I Am Cultivating Immortality in a Fantasy Game

I was really looking forward to it, but the author didn't write too much creativity in the plot, so the setting was a bit interesting. The subsequent plot is just like the old routine game articles, but there are still good things. I hope the author will work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ and write his own characteristics better.

The protagonist's talent for torturing can be used in reality, so shouldn't the resurrection skills obtained by the protagonist be used in reality? ? ? Otherwise, it can only be used in the game, so the talents obtained through abuse in the game are not as good as in the real world. The talents obtained through abuse in the real world are universal in the game (after the metaphysics talent was taken away in the previous article, there is an additional talent in the game). Obviously, using the talent in the real world is more cost-effective than in the game.

I discovered a strange thing. Did the author forget about that awesome lie detector? When the old man asked the protagonist's identity, there was this one-sentence incident.

In Chapters 28 and 70, when the big guys found out that Yan Siye was not Lin Ming, it didn't seem to have any impact. At most, there was one more unsolved mystery.

I wrote it a bit for the sake of being funny. I wrote it according to my own ideas. Don't make the protagonist look like a green tree. The character was well written in the past, but I don't know why it fell so short after the public beta.

The first thing I want to say is that the author is a new and cute writer. It's not a great vest, nor is it a rush to change numbers. I am a person who likes to read novels. I was so excited that I wanted to write my own. Because I have many imaginary pictures in my mind, which are combined into a story that I want to share with everyone. This book is the second book of my history, really the first. The first book of history is the other book, written by YY, purely for myself. As a newbie, I am not ashamed of my identity. I encountered a few bad points when I first started, and it is difficult to change. I'm sorry about that. But this is also a reminder to myself, a lesson learned, I can't write it like this, it's so poisonous. I'm also trying to change some writing methods, and compare it with my own feelings and everyone's comments to see if it's good or not. Also read the works of great masters, take notes, and analyze their writing methods. It takes time to develop your writing style, and now my writing style is a little different. I hope that I will continue to make progress and bring better reading enjoyment to all readers. Finally, thank you again for reading. 😃

It's not enough to read, so I decided to fatten up. Author, if you dare to eunuch...✂️ω

I feel that the pace is too fast, so the book will not survive for long, or it will just keep pouring water, and higher civilizations will find fault, crushing him all the way for hundreds of chapters, or the author may have a surprise or new ideas

Starting from about forty chapters, it became very routine, as if there was a different author.

I just read Chapter 5 and there are some things I can't say about professions. Oriental series, Eastern series, Eastern series, as the name suggests, it refers to the entire East in the bigger sense, and it also refers to China in the smaller sense. You can write whatever you want about a simple game, but there's nothing to say about it. But since it can connect to reality, it also clearly gives a choice. I would like to ask you whether you underestimate the Chinese heritage and the Chinese people regardless of the parallel world? In such a big country, there are so many people. Even if only one person among tens or millions of people can enter the game, there are tens of thousands of them. Not all are elites, but they must be lucky people. There must be various reasons for choosing the Eastern style but giving up. However, so many people have not encountered a suitable route and inheritance? Don't have the will and faith to persevere? Even with the intervention of the state and the influence of cultural heritage, wouldn't it be enough? Only the protagonist can do it? ? ? Even if the game is deliberately suppressed when it is created, as long as there is a choice, I will choose it and never give up! ! !

I think this book is pretty good! Why are there so many nitpicks in the comment section? If you don't like it, don't read it! ! Come on, author!! Great

I want to ask the author, who wanted to kill the protagonist for no reason, will the protagonist take revenge and kill her later? Or does the protagonist just forgive her?

After reading Chapter 68, what can I say?_? The author mentioned before that he should avoid poisonous points, but as a result, he was so embarrassed that he couldn't pretend to be embarrassed and slapped in the face.

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I feel like the author might as well not describe the weird things about pig's feet, and overturn the previous pictures of pig's feet awakening, etc. It's too early. Increase the speed at which the space support soldiers arrive, and then the insect leader can contact higher-level support soldiers. Then you can describe the support soldiers and the top ten magnified water recruits on the earth and drag them out. Then design a reasonable entry speed for high-level support troops. This will probably save you a little bit of the storyline that collapsed.

Is this a hoax, or is this just the author's update? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! !

The protagonist's sword has been severely chipped. Are you not going to restore it for the sake of balance? ? ? 😂

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Personal shortcomings: 1. Obtain the Qi Practitioner profession and don't think about reading Taoist canons. I never expected that my IQ would be off the line here. 2. For such a good subject matter, I am speechless if I don't describe the details of how to develop the Qi Practitioner profession and instead write about other storylines. 3. You can become a Qi practitioner in real life and seek immortality. You can follow any fighting scenes you encounter, and your mentality is great. . 4. After looking at the titles of the following chapters, I found that they are basically all kinds of stories and plots. There are relatively few details on the development of the Qi Practitioner profession. Moreover, it happened that a certain female high-ranking player (the saint son and saint in fantasy) was almost killed in the early stage. The dialogue between these two people will still develop a little bit. This kind of routine is very disgusting to lick women.

In fact, there are representatives from the United Nations. Do you think the representatives sent by the United States can make this decision? If the major financial groups in the United States don't agree, you dare to agree, and you can see his body tomorrow. Every country is not monolithic. There are factions in various aspects. There are conflicting interests between countries and within countries. So it's thankless for you to involve the protagonist. The author not only allowed the protagonist to participate, but also directly promoted it because of the protagonist's words. The process was also very simple, so this part of the plot would become a poisonous point.