The System Tricked Me into Cultivating a Fake Immortal

Emma, ​​this book is so beautifully written! ! ! I haven't seen such a funny novel in a long time! ! I will definitely recommend it to my friends! ! The author must be very cute. I want to give birth to a monkey for him! Big cheers for the author! Waiting for it to be released! I will support you with full subscription! ! !~~ ο(=•ω＜=)ρ⌒☆ Haha, I'm really happy about it~

I was invited and took a look around. I found it quite interesting and the atmosphere was very relaxed. Although I personally prefer works that are more realistic and detailed, there should still be readers who like this kind of light and nonsensical work. It can be seen that the author is relatively casual when writing and uses various jokes very frequently. However, from the perspective of a reader, I still hope to see more things. First of all, nature is intuitively interesting. I don't read many urban novels, but some of the plots feel familiar at a glance. In addition, the author uses jokes with almost no embellishment, and it doesn't feel very gripping after being piled up. I scanned it quickly, and I felt that the plot progressed very slowly, and there were too many gags between the characters. After watching it for a long time, I felt tired, and the fun I originally hoped to find was no longer possible. The second is interesting enough to taste. In fact, the beginning of the book is quite ambitious. There are too many things that can be explored in modern immortality cultivation and national war. However, it is a pity that these are easily skipped and go directly to the perspective of the doll. The setting of immortal cultivators and ordinary people is just a simple mix of people, gradually turning into a plot of people with super powers in the city. In addition to the setting content, the handling of the characters is also a bit awkward. Many small emotional details seemed to be simply ignored. For example, after Lang learned that his doll had become a spirit, his first reaction was to ask him to do something. What are the country's regulations on immortality items becoming spirits? Does it have this kind of power to cultivate immortality items into spirits? When your own items become fine, is it your own property? Does seizing someone's body count as murder? My reading is a bit rough. I believe the author has explanations and arrangements for some of them. I may have overlooked them, but this does not prevent me from discovering some interesting settings and plots in similar aspects. This is what I as a reader want to see (fingers crossed). I don't mean to criticize, I'm just talking nonsense out of curiosity. After all, I still hope that the author can find his own way. I apologize for the inappropriate wording.

Author, please come out. Where is the car you agreed on? Have you opened a kindergarten? ? ?

😭 In the face of a major earthquake in the Internet, the magic super powers in the starting point city were blocked for 7 days, so this book will be forced to stop updating for 7 days... I am sorry for my attendance, and the investment in new books will also be cut off, 55555

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Great book, this is one of the funniest books I have ever read! Come on, author! ! !

Haha, a husky was actually used as the cover. One husky defeated the three tigers, the second husky sank the aircraft carrier, the five huskies fought against God, and the ten huskies created the world! Your Erha system is going to be unbelievable!

There are indeed a lot of laughs, and it seems quite cheerful. I have been looking for books with a bit of joy recently, but as another brother said: it is a bit monotonous. Let me put it this way, I think some of the laughs are a bit too "deliberate". It was good at first, but after watching too much, it becomes a bit boring. The frequency of the more "exaggerated" laughs may be a bit high. And some of the laughs have that "awkward" feeling, which I feel is the reason why I was too anxious to add elements of joy into the book. Personally, I think a novel should first tell a story. The sudden appearance of this kind of thing is not only a bit indifferent but also a bit dramatic. If it's well written, it's okay. If it's not well written, you may laugh for twenty or thirty chapters and you may not have the motivation to continue. I had been reading a happy novel for a long time, but then I gave it up because the plot was not advancing, even though the humor in that book was quite good. Because I have been busy with exams recently, I only have time to read this tonight, so I just saw it now. Sorry, the above are all personal opinions. If you have any differences, you are welcome to communicate. Communication brings progress.

I read the first chapter, it's very funny! Seriously, I have never seen such a funny beginning before. If you keep reading, it's pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and maintain this funny style!

Very exciting, bookmarked and waiting for updates!

Stop by, collect and support!

It's funny, but there are so many characters that it's hard to remember and keep track of them. My ability to control the rhythm needs to be improved.

It was originally recommended by the little cutie. After reading it for a while, it was quite interesting! Although the writing style cannot be said to be good, it is much better than most writers I hope the cutie can write more interesting plots and continue reading ~

Now I declare: The author is under my care! (Manual funny)

An evil smile... It appears in too many places. Doesn't the author find it very inconsistent? Every time I see this word, I feel a little bit sore in my balls, like I'm reading a girl's novel

Build the portal ~ (Xiong Da, Big Big Wolf, Gouzi)

Come on, thank you for your support. Those who came here, Chenchen, collect it first.

Author, why has your new book been taken off the shelves? ! ! He also said that he would store it for a while

After reading the first chapter, I asked if this is a gay article?

It can only last eight years. . . On whether using this body is one's own self-destruction, on the relationship after 28 years

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The author's writing is great👍. I'm looking for Chapter 140, but I can't find it at all 😭

This book is actually finished, will the author start a new book?

Suggestion: The fighting scenes in the first twenty chapters are a bit too long and can be easily dismissed.

Let me ask you seriously, is this a harem (let me struggle)

Come on, keep at it, it will be much better after it is put on the shelves

My copy of "The Logical Genius Who Came From a Mental Hospital" is gone. Why did I die while I was keeping it? I haven't read the following chapters yet 😭😭😭😭😭😭