The Ever-Smiling Impermanence

The writing is great~I like it~~

I feel that the writing style is very good, the article is also very innovative, the plot is novel and attractive, and the description is also great. I support you decisively, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's also strange why no one seems to read such a good article.

Why are the author's writing style in the front and the writing style in the back so different!

It's not a simple piece of writing~ The logical line is clear, the pace is fast, there are many foreshadowings, and it's a little humorous. Sometimes you have to review certain details later. I look forward to writing more boldly in the future, it will be more fun to write more🌵🌵🌵

[Passers' comments] Initial score 84 Category: Female Channel—Martial Arts Love Book Reviewer: There is fish in yin and yang Number of words read: 65,000 words 29 chapters 1 title copy cover (18/20) Topic: Everything is impermanent, just laugh it off. "Impermanent Laughter" gives people a sense of freedom and ease in the world, simple and concise. "The world of mortals is so ridiculous, but infatuation is the most boring." The title is obviously martial arts, and it also has a bit of philosophical charm. The same goes for copywriting. Cover: Splash-ink freehand painting. At first glance, it looks like a plum branch. However, upon closer inspection, there is a person standing on a surging river with hands behind his back. It is wanton and aloof, and fits the title very well. 2 Opening (14.5/20) The first three articles are about 10,000 words It starts with Si Chen waking up Tang Xi, chewing Gama's tongue for flower viewing, encountering the second brother and his son by chance on the street, adults discussing martial arts, children having a sword fight, the elder brother's visit, everyone admiring the moon, the family being attacked, everyone fleeing, going to the valley to meet Aunt Qin, and meeting seniors for detoxification. There are at least 11 plots, large and small. With a plot of 10,000 words, this pace can no longer be described as "fast". From a reader's point of view, a new plot has to be accepted basically every 2 minutes, which makes reading very tiring. This was my biggest feeling after reading the opening chapter. As for the characters, there are a little too many in the first chapter, giving the illusion that the relationships between the characters are complicated, which also adds to the burden of reading. Fortunately, the author has good writing skills and interesting language, so he was able to keep reading. Different people have different opinions on the rhythm. Personally, I think martial arts should be mainly easy to read. 3Writing (10/10) The author's writing style can be described as profound, and he can often describe simple things very vividly. The author tells stories that make people feel like they can't get enough of them. The personalities, behaviors and language of the characters created are consistent with reality, vivid on the page, and full of three-dimensionality. The language skills are also very good, with precise word choice and good rhetoric. 4 Ideas (25.5/30) The story of Jianghu's grievances and hatreds, the few people picked up by Ting Daxia and Jianghu are slowly unfolded. The plot is not very new, but the author is clever and the story is fascinating. If readers can calm down and chew carefully, the taste will be very good. The text I have read is limited. Judging from the more than 20 chapters I have read, I personally feel that the main contradiction is not prominent enough. As an online article, it is still lacking in excitement. Martial arts is definitely not just about Jianghu people and Jianghu affairs. Traditional martial arts sells not only plot, but also "emotion". Watching too many similar plots will make people tired, but the sincere feelings will never tire of it. How to grasp the proportion of emotional drama and capture the hearts of readers, I think this is what the author should think about. 5Overall perception (16/20) Overall, this novel has basically no evil points, but as a martial arts novel written by a female channel, it may suffer. When old people see the complicated character relationships in the first chapter, they may not choose to sort it out, but abandon the article. As for the author's suggestion to leave him alone for now and come back later to review the relationship between the characters, I don't know how many people will read online articles this way, but in my opinion - isn't the characteristic of online articles that they are easy, simple and easy to understand? A masterpiece may be the work of a writer who has worked hard for a lifetime, but online writers write thousands of books every day. As an online reader, I read a million-word novel in 3-5 days, and I rarely read it twice. The author's personal skills are good. It would be better if he could write more online and grasp the emotional scenes well. (The level of passers-by is limited, and book reviews are personal opinions. Occasionally have a venomous tongue, so don't blame me. Thank you Jun Jue for providing book review standards.)

The relationship between the characters feels a bit complicated, like "the flowers gradually become charming".

When will the author release a new book? Let's work hard for our dreams together. 💪

No matter what, I wish you write better and better

Publishing a new book in 2020? Be careful not to write a book for half a year!