Surviving the Fall of the Western Jin

Try to write as little about martial arts as possible. The author may find it interesting, but for readers of historical texts, martial arts is the biggest poison.

It's a pity, I thought it was a historical novel, but it turns out that the protagonist is from a martial arts school with dark strength and bright strength, and the protagonist can have a bit of a golden finger...

It's okay to write about martial arts, but don't write about martial arts. Try to write about fierce generals in the army.

This is a typical example of the author who is trying to kill himself. He just ignores history and insists on adding some martial arts elements. Maybe he wants to adapt it into a TV series? Neither fish nor fowl will please both sides. No matter what you want to do, you must first make yourself popular, otherwise you will die immediately.

It's a good read. First of all, the writing is good and it doesn't look tired. Although there are many shortcomings, the flaws are not outweighed. The setting of martial arts is okay, but how to create a martial arts sect. He has no basis for survival in the world, let alone the dynasties before the Tang Dynasty. During this period, the world was controlled by aristocratic families. There is no way they would allow such a collective existence. Tell me how a sect like this can survive? It supports a group of martial arts practitioners who are not engaged in production. Large quantities of various materials are consumed every day. Not to mention that there is a department dedicated to making money just like in the novel. Aristocratic families and civil servant interest groups. Such a group cannot be allowed to exist. Although there is a martial arts setting in the early reading. But now that there is a shortage of books, I can still read it. But now that a sect has come out, I really can't stand it anymore. It's too poisonous, so I gave up the book.

The escape plot in the first two chapters was so well written, especially Chapter 2, which made me laugh so hard. But the more I watched, the more something felt wrong, especially when I saw some Ming Jin martial arts fantasy plot, I couldn't stand it. Goodbye

It feels a bit poisonous for the protagonist to develop from overseas. It would be more interesting to join Kansai and fight in Kanto and get involved in the war in the Central Plains. As for novels, you have to dare to face the biggest challenges of that era to feel satisfied. This kind of overseas development routine can easily delay the progress of the entire novel, which is enough for you to write hundreds of chapters without entering the mainland. Then who is watching? Besides, China did not lack land at that time, but it lacked people. If you occupied so much land and engaged in handicraft industry, you didn't have that many people at all.

What did you write? Kindergarten novel, the protagonist with this kind of mentality cannot survive for three days in troubled times. Kindergarten level. In troubled times, he must be as cunning as a fox, as ferocious as a tiger, and as cold as a wolf. The author makes the protagonist look like a young man of four kinds.

When I see Ming Jin and Dark Jin being easy to play, I can always think of the era of the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China, and there were no martial arts schools in that era.

From what I saw at the event, I really wanted to see the subject matter, but I saw martial arts? ? ? Writing about martial arts in historical texts is the only way to truly abolish martial arts 😂. I wonder why a historical text of more than two million words is not so miserable, no matter how miserable it is. There are only 50 book lists and only 50 comments, and no one even criticizes 🤣. In fact, to make the protagonist stronger, we need to set him up with natural supernatural powers and a height of seven feet, so that it will not appear so abrupt.