The Taoist Who Played Tricks on the Heavens

Author, you should change the protagonist to be sober. It feels like he is in a dazed state... Emmm

The plot description is really a mess. The description of the plot is basically expressed in the form of dialogue. It makes people feel very childish. After dozens of chapters, I didn't know what I was looking at. There is also very little description of the environment! It's hard to watch. I used to feel uncomfortable reading books because of the plot. Until your book came out, it turned out that there were also dialogue symbols that made me uncomfortable.

The creativity is good, but the sense of immersion is so bad. At first, I could tolerate being stupid, but then I couldn't stand it anymore. I thought that the third volume would be normal, so I kept skipping chapters and skipped to the third volume. Then discover. . . Not much has changed. First, as the protagonist, he did not promote the development of the plot. He did not dig holes and cause trouble by himself, nor did he cultivate supporting characters to antagonize the protagonist or turn the supporting characters into protagonists and other things that were out of the plot. The whole process just feels like looking for people to fight everywhere, and then somehow clearing the level. Second, the sense of immersion is too poor. One is crazy ellipses to make up the word count, but what you said after the ellipsis is put in quotation marks. I don't even know which words came from my mind and which words came out of my mouth. It was quite a show. Third, it is too contradictory. The main line is to find people to fight everywhere to prove that you are invincible. If you are really timid, you should train your subordinates to test the strength level of the masters. To be really tough, just hit him directly without any fear at all. What the hell is this kind of person who is scared and angry at the same time? It covers the Taoist heart rather than the IQ. Fourth, it's not interesting enough, I came here just for the name. Playing with the world, I don't think there is any bad plot in the content I have seen so far. Maybe I've read too many interesting books? Personally, I found the plot to be very bland, with no laughs, no fun, and no resonance. The biggest fear in writing this kind of infinite flow is that the character plot is not successfully created and there is also a lack of resonance. You can check out Host Please Stay, One Hundred Ways of Host Death, Gold Finger Supplier, and Lord God Investigator. Something is going on! What's the point of this invincible article if it doesn't cause trouble! Fifth, it is neither simple and crude nor complex. As a gathering of all things, any technique can be mastered in one go, and gathering all kinds of techniques is just like playing. Then it would be better to just scan everywhere and gather all the dharma and dharma first. Then it is more interesting to slowly play and develop the flow. To say it is complicated, it is indeed complicated. It requires the protagonist to meet people one by one. To be honest, I feel that the next two volumes are not as interesting as the first volume. At least there is a dog-licking way of heaven, which is interesting to watch. The first volume is also the only volume I barely finished reading.

This style is special and I don't feel comfortable with it. Can the author write more normally?

It's too skinny. If it's too much, it will feel too watery. If it's too skinny, I'll leave.

It was good at first, but then I got too excited and didn't know what I was talking about. I felt like I was reading repeated chapters.

Since you've already said that you don't want to enter with caution, then I'll listen to you and stop reading!

This plot is completely useless, the main character is stupid all the way, I really can't stand it anymore, this old bookworm

If you didn't tell me, I would have forgotten about voting. I'm used to turning off the phone after reading it 😁

Is the protagonist mentally retarded? 🔪

I want a protagonist like Madara

QuestionHow can you encourage an author just right? As we all know, the so-called encouragement means that it is not good enough, and the encouragement award means that you have not won the award. It has great potential, and the potential for improvement in emmmmm test scores of zero points is also great In short, how can you say something without deep meaning? I don't care to brag about high-level blackmail, so what should I do?

This kind of writing technique has never been seen before! I feel so passionate! Farewell🙏

The plot written by the author is very good, but the first two maps are too popular. The Swordsman and the Condor Heroes can be said to have been poorly written in the novel Ten unlimited streams, it can be said that nine books have them, and one has one, but the author did write his own characteristics In short, it is a very good-looking novel Oh, and the confused state of the protagonist, I think it is very good, I do not recommend that the author change it, I think it is very unique and refreshing

The title of the book is quite domineering, but can you please not mention "Swordsman" and "Swordsman Shooting the Condor"? I'm tired of watching it

Will there be any plots like "Zhidian Douluo"? It won't always be a TV series, right?

The so-called confusion is not a joke, nor is it an idiot. The protagonist of Xia Ke Xing is also confused, but he knows how powerful he is and the key is to show off. Dragon Ball's Sun Wukong is also confused! Others also know who they can win. Being confused is not stupid, it's just that they don't have a clear positioning of themselves. The one who is most confused is probably Ouke. He doesn't have much awareness of himself. He just does it without being intimidated. His mantra is that I think this will work. Your protagonist is made of water. He has no personality traits and looks irritating. There is a saying that he will not fight when he is angry.

In the third golden chapter, Pig's Feet is always in a state of confusion, giving readers no sense of involvement at all. . . Forget it, forget it, run away

I've only read less than 3 chapters. If I keep reading, my IQ will be in arrears! ! ! ! ! !

How empty and lonely are those who can read 100 chapters of this book?

I feel like laughing while reading this book, but it's very good. Start voting today.

Can anyone who writes about ancient martial arts escape the golden age? I'm tired of looking at it😰😰😰😰

Scalp novels have become less popular this year.

If it weren't for today's book shortage, I wouldn't even know there was a new book by a famous author like this! This book is good. It is best to write about each martial arts, then go to Xianxia, ​​and then to the prehistoric period, one by one.

It's all about talking and there's no plot description at all =_=

Isn't this the infinite version of "The First Spirit of the Ancient World"?

Super pretty! Keep up the good work!

It would be better if you turned it into a dialogue novel. . . .

Why not change it to a mythical or anime world or a novel world?

Oh, look at this style of writing, is it written by the author of "The First Nerve of the Ancients"?