Picked up a Science and Technology City

The author's writing is good and he is very talented. It's a pity that he was jealous of his talents and could not survive the pneumonia.

This book is for beginners➕moderately toxic➕the main character is from a high school student➕there are problems with the author bringing it in. Anyway, old bookworms can't stand it.

The pig's feet are so awesome. If you don't give the Americans a way to survive, let's just start three wars. Anyway, it's just the difference between dying early and waiting to die. During the Cuban Missile Crisis, the United States was very bloody! The pig's feet jump like this without any consequences. The key point is that you don't have the ability to directly defeat the whole world. Just looking for death.

Shennong, who was born in 2015, was poisoned to death in Chapter 31. He was speechless 😭

For the main body of this book, it is considered to be in its infancy. The protagonist is young and does not feel dangerous. Treat……

As a bookworm for several years, I usually rarely comment on books, but this time I really couldn't stand some people! I started reading this book and it was so addictive. I also found a lot of irritating comments in the comments. I just want to say that the author's book is not easy. Let's not mention whether the author is a high school student or not. Even if it is, so what? You are dating female classmates in high school. Why do they write novels in high school to earn some pocket money for themselves? If you have the ability, write it yourself! ! ! ! ! ! Moreover, this book is aimed at urban superpowers. Who said that when you read a book about science and technology, you don't even read the introduction? You don't have any brains! ! ! ! This book is pretty good, at least so far. I hope the author will ignore the gossip and keep writing without being too eunuch. It's not a good book, at least it's too toxic in the early stages, but it's still worth reading, especially after 100 chapters.

Is the author a fan of Xu Song?

A few words for old bookworms. First of all, the logic is poor and the plot and some technology introductions show that the author lacks common sense and theory. However, this is a black science and technology text, so there is no need to dwell on this, so let's just leave it alone. Secondly, there is a big problem with the plot, that is, many things do not have common sense actions and reactions. For example, the plot after the male protagonist uses AI to attack the American emperor can be said to be the idea of ​​a middle school student, with countless poisonous points. Thirdly, the dialogue between characters is not handled well, and many readers will feel stiff. The description of the male protagonist's character is too vague, and it is very unreasonable and very dramatic for a middle school student to be the male protagonist. It is conceivable that in reality, no matter how much high technology a middle school student has experienced, without the corresponding growth process and experience, it is impossible for him to be mature in life and work. I am too lazy to talk about other issues. Although it is a black technology article, the author has made a common mistake, that is, no matter how black technology the article is, your basic things must be acceptable to the readers. There are problems with the settings, and the readers will only feel awkward. High school male protagonist? Have you watched too much Gundam or too many Japanese cartoons about elementary school students saving the world? No matter how dark a science fiction novel is, the best age template for the male protagonist is the age from junior to junior year, other than that, haha. Humans are still humans, and the reactions and common sense they should have must not be violated. There have never been many black science and technology novels that have not handled the basic settings well. Although there are exceptions, does the author think that he is one of the exceptions? The best way is to conceive slowly and write slowly. You can still write about clichéd themes and it depends on your own skills and abilities.

To be honest, the more you look at the back, the better it looks 🌹🤭

Come on, update quickly, put it on the shelves and order it all

Indeed, the more you look at the back, the better it looks.

It was really not good to watch at first, but after the company was opened and the Terminator robot appeared, the plot became smoother!

I read more than 50 pictures and couldn't stand it. There are too many loopholes. The author must be a child, at most 18 years old. He is too ignorant. What the hell is he writing about? Graphene batteries are a market worth 100 billion, and artificial intelligence is a market worth 100 billion. How can you be so ignorant? If you want any of the above two, someone will sell it directly to you for 1 trillion. Any one of hundreds of millions of mobile phones a year can make more than 1 trillion. This is an underestimation. I have to endure so many chapters of yours because I am short of books.

A scumbag who failed the exam in front-end time suddenly came up with all kinds of black technology. Are his parents and friends suspicious? You must know that today is an information society, and it is not like in ancient times that you can fool us by just saying you learned it in a dream or taught it by gods.

Can the author explain what it means to feel very panicked and at the same time feel very calm? I really don't know how to do this technique!

Artificial intelligence has become poisonous. I feel that the author has a bit of an anti-human tendency. He starts blaming the sky and the earth with artificial intelligence, without considering the consequences. If you want to quarrel, please hide yourself. You are afraid that others will not know that it is you, and you still have to ridicule and slap in the face. Especially when you send robots to the United States, you have to kill others, and you have to show up to mock and slap threats. You are afraid that the US government does not know that you are going to kill their capitalists. Even anti-Japanese dramas dare not act like this. Do you know how much pressure this puts on the country? When the world looks at the No. 200 Country, it is actually the five major gangsters. But in the final analysis, there are still three camps. The United States, China, and Russia. Other countries have given up fighting for the top spot. However, since World War II, the military power of each country has been greatly improved. It is no exaggeration to say that the five major gangsters are all It can destroy the world, so this world has minimum rules of the game. You can do whatever you want within the rules of the game, but this blatant one is a bit too much. The country can't protect you. After all, you have broken the law. The country is still a part of this world. Those who violate the rules of the game will be abandoned...

After reading the first few chapters, I didn't feel very good. It was quite awkward to use a 16-year-old scumbag protagonist to write a dark science and technology novel.

I feel like the author may really be a freshman in high school. To be honest, when I first saw the setting of high school students playing black technology, I didn't want to read it. After all, a high school student is far different from black technology. Domestic high school students learn basic knowledge, and only in college will they come into contact with advanced mathematics and theoretical physics. The author also gave the main character The background of the character is a bit of a scientific scumbag. This kind of person develops black technology and knows there is a problem without even thinking about it. He is probably finished before he gets rich. Moreover, the protagonist chooses a battery in the opening technology. He takes out such a big piece of cheese when his own life is not guaranteed. As a book friend said, the protagonist's survival for five chapters depends entirely on the blessing of the author. It doesn't matter if you set the protagonist in the opening to be in college, at least it's more convincing than a high school student, and the technology you choose in the opening is too high-end, or you choose an algorithm that can be sold for money, you can accumulate strength step by step, and you can talk about it.

One chapter persuaded me to quit. I saw the main character, a high school student, paired with a girl. I was really annoyed.

As soon as I saw that the main character was still a little kid, I knew that this kind of scientific writing was not well written and must be very childish.

Is this a senior high school student's work? Let's not talk about how you are doing with batteries, but let's talk about your childish emotional line. The protagonist is poor in studies, not very handsome, and has no unforgettable memories together. Why does my little sister like you? Don't like your neighbor Xiao Ming? Just get a chair and hit the servant for you? Author, please be realistic, no one likes you, and the fifth girl is your girlfriend.

Author, please change it a little bit. As for the patent, you really don't need to give patents credit for black technology. Just let others copy it. If they can copy it, it's their ability.

Chapter 1: Just graduated from junior high school, I silently clicked the cross in the upper right corner

When writing about black technology, if you want to be logically self-consistent, there are two ways: 1. If there is no means to protect yourself similar to nuclear weapons, then package yourself as a super genius with a photographic memory and amazing brainpower. First, let people around you believe that you are really a genius, and then solve a few world-wide problems, and then start to explode black technology. Of course, this requires the author to at least have basic common sense in scientific research, and at least not to make jokes like "high school students prove Goldbach's conjecture" on Zhihu. One second you are an ordinary person, and the next second you come up with world-leading black technology, do you think others are fools? You can't add a supporting character's intelligence-reducing aura like this, right? 2. If there is a means that can destroy anyone who dares to have ill intentions towards you, then there is no need to pretend to hide it, just use black technology openly and openly. For example, in a book I have read before, the protagonist can travel through various worlds, and the things he brings out attract the attention of senior officials, who send national security to investigate him. The system directly threatens the lives of the seven top elders to make the country give up the investigation. Then the two parties had a cordial and friendly conversation and reached a consensus - the good things the protagonist brought out would be sold to the country first, and the country would wipe his butt for big news. In short, if you don't have any means to save your life, just keep a low profile.