Swallowing the Starry Sky: Rebirth Liu Ting

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After reading the first few chapters, the text is very fluent, but the plot is nothing outstanding. The name "Luo Feng" appears too many times in the first two chapters. The focus should be on the protagonist, not the protagonist of the original work; secondly, the plot progression in the first few chapters is exactly the same as the original work, but the pace is sped up, so there is nothing interesting. It should have been okay to write like this in the past, but now there are too many Devouring Starry Sky fandoms, and not many people can read it if it is written like this.

At the beginning, I heard others talking about what made Luo Feng unhappy. What I saw here did not introduce the past life or the current life. I was very confused. What kind of emotions did you have when you just traveled through time?