happy watching it! !

The first part is really good, and if you follow the routine, it is really interesting, but it gets weirder and weirder later on. The only interesting part in the later part is the chapter about teaching in the college, but I can't figure it out. Someone mentioned to the hero earlier that the stranger is like jade and the young master is unparalleled, but in the academy, the hero's sister tore off the hero's clothes and the stranger was like jade, the young master is unparalleled. So, which came first, the chicken or the egg? ? ? And some complexes are also mixed. The characters in the war introduced later have been mentioned in the early stage. It stands to reason that characters so far away should be either dead or happened in an era when the male protagonist was not born. How come it is in this period again? There is no special introduction. If you say that there is a time traveler that allows the male protagonist to influence the past and save the world, you can accept it, but this There is absolutely no introduction at all, and it is unclear. I have now seen the chapter where the male protagonist saves his girlfriend and she is floating on the sea looking for dice, but I can't watch it anymore. The more I read, the more inexplicable it becomes. I feel like I have lost my mind. The younger sister who has a crush on his brother, the passerby who is blinded by the handsome guy, the girlfriend who is familiar with him, the male protagonist who is confused and full of luck, the inexplicable plot, goodbye~

When I read Chapter 12, I felt like the protagonist was performing a one-man show. It was a lot of nonsense. The author was suspected of being too low on word count.

It's a very interesting book. It's a refreshing read. It's like playing a cracked version of a game. Good luck to the author.

I feel like I'm seriously off topic! The Chinese Academy of Sciences has come out, author, are you kidding me? Are you writing a modern novel?

The last part of Chapter 11 is too stupid. If you want to test it, just say that I traveled through time and my name is Zhou Yi. There is no need to add this body or something. Doesn't this directly expose that you are reborn after taking a body?

I don't know if this book will also be discontinued.

I have only read a few dozen chapters of this book. Although there are some unreasonable parts, I am happy and that's it.

Come on author, you are the fattest one, stop being like a skill tree

I didn't expect you to secretly open a new book

. . . When I saw this book being promoted, I thought it was the author who had come back to pretend to be a corpse. He was still a eunuch, and the eunuch was still recommending it.

Good luck to the author, I hope there is no pure house in the sky

If I hadn't missed you on a whim, I wouldn't have even seen opening a new book, I love you.

Su Caiwei! The real protagonist, because she found the biggest opportunity, Zhouyi! (Manual funny)

The little author, who is not updating his articles, has his ears perked up, and after cutting his arteries and veins, he remains motionless, so cute.

What's the situation, pushing the eunuch book?

I read it when I opened the book. I was poor and had no money at that time. I can only watch pirated versions. Now that I have money, I download the software specifically. It is true that things have changed.

The writing is good, but the biggest shortcoming is the poor character and unfinished writing

This great author~ What he writes is so confusing~ I'm so tired from reading it~ Is there anyone like me? ,

Everything is good, but it's too watery, and it barely advances the plot development after one chapter. It was so bad before it was put on the shelves. What will happen after it is put on the shelves?

There are too many descriptions of psychological activities, and I get bored after listening to a few chapters. It feels wonderful to write occasionally, but if you write endlessly, it feels like you are losing count of words.

It adopts the northern style of funny writing. It looks tired and it's hard to grasp the point and plot. It's too funny and makes no sense. The writing is still good, so I give this card 3.8 Points 😃

There are a lot of poisons 1. The seventh power of nine is more than 4.8 Million 2. The protagonist is probably not mentally retarded. He doesn't look for opportunities, doesn't upgrade, and is dedicated to renewing his life. But wouldn't it be faster to upgrade to renew his life? 3. 2. Some people may refute the bottleneck, but don't forget the protagonist's physique 4. Forced watering, Wu Anjun Xiaobai, Su Dashan, Xiuer, each of them has no main plot, forced watering 5. Why can't the protagonist practice other skills, dig holes without filling them, and die? 6. None of the characters in the book have a distinctive personality, they are all similar 7. Forced intelligence There are many more that I won't mention one by one. If the author is a real man, don't delete it and let everyone take a look.

Do you think Dayu really didn't do anything when he passed through the house three times without entering? Don't forget, his wife later turned into a Wang Fu Stone, and Sun Wukong jumped out of the stone. The key is that Dayu's Dinghai Shenzhen still listened to Sun Wukong's words! Do you think Sun Wukong did nothing when he immobilized the Seven Fairies? Don't think that nothing happened because the monkey immobilized the Seven Fairies. Otherwise, why would the Queen Mother and the Jade Emperor be so angry? They haven't seen the Seven Fairies since Pantaoyuan, right? Then seven gourd babies appeared. Why can they turn into stone like monkeys? This requires some brainstorming. Later, when those seven little gourd boys bullied the disheveled snake spirit every day and pinned the snake spirit down, nothing happened. How did the Dragon Balls come out? It's obviously a snake egg, but Sun Wukong is looking for the dragon ball everywhere like crazy. After sorting it out in such an orderly manner, I seem to have discovered something——[I accidentally became a god]

Why do I feel like I can't understand what's written in these pictures?

Is there a book called "My Luck Tank Exploded Again" written by this author? It feels like the same style

Gouzi, I opened a small account and wrote a book again, the title of the book is "My Luck Tank Exploded Again"

Is this author so frustrated by his grades that he doesn't want to write anymore?

There was still a lot of discussion about this author back then, but for some reason it disappeared.

It seems like I may never write again in the future.