Devouring the Heavens

Can't we at least dress nicely? Every time I see a supporting character causing trouble because of their clothes, I feel it's incredibly stupid and embarrassing. The main character has no brains, and neither do the supporting characters. I'm speechless.

They've been stuck in one world for ages, what's with this "All Heavens" thing?! I thought it meant traversing countless worlds, trash!

After testing the waters, I feel like the author probably started writing this novel without even an outline. I couldn't continue after reading more than ten chapters.

How could a soul that devours human life force so brazenly use its power in a fair and square duel?

The protagonist's abilities are well-developed, but the mindless plot is unacceptable; at least the first eleven chapters are filled with clichéd and tired tropes. New readers might find it acceptable, but seasoned readers...

Don't they all know any other ways to start? They all think they're different from others, that they can write something unique, but they're all pretty much the same. They've already lost half the battle by the start. I don't know how well they write the rest, but many people give up after seeing such a beginning.

Why did the pig's trotter's rank drop while I was writing this?

380,000 Words, four fans... Dude, why don't you change your book and the outline?

Actually, this book could be renamed "Devouring Beauties".

Why is this book no longer being updated?