Gate to Hell

I'd prefer a more mature and sophisticated female lead. 😄

Keep it up! But to be honest, the bugs and logic are a bit lacking. For example, things like parachuting and using guns, which most people don't encounter, often lack descriptions. Things that shouldn't be described, like giving money, are included. Hope to see significant progress already invested Another thing is the update rate; there should be at least two chapters a day. Come on

The PUBG-themed premise in Chapter Two was really good, but it seemed a bit less connected to the game itself. Chapter Three felt like it suddenly slowed down the pace. I won't comment on it since it's unfinished, but the author's writing style seems to be developing; I'm looking forward to seeing it.

It's well written, keep updating!

Come back, it's really well written.