Marvel's Return of the Inventor

First of all, if I made a mistake or offended someone, please forgive me! I have been reading novels for about 10 years. Although I haven't written it myself. But the taste is rather tricky. Therefore, I will mention the parts of this book that I find difficult to accept. Please pay attention if there is anything wrong. 1. The author should have taken the initiative to blur the concept of country in this book, otherwise it would be difficult to explain too many bugs and contradictions. However, if you deliberately blur the concept without explaining it clearly, it will be very confusing, and it can solve the virus that paralyzed the computers in the city's Internet cafes. And it's fast. No one even noticed. Let's not talk about whether it is a problem with its placement. No one is recruiting this kind of talent? Not normal either. 2. The plot of the school was too embarrassing to be looked at by a highly respected professor. For the same type of technology, you can look at Xueba's black technology system. This one. I'm not promoting books. In fact, among the types of academic masters I see, this one is the most suitable. A truly high-tech talent cannot be circumvented by the country. If nothing else, the subsidies for high-tech talent programs in every city are really scary. It is cheaper to buy a house with a high degree. In itself, a world with superheroes and super criminals is a morbid world. Watching the game can really tell you what kind of world ordinary people are really desperate. 3. The group point. It's really embarrassing to see such a large-scale experiment. The boss of the group is dying, and he discovers that a person's illness has improved thanks to the drug developed by the protagonist. They will definitely come to your door to solicit, and only fools will threaten you, only make requests. The government will definitely step in because this is not a one-man matter. It's a matter for thousands of patients. 3. In order for my classmates to be admitted to college. Selling medicine. This paragraph is a bit poisonous. If nothing else, you are about to take the college entrance examination, and your best friend suddenly gives you a medicine that is said to make you smarter and study better, but it is an earthy medicine made by yourself. Maybe you will try it. But the relationship between the protagonist and the girl is not that bad, and the girl's family in this book is so financially difficult, would she spend hundreds of dollars to buy the protagonist's medicine? Even if it is free, you may not want it.

Hey, I can't stand it anymore. I update one chapter at a time and then stop for a day or two without telling the reason. . . Slipping away

There are too many poisonous points and too many bugs

Come on! Please keep going! It's a good book! I hope there won't be any eunuchs!

Good looking! ! Please give the author more updates. Thank you! !

I would like to give some advice to the author. I have seen more than 40 pictures so far. I think this book is okay (probably I have read too many). It is a good article, but I feel that some of the plots are very childish, such as when building a battle armor, when selling batteries, oh, when people call for artificial intelligence, and when the current lottery is held! ! ! It looks a bit childish and uncomfortable, I hope the author will give it a try＾0＾~

Where does the Zhang family of Zhang Shaoxu come from? My surname is also Zhang. Six people in my family died of the same cancer in three generations. Alas! ! !

One thing is bad, don't write the protagonist as if it doesn't matter. If something happens, you have to deal with the aftermath.

The book itself is very good and the layout is good, but the protagonist is too heroic. I just saw the plane scene. To be honest, the protagonist is quite stupid. Even if he has no weapons, can he still pick up equipment? If I am the protagonist who cares about the life and death of other people, and will punish those who don't do it for themselves, don't imitate the old and American heroism, which is not practical in itself. Of course this is just my personal opinion.

Now I want to talk about the author, he is lazy as hell. Obviously a book that can become a god. Why only update once a day? Ha? ?

What you are looking at is the work, not the author. If you like it, keep chasing it, if you don't like it, throw it away!

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This is the first book that an old bookworm has rewarded. I hope the author can be more steady and stop writing about jumping, let alone eunuchs! Support!

Are we going to have a real-life version of the Battle of New York?

This book looks relaxed and casual, so don't read it if you are looking for extremes. It's not suitable for you.

Can the author post the update time?

Come on, author, I rarely see comfortable books.

In the past, I only knew that reading books was fun, and I thought writing books was easy. It wasn't until I started writing that I realized that this was not an easy task. The first time I used the tipping function, it was because I really wanted to keep writing such good books and never give up. Sometimes I also hope to be encouraged. Since I am not qualified, then I can support authors who I think are qualified! In the future update process, I will support the author based on my own financial strength, and I hope that the author can continue to go further. I believe that every work is the most realistic distillation of the author's thoughts, and this one resonated with me. Come on!

{"NickName":"Qing Gong","UserId":322391568} You are the eunuch's trumpet, right?

The old man from Linshui signed up here. The author would like to express his support to Linshui people~

After Chapter 70, the huge poison is written very well. Why do you want to deliberately create an opponent? Invincible flow, mindless and cool articles are enough to be fun as long as they last. Why write such a story that disgusts readers? Don't pick on me and say I don't have any fandom. I just saw that there are more than 70 chapters in the public and I haven't subscribed yet. The early pacing and plot are pretty good, and the writing is decent. I wonder why the plot goes so wildly after chapter 70?

The pig's feet themselves are pirated Marvel technology, and they don't know how to protect technology leaks. Even if you don't pay attention to this technology, everyone knows how to destroy it. Internet cafes create artificial intelligence…. Poison

At first I thought it was jelly grass, but from the beginning of the Iris Group, the plot began to drift, and the author was on the verge of collapse, frantically testing

The writing is great, come on, author! I'll give you all my pocket money~

The writing is really good, but the development of the main character is too anxious. It's uncomfortable to watch 🤐, and it's not satisfying to watch.

It doesn't look like your first book. Author, I like your rhythm and writing. Give me the title of any book you have written before. I am short on books.

The writing, story, plot, and creativity of this book are all top-notch. However, when I saw the waste paper and the garbage being picked up, I didn't know what to say. A good book is going to sink! Why! What a pity

Passersby came to watch, this book review section is famous, it's too long to read, non-members will be permanently banned xswl

There is such a long plot where the recipe is lost, but it is really not fun at all. It has no other purpose except to disgust the readers. Such a good writing may have to rely on this plot.

The author will be put on the blacklist first and then released when he is 18 years old.