Talisman

Good-looking, really good-looking! A great book that even bookworms can read. It takes a fantasy path, but the style is more two-dimensional, making it very relaxing and comfortable to watch. There are no disgusting plots, no brainless pretense, very harmonious, and occasionally drive a small car emmmmm Who can stand up to the Lin family sisters awsl

The jokes are fun, and the overall style is not bad. The only problem is that the character of the protagonist is really unlikable... Or I can't even feel the character of the protagonist. The protagonist's sole purpose of living is to practice, and he still wants to practice to become a great hero, but he does not have the same motivation as Emiya Shirou in terms of becoming a great hero. (Rescued when he was desperate when he was a child) As you continue to read, the character problem of the protagonist becomes bigger and bigger. Although he has an "innocent heart", the protagonist obviously has no sense of empathy, and his way of thinking towards others is ridiculous. (Beating people to tears to get tears, etc.) Compared with Wang Jiu, he has a similar character, but he is a sword, not a person, and his way of thinking is different from people... I don't know if it will change in the future, but I have to take it easy first...

Well, it's good. It's a very innovative novel. It makes people's eyes bright when reading it. The beginning of the book has a very novel feeling. The father of the protagonist is a time traveler, which is very novel, and he teaches his son many special things, such as the law of the protagonist, which makes people laugh so hard. This is not enough. The things the protagonist knows are also very interesting. The addition of those two dimensions really makes people look forward to the future development. This book has the potential to become a god. I look forward to the development of the author. Come on＾0＾~!

I felt a bit bored while watching it... Not as good as the previous one

It's very good. It's a very interesting novel. Keep up the good work, the author 😚mou~

It seems that the protagonist's father is a modern person who traveled through time. It's a pity that the protagonist is not him, but his son.

I invested. This book is good to read, but the name of the protagonist's father is so random. I think it must be a pseudonym. I guess he was called Xiao Zhantian or Xiao Yan when he debuted...

I don't know why I found this book. . . It's quite exciting after looking at it. Come on, author.

Hahaha, this book is very interesting. It is the first time I have seen the setting of walking on the fantasy road wearing a two-dimensional tiger skin. I hope the author will add more updates. It is too little now and I can't get enough.

Thinking about changing the title of your book? The name is unclear and featureless, and the word is difficult to type. . .

Anyway, no one saw it, I'm a fool

+1 For supporting the renaming of this book to "The Temptation of Talisman Making"

Why do modern novels always have a sister next to the protagonist? Some are cute, some are thick and dark, some are mature, some are academics, etc. Eight out of ten books follow this routine. Can we please stop ruining my sister like this?

This book was good at the beginning, and many of the jokes looked funny, but it stopped working later on, and the plot got messed up, especially the identity of the protagonist. Originally, the description of dad Xiao Daniu as a failed time traveler was good, but in the end, Xiao Daniu did not fail. He was invincible. Playing against the sky demon, he found a He has a super beautiful wife, who is the eldest daughter of a big family in Shangzhou, and a beautiful sister-in-law, who also arranged for the protagonist to be married to a super strong girl. Once these routines came out, it was boring. They were all female channel routines. I hope that the male protagonist's aunt will not like him without thinking in the future, otherwise it will be really stupid. . .

It's a bit of a white text... There are too many poisonous points in the back. Not recommended for books over two years old

Alas, I don't know when it started, but gradually I began to write novels with mentally retarded protagonists.

So is the background of the world too dirty?

Shame on you, you opened a small account and wrote a book and you were discovered by me!

In the first chapter, I was told to quit, but now it's inexplicable to write that the guard dog looks down on people. It's too cliche. The guard is just causing trouble for nothing. Who dares to ask you to do something? It's too vicious!

A well-chosen cover is indispensable for a gentleman...

Why is "I Raised a Monster in an Abandoned House in Tokyo" inexplicably missing?

This book is good and very interesting. Most of the books written by Qidian are quite violent, especially fantasy. It is rare to find something so fresh and refined. Come on, it has the potential to be a hit.

I really like this author's style of writing. I got into the game from Summoning, and later I read Ship Girl (one half read pirated copies, and the other was a newcomer who had no money to understand QAQ at the time). It has really become a source of happiness for me (after all, a book written by a person with similar hobbies is really suitable for my taste). When I saw that the author was a little worried about the book Phantom, I really just want to say, come on, no matter what, there are me and people like me who like your book. Even if you can't write anymore that day, I will remember this time. (Love you❤)

It's very interesting. I like the protagonist who inadvertently chokes people when he speaks.

The author couldn't control the plot line in the last book and the writing collapsed in the later stage, but the heart-warming interactions in the previous book were very interesting This book hopes that the author can use his strengths more At present, it seems to be a low-magic world view similar to Taiwu Scroll, very thoughtful, come on

Author! Come back soon!

Although it is an old book, it is the first time I have seen it. I couldn't help but complain. This is the second-rate son taught by his father who traveled through time.

I like a lot of the settings in it: the background (his father), the puppets, and the protagonist's spiritual practice. It's very interesting. I hope that one day I can see this book rewritten. I can make good use of these three elements and write a work that can confer godhood.

A breath of fresh air Finally, it is no longer a scenario where someone comes to the door and is repaid with revenge and then kills the whole family.

Give a little support to the author😢