After Being Reborn, I Also Want to Fall in Love

Finally, it's not the same old licking dog reborn. It makes me vomit. It's too fake that the licking dog is reborn and becomes a boss.

Brothers, don't hesitate, just rush and it's over! 🙂

The humor is too much, and all the characters feel like they are missing out 😁

When I first started reading the first two or three chapters, I felt that the plot was denser and more funny, and I had the desire to read on. But by the 20th or 30th chapter, it was still the same, with the same informal writing style. I felt a little tired of trying to escape from the funny. It made people feel that the protagonist and some characters in the book were not normal people. They were all funny. There are no normal people. Normal people can't stand the way the protagonist talks and acts. It feels like it's just a collection of jokes even if the memes are too dense. Occasionally, it's good to have one that makes people smile, as a break. But now it feels like it's too dense, just a collection of jokes, and it's tiring to watch. Also, the protagonist is forced to add charm points. I feel like all the pretty girls in the book want to open their legs when they see the male protagonist, which is a bit embarrassing. Also, the aura of mental retardation given to the supporting male characters is too serious, and no one is a rival. Everyone is stupid.                                                                                                                                   but the career line is too sloppily written, please be more serious. Two freshmen who have just entered college, plus a wretched man, have conquered the world. It has been useless for a semester, and without spending much energy, it has been valued at hundreds of millions in one or two months, and has opened three projects. This is too childish, and it is worse than your last book. The other thing is that you have too many female protagonists, and there is no priority. They appear densely in these 100 or so pictures, so harem stories should also be divided into priorities. Just like the emperor's harem, there are queens and concubines. Just write two or three main ones, and embellish the others. You have no priorities and feel that everyone is the heroine. I feel like you didn't even write down what is in the outline, and the New Year's Eve party was written down but not included. Generally speaking, this book can still be read, but there are still many areas that can be improved.

Don't study those books with ranking lists. I am the most beautiful girl in the world, I am a top student, and I come from a wealthy family. Anyone can borrow money from me, starting from 6 million.

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This book is so awesome that you'll be laughing and laughing after reading it, but you don't know what you read.

No wonder Chapter 21 seems incoherent, it was changed. . What song was used? Buying a large flat floor? You earn so much money and still have foreign debts. . This book seems to be a bit more responsive and less urgent.

It's a sniper match at the middle gate, why don't you two fight

I've been following this since I was reborn and didn't want to fall in love. Why does such a good book about a scumbag have so few votes? It shouldn't be. It's not worse than a book written by the best in kindergarten.

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So pretty, the styling, the writing style, there's nothing to say

I will soon be the helmsman. But you entered the palace? The one you read, Liang Fei, is at least finished! Hope to continue updating.

At present, it seems that there are a bit more male supporting roles, which feels a bit strange. It is not very comfortable to watch the male supporting role and the two women. I want to write more interactions with the female protagonist. The supporting characters will become tired after watching too much.

After watching more than 20 photos, I didn't understand, so I asked, is the male protagonist so good at pulling off jokes just because of his humor? The last question is, is it so easy to meet beautiful women without financial resources in urban literature?

My mother was not pregnant when I was doing part-time jobs in my freshman year, and my schoolgirl was in her senior year of high school. Later, his mother got pregnant and gave birth to a younger sister, who had not yet taken the college entrance examination.

The plots of the four female protagonists are too much divided by the other female protagonists. There were 6 female protagonists in the previous version, and the plot was concentrated on the six female protagonists. It is obvious that the six female protagonists each have their own characteristics, and the female supporting characters are interspersed with the plots. This book is not like a heroine, but there are several female supporting characters that need to be drafted.

This book is not a high-quality product, so it is a little unreasonable. I personally feel that the writing is really awesome. The only thing is that the plot is a bit light, but I can still watch it. I think it should be at least five or six thousand. Every big brother's book is like this. Is there any way to survive if I rush into the streets?

I'm still not satisfied after reading it, so I'm looking for vests and other books. There is a shortage of books. Suddenly there was no food and grass available in the city. It feels like with a ban, the entire category is gone. Is there anything like this? There is really no pattern, I really don't want to be reborn, ordinary people turn back, this kind of fairy grass🌿 restores blood

Fortunately, I took a look and found that it was actually a eunuch. What the hell did I order?

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There are too many plots about supporting characters, and I have never seen the use of this character. He has no emotional intelligence. He is a college roommate, and the protagonist introduces his girlfriend to him. To be honest, it is a bit difficult to handle, and the supporting characters all have Shura fields. I don't know what you think.

I have been following the reading and fully subscribed. This month, I will give you 8 monthly tickets. Come on, the author will get more. I look forward to getting the title of fan out of the circle.

The writing is quite good, the plot, plot, character setting and description of the heroine are all very good. The only bad thing is that the author doesn't understand the commercial content at all, and the author has a bunch of female supporting characters to divide the plot of the heroine. In the end, it felt like I had watched it but not watched it at all. I can only say that after watching it, I can only remember a few good qualities of the heroine, and nothing else.

To be honest, describe the heroine. A fujoshi who prefers fugen and writes fan fiction is a bit disgusting. Otherwise, have you ever come across a fujoshi in real life? Personally, I think fujoshi are somewhat perverted at heart. The video they watched was unacceptable. It was accidentally sent to me. I watched it for a few seconds and it made me sick. I may never forget it in my life.

This book always feels weird. It seems like I have read something, but I also seem to have read nothing at all.

Next time, I'll write about a single female lead. A heroine who looks like rice cakes really owes a lot to rice cakes.

Good guy, the heroine is not just a fujoshi. And it's still a cuckold story. Even though she's a lesbian, it's also disgusting. The male protagonist was touched first by the female partner without even touching him.

Why is it over now? I haven't raised enough.

Tell the truth and write less emotional scenes with supporting characters. The audience should be wider.