Swallow the Heavens

Can we wear some nice clothes? Every time I see a supporting character looking for trouble because of what he wears, I feel very low-intelligence and embarrassed. The protagonist has no IQ, and the supporting character has no IQ either. Drunk

What are you calling the heavens if you have been living in the same world all this time? I thought it was traveling through all the worlds, rubbish!

A life-soul that devours people's life-souls, how willing it is to use it in a fair and just way.

After the drug test, I feel like the author may have just started writing this novel without even an outline. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

The protagonist's ability setting is pretty good, but the plot is unjustifiable. At least the first eleven chapters are full of clichés. . . It doesn't look like much to a newbie, but it's an old bookworm. . .

Don't they all know how to start with other things? They all think that their losers are different from others, and that they can write with different feelings, but in fact they are all the same. I lost most of it at the beginning. I don't know what the rest of it will be like, but many people gave up after seeing this beginning.

In fact, this book could be renamed "Swallowing Beauty"

Why is the segment of the pig's trotter written down but still lost?

380,000 Words, four fans. . . Brother, do you want to change the book and the outline? . .

Why can't the protagonist be a genius? Who will create genius novels?

Fantasy standard configuration, swallowing, death, life

No wonder no one reads it. I have to say that the writing is so childish and written like a running account...

You'd better finish writing the Ancient Dragon Elephant first. It's too slow to write two books.

Why is this book not updated?