Urban King Guide

Let me state up front that I am not a troll. However, I want to explain first the poisonous point of this book. There was a mercenary at the beginning, and then I read the introduction before I came in to read it. As a result, I saw Chapter 18, and none of them had anything to do with the introduction. This is too watery. It's like I came in excited and came back disappointed.

Say goodbye after reading Chapter 12! But I have something to say to the author. The plot setting at the beginning is very interesting, but as soon as the plot unfolds, it becomes a clichéd plot, outdated and vulgar routines. The character positioning is not clear, the IQ of other characters is forcibly lowered, conflicts are forcibly created, and the plot is for the sake of plot. The above are my personal suggestions to the author. There are many writers, many readers, and many books at the starting point. There is no way out for purely personal opinions.

SB, what's the use of such parents? They're not close to each other anyway, so don't worry about them!

How come there are so many inner monologues of others. Wouldn't it be better to speed up the plot? It's really too watery.

The innocent celebrity came here to see how it goes

I'm convinced. I don't know what this family background and identity as a killer mercenary are used for. It's really vulgar and off-putting. He even went to jail for his brother. What is this family background used for? What can be solved by just finding someone to spend some money is to exchange his biological son for his biological son. Are billionaires stupid?

The first part is actually pretty good, but the second part of the story about the top bag and the prison is completely inexplicable. I don't know why the author would include such a part. What's so exciting about it? What effect does it have on plot development?

This hasn't been updated for a long time, please update

Weak readers: Wow, author, is your update speed worthy of the readers who follow you every day? Powerful Author: Reader? What readers? (With a confused look on his face) Powerful Author: Besides, the daily and weekly updates are so weak! ! ! Look how many of them can do monthly updates and annual updates! ! ! Those who change every month are truly strong, the ones who never give up! ! ! Just like me! ! ! (Showing a confident smile) Weak readers: I have a saying mmp I don't know... Powerful Author: Don't speak! ! ! A weak reader: Dear author, I know you have two books, so your requirements are really not high. I beg you to write one chapter a day. I typed a total of 186 words, including 46 symbols, 6 spaces, and 7 letters. The author, you can see my sincerity. Just think of it as me begging you not to update every month, but to update every day.

Forget it, the plot is old-fashioned and has no new ideas. The tmd is always written in water, the family is awesome, and the university associate professor was sent to the hospital without any treatment. You are already so awesome, but other students still dare to point fingers? Do you think there is no lower limit to the IQ of the people around you? After reading a few chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist's IQ is not high, and the supporting actor has no IQ at all.

The old book is updated every 2-3 days and a new book is opened Is it going to be a eunuch?

The protagonist of Uncle is not the most miserable, only worse! This is nothing, it's mainly just dragging out the plot, lack of updates, and it's really uncomfortable to keep your appetite... I just hope that the pretentious slap in the face will be more intense!

This chapter is at least much better than the previous fight chapters.

This old book has not been saved, and the new book is about to fall into ruin... The third book is ready...

As long as you keep it, you'll become a eunuch. I'm convinced, but I still don't have a big heart.