Ghost Sword of Death

After so many years, I finally have a Bleach fanfic with reasonable details and clear logic. Author, please pay attention to your health and be careful not to stab yourself.

Although Bleach has been over for a long time, I still remember Zaragi is still very cool. It's not because Hana is guilty of killing his family and leaving scars, but because she is too weak, so weak that only Zaragi suppresses his own strength to enjoy fighting. Zaraki has always suppressed his own strength to enjoy fighting. Unknowingly, this suppression has become an instinct. Only a life-and-death crisis can allow him to regain his strength.

I found a Death fanfic by accident, the writing is really good.

The Quincy's self-abuse training method reminds me of a family being beaten. . . . .

Many fundamental settings of this book are wrong, and it is indeed "hardcore" on a certain level.

This is the God of Death, not martial arts. There are too many useless abilities. Miscellaneous

The author completely treated Death as a martial arts character, and some of the dialogues in it were awkward, for example (Feizhen, please go and warm a pot of cherry blossom wine while Shi Wei and I fight a few more swords). Also, when writing hot-blooded comics like Bleach, don't write too many political topics. If you read Bleach fan novels, you must have read Bleach. Those who understand the things in it will naturally understand it. However, if the author writes it straightforwardly, it will change the taste.

Dude, this paragraph is a bit too long, I feel like

The connection between the story and the Bleach manga is very abrupt and hard to accept. It would be better to write a novel of another type directly. The timeline feels confusing! The sense of immersion is not strong!

It's not unreasonable, it's very reasonable. It's certainly unreasonable to only pursue one-sidedness.

It's more or less popular, and I'm very happy. I just said that it is impossible for such a good book to be read by no one 😁😁😁😁😁😁

Author, tell me, do you want to go to German orthopedics?

The book is still very good, but why do I feel that the author has become anxious recently? Not stable! The text and plot are impetuous!

Would you like to express that the souls of the gods of death are buried with memories? Memories will slowly disappear as time goes by, and being hit by a truck already belongs to the Kurosaki period. Soul burial cannot travel through time.

Sure enough, it is true. Author, you are definitely the talent that orthopedic hospitals need.

To be honest, it's a bit silly. First of all, after the soul burial is over, you have no memory. Can you still get it back? Then, the ghost path has a specific trajectory. . Can you still release by changing the trajectory?

"Shunpo Garbage" author, you are awesome!

Are you giving up treatment? To be honest, I personally feel very good.

Come on brother dei, this work is great, I look forward to your next work

? ? ? Just saw the news that the book on investing has been completed? ? So the author has entered the palace?

Which family is the Yamamoto family?

Still, it's not enough, I can't keep it up, I can't help it.

I couldn't stand it when I read the second chapter. No ordinary Shinigami could pass the Hundred Corpse Trial except for the official division commander. In the original work, Shiba Haiyan is the vice-captain and cannot defeat a single Achukas; a sixth-level student of the Shinigami Academy is in danger of losing his life in a battle with Xu; the strongest combat team, the 11th Division, only has four or five members who can kill a Kilian together. This is already the combat power in the later stages of the manga. Except for the natural captain, even a civilian genius like Ichimaru Gin cannot defeat a hundred deaths before becoming a god of death, or it is very difficult to say even one. Even Toshiro can only do it with explosive seed.